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FF:Jaane Tu, Ya Jaane Na Pg12 Pt9 Updated - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey
gr8 parts..
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
thnx a lot guys!!!! mmmmm @yokosona good guess but am afraid i had a diff indea in mind....sumthng hopefully u guys rnt thinking off!
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
This content was originally posted by: nidhieya

thnx a lot guys!!!! mmmmm @yokosona good guess but am afraid i had a diff indea in mind....sumthng hopefully u guys rnt thinking off!

 
Nidheya

 
hmm that is making ur ff more interesting..
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Posted: 15 years ago

poor pia hope her dreams come true fast😃

thie ayaan is a real chipku😆 lovely update👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Jaslove- mmmmm yes Ayaan will succeed in his intentions but then Ranbir wudnt be anle to stand it any longer, cant hide da truth 4rm Kanya and then da truth unravels!!
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
This content was originally posted by: nidhieya

@Jaslove- mmmmm yes Ayaan will succeed in his intentions but then Ranbir wudnt be anle to stand it any longer, cant hide da truth 4rm Kanya and then da truth unravels!!

 
Nidheya

 
now thats wat I'm waiting for😉 update soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
sure i will but the truth will unravel not that soon. u c i update every ff except my kabhie kabhie only once a week.....so hope u understand. will be putting up a contest for punarjanm soon!
 
Nidheya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 7

Kanya is sitting depressed in her room when Ranbir comes her a hug from behind. Kanya is suddenly shaken.

Kanya- Ranbir! You scared me!

Ranbir- Sorryyyyyy! Maaf karo!

Kanya- maaf kiya k?

Ranbir- Good. Kya huwa?

Kanya- Kuch nahin.

Ranbir- C'mon Kanya you are my best friend! I have known you for so long. Chah kar bhi tum mujhse kuch chupa nahin sakti.

Kanya- Okay it's the Ayaan thing khush???

Ranbir- Do you still love him?

Kanya- Patah nahin Ranbi. Just leave me alone now.

Ranbir- Kanya from your face I can make out that you don't want to left alone and that you want to talk.

Kanya- Ranbir stop imagining things! Just go!

Ranbir- Kanya!

Kanya- Ranbir I will slap you if you don't go!

Ranbir- karke dikhawo!

Kanya raises her hand and Ranbir holds it. Suddenly I don't know what happens but Ranbir looses his balance and falls on top of her. There is this 15 min eye lock.

Kanya- Ranbir……….

Ranbir- Mmmmmm.

Kanya- Get off me.

Ranbir- Kyun?

Kanya- What kyun? GET OFF ME NOW!

Suddenly Ranbir snaps out of the passionate moment and is switched back to reality.

Ranbir- Oops sorry!

He gets up.

Kanya- Can you go?

Ranbir- No. Tell me Kanya. I know you want to talk.

Kanya- I don't know Ranbir. I don't know whether I love Ayaan or not.

Ranbir- Of course you do Kanya. I know you do.

Kanya- Yes………………..maybe you are right.

Ranbir- I know that. Now I know you are backing from the rishta coz of Pia.

Kanya- I know.

Ranbir- Why don't you?

Kanya- I cant Ranbir! I cant! I don't want to convince her. She is my daughter. How can I force her into a relationship she doesn't approve of. She…………..

Ranbir- Kanya….Kanya relax. KANYA! I said relax!

Kanya- Ranbir kaise relax karu? Kaise?

Ranbir- Kanya I know you love Pia…..

Kanya- But I have to live for myself too. Yehi kehne waale the naa?

Ranbir- Sort of……

Kanya- I too feel like that! Ranbir I too feel like that! C'mon I have lived so many years of my life in such a situation. I want to live for myself Ranbir. But then I will be being so selfish!

Ranbir- No Kanya you wont be being selfish. Trust me.

Kanya- Ranbir……

Ranbir- You will be giving her a better life. She will finally have a father.

Kanya- She aldready considers you her dad.

Ranbir- WHATTTT?

Kanya- Seriously. She keeps bugging and begging me to marry you. As if that's possible.

Ranbir- Totally. Anyways I will speak to her when she returns from Anju's place okay?

Kanya- Good.

SCENE SHIFTS TO PIA's ROOM

Ranbir is going to explain to Pia.

Pia- Hello giraffe uncle! Why did you call me?

Ranbir- I want to talk to you about your mom.

Pia- Oooooh….Whats up?

Ranbir- Nothing of that sort Pia.

Pia- Oh. Then?

Ranbir- Your mom loves Ayaan.

Pia- But…..

Ranbir (firmly)- Bo buts. Listen to me.

Pia- K.

Ranbir- And she really wants to marry him.

Pia- oh.

Ranbir- Please take this properly and support your mom. She is also doing it for you. She wants you to have a father.

Pia- But--

Ranbir- And I am not going to marry her. So stop considering me your father. Ayaan is a good man. He will keep you two very happy.

Pia- K.

Ranbir- All these years Kanya has lived for you. Now let her live for herself.

Pia- Whtevr.

Ranbir- No. You are going to go to her and tell her sorry for that days behaviour and tell her to marry him. She is going to be happy. She deserves it. Trust me. After what all she has gone through.

Pia- I will apologise right away.

Ranbir- Good. Good girl.

Pia- I will miss you uncle.

Ranbir- Kyun?

Pia- When mama gets married.

Ranbir- I will miss you a lot too.

Pia runs to Kanya while Ranbir slowly wipes off his tears.

IN KANYA's ROOM

Pia- Mom! Mom!

Kanya- Hey Pia pipes!

Pia- Mom you can….

Kanya- I can what?

Pia- marry Ayaan papa.

Kanya- Ayaan papa? Wow that's sweet!

Pia- Go tell him yes.

Kanya- Thank you pipes!

Pia- Its nothing mom!

Kanya goes to call Ayaan and the part ends. See it had a whole epi. The three convos were 3 parts of an epi. Hope you all liked it. I want 10 comments! Not please update but what you liked about it/ which convo wuz best nd why!!!!

END OF PART 7

NIDHEYA

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Posted: 15 years ago
AUTHORS NOTE: I had mentioned in the previous update that Ayaan would stalk Kanya but I had a change of mind. This is what happens!
 
Nidheya
 
And this twist goes on!
 
Nidheya