A Quiet Confession RP FC

Posted: 15 years ago
 


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Sir she called softly as they were dancing together that evening when he was getting engaged to Dr.Ritu.
 
 
 

'Yes?'

'Will you promise me something else'?'

He looked at her with intense affection shielded in the guise of pretended attentiveness , as if eager to listen to her request.

 
 

In truth, his mind was in a state of bliss'here he was holding her in his arms, swaying to the sound of soft, ballroom music'she sooo close, he content for  he knew

 
 
she definitely admired  and respected him  as she just had made him promise that no matter what ,he'd be her mentor in life , not just in Kma' but always, for life' never allowing her to falter ' in the battlefield nor  through the rest her  of life away from the field'..' Those were her words.

He'd just promised he will..yet here she is wanting something more??

But what could possibly be more?? He wondered'I'd give my whole life should she but ask!...

Mind lost in dreams, eyes  focused in quiet  admiration on  her face'he had a hard time wishing this was for real, knowing it wasn't. Oh how he wanted this to have been a dance she and him were involved in to round off their own engagement ceremony than what it was now'

He shifted his eyes from her and turned to look where Dr.Mishra was. Eyes panning the hall, he saw her near the wall, leaning, wine glass in hand, her eyes , sharp as a hawk's !  fixed on him and her in his arms'.. ' What is She thinking???' he thought quickly.

She looked around too, but unmindful, called  him again 'sir?'

 

'Yes Nain..cadet..? Sorry'I  was a littte distracted''

'Doesn't matter sir. Will you  answer now, or should I repeat my question?'

She was  determined and strong.!

He loved that about her'no feigned feminine helplessness or hesitancy. No melodramatic outpourings to arouse sympathy, no plans ever   to deceive anyone for her  purposes. He knew she was a shy, simple , down- to earth girl, girlish like all girls 'it was personal tragedy and pain that had made her tough.

And in her toughness, she was honest and sensible'.recklesss sometimes but not conniving and manipulative like how some women were if they wanted to  discover something'

He forced his mind to step on track again'

'Am luckily still alert..cadet'you wated me to promise 'something else' right?Tell me''

'You won't mind?'

'Huh'am sure I won't but I 'd lke to hear the request..please.'

 

Would he mind??? My  heart, life is yours Naina, you want anything more?? Of course he did not say that!

 

'Sir', she began, 'what I'm about to ask you now is to remain a secret'in any case I'm sure you will never breathe a word about this to anyone till when needed..'

'What is it Naina..?'

'Sir, once this whole mission is over, this pretense called off and '   lowering her voice, lifting her  lovely face to get closer to his ear   'once Dr.Mishra is framed and caught and all is over and done with'you must come back to Kma ..'

 

He stopped her with a quick ' shh'  and said 'I am not going away' he whispered back ..am going to be right here while trapping her and all..and I promise I will be here when Naveen's name is cleared. I will ensure you do the honours and get to hang Naveen's photo in the wall of fame' promise'no need to ask cadet'don't worry' let me just see this secret  mission  through'okay' he spoke consolingly!

'Okay, but that was not what I wanted to ask', she replied

'Oh'mmm'okay'what is it then?'

'Will you come back?'

Quizzical, he just stared at her'        'I don't understand..'

Will you come back'sir? '.to ' to ' ME?'

 

The soft music was soothing, the hall lit by many  aromatic candles filled the air with pleasing fragrance, the bright yet soft light made believe that everything was dim and misty  but the sparkle in her eyes, the steadfastness of her gaze and the nervousness and hope  in her voice which made her lips quiver..while they were breaking into a shy , soft smile all took his breath away'Her question made his heart do a somersault!!  What did she mean??

'Naina..I'don't understand''.?' He managed to ask.

 

'Yes, sir you do. Of course you do, You do understand'why should you think that it is only you who is consumed by your affection and'l l'l'l'love for me? I am too''''And so , letting go of whatever shyness or modesty I have or atleast should display now'I' m asking you for I know you will live through this lifetime pining for me but never  dare to tell me the truth 'that you love me and want me to be yours , something which is  revealed crystal clear in your eyes. Your guilt will never allow this sir..  I know but I discerned this long ago. ..So , now tell me 'yes or no? And do you promise'or no?'

 

The ending notes of the music had long sounded and  was  reaching the close'soon they would  detach and move away'the dance was almost completed'

He wasn't dancing at all'she was actually making him just  move to the music'his shock wasn't a light one'he for all his alertness and soldier instincts for quick recovery couldn't come back to his senses '

'Sir'please don't just gaze at me in such shock'there are others watching'.you know'but' I will  not  let you leave my hand unless you tell me yes or no  and till you promise..'

No answer.

'Sir , if you don't love me then say so'I will never ever mention this again, but if yes, and  I  know it is , please don't let go without promising please..'

There was a loud applause. While she was talking the dance had drawn to a close'there had been other couples dancing as well joining in later though when they began it was just the two of them'all of them detached and clapped. She glanced around quickly'luckily no one was paying attention  to them'.. they were all doing the final courtesy of the dance'she quickly turned and looked enquiringly at him

 

He was still sooo quiet, unmoved by both her and the  happenings around them.

What was he thinking?

Scared, she attempted to be free from his hold , his hand was still holding her gently..

'Sir''tears welled up in her eyes'she spoke quickly taking full advantage of the loud applause and the general noise of the banter and celebration'

'I know neither you nor I should be involved in this clandestine affair'yet I can't help it for if I don't tell you , you never will'and what if  Dr.Ritu or anyone else likes and wants you when I've been wanting you for soo long'that is why I made this request'if you are angry, let me go now'I'll g and never rake this up again..never.

And be rest assured, irrespective of whether your answer is yes or no that I will never do anything that will jeopardize your career 'never sir'I will wait and wait ..'

No answer.

'Sir'?'

By now many eyes were beginning   to look their way'

She again looked around and turned her attention to him helplessly'

He let her go , bowed down to her, signaling   formal completion of the dance.

The prying eyes were fooled'they were assured Capt.Rajveer was just waiting to properly end the dance while his cadet kept speaking'. reassured of no sparks flying  between the two, they moved away..

She was clueless'he turned  to go away but didn't.  Came closer, took her right palm and placing it on his own simply said, '  My answers:  Yes,  and I promise', a gentleman's promise!'.

 

An orderly appeared just then, quickly telling him that Colonel Chandra was waiting to see him in his room.

He nodded and said to him 'I'll be there right away'.

 
 
Looked at her, one long, loving, relieved gaze and with a quick wink  (meant only for her eyes to see!) walked away to his room , to matters of his mission.



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"Kaanch ko chahat thi pathar pane ki,
Ek pal mein fir tut kar bikhar jane ki,
Chahat bas itni thi us diwane ki,
Apne hazaar tukde mein.....
 Uski hazaar tasveer sajane ki......."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Edited by riyaa_1985 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
 
 Link to the FCs

Numbered FCs ( June - August 2007) 

 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=674368&T PN=1

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=680494&T PN=1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=689065&T PN=1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=692528&T PN=1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=700534&T PN=1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=706093&T PN=1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=710762&T PN=1
 
 
 
Named FCs ( September - October 2007)

Silent Nest
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=723393&T PN=1
Dream World
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=727633&T PN=1
Behzubaan Ehsas
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=733517&T PN=1
Shekhawats Palace
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=738240&T PN=1
Mauritian Rendevouz
Ankahe  Jazbaat
 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=746735&T PN=1
Romance  Redefined
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=751281&T PN=1
Candles and Cakes
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=755019&T PN=1
Birthday Bash
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=761069&T PN=1
Aa Ja Naachle
Karvachauth
Halloween Bash
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=774434&T %20PN=1

 Silver Jubilee FC
Eternal Journey


November - December 2007

FireWorks
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=788722&T PN=1
Dream Land
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=794245&T PN=148#13470791
Laughter & Fun
Flowers n Rose
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=806731&T PN=1
Heaven & Earth
Merry Christmas


January - May 2008

A new beginning....
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=826132&T PN=1
Delights of Winter
Home Coming
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=837442&T PN=1

Dedicated Soldiers
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=847484&T PN=1

Jhoom Barabar

Bahon ki Darmiyan...V'day spl
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=861533&T PN=1
Sacred love
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=868308&T PN=1

To Sir With Love
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=878080&T PN=1

Life Begins At 40
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=886811&T PN=1&#15048301

Holi Hai
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=894539&T PN=1
The Better half

Red
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=909838&T PN=1

Waiting for love

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=918910&T PN=1
  
mmm... this IS it
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/930118
 
"Realization"
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=940229&T PN=1 
 
Serendipity
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=946513&T PN=1
 
Soar like an eagle, Rajeev


( A summary of  FCs 25-48)
Reminisces
 
 

  πŸ₯³  Golden Jubilee FC πŸ₯³ 
 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=963716&T PN=1

 
 June 2008 -
 
Appleseed mission FC
 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=975695&TPN=1
                                                     
      Will she , Will not she
      
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=983578&TPN=1   

"Where poetry rules"
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=996982&TPN=150

 Want you in my arms  
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1007484&TPN=1
 
Rules of  5 ( Priyanka Birthday Bash)
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1015019&TPN=1

 Love in Candlelight 

September Waltz

 

Edited by sunaina02 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago

 
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Edited by sunaina02 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago

Links to all FFs on RN

 

Right Left Right

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/728857

 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/667492

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/675595

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/620042

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/650036

https://forum.leftrightleft.in/index.php?topic=1501.0

https://forum.leftrightleft.in/index.php?topic=1550.0 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/655305

https://forum.leftrightleft.in/index.php?topic=1270.0 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/681981 

https://forum.leftrightleft.in/index.php?topic=1386.0 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/590228

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/683224 

https://forum.leftrightleft.in/index.php?topic=315.0 

https://forum.leftrightleft.in/index.php?topic=162.0 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/603223

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/582658


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/665353

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/647580

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/655225


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10 short stories based on RP or RN will be made the theme of 10 fanclubs.

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New Promo (Point 1857)

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Ek Pal Vmix

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=690274

RN scene 26th July

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=687153

Red saree promo

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RN clip 16 th July

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Bandage scene

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=671891

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Edited by riyaa_1985 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
Congratulations everyone for the 58th RPFC πŸ‘


Nallis dear, thts a lovely fic 😊 Thx a ton

our saviour :)


Riyaa, great work :)


Posted: 15 years ago
Congratulations for the Opening of the 58th RP FC!!!!
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘


Nallis the fic is beautiful!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ŠLovely!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
 
 
Well done Riya!!!!
 
 
 
 
 
Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks a lot!!But a very special thanks to Nallis for the fic!!
Didn't get the time to read though.πŸ˜†
Thanks Ashi and Su di.
Edited by riyaa_1985 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
Now I will leave rest of the editing will be done tomorrow.
Ok!!
Good night to all of u.
Posted: 15 years ago
Nallis a wonderful piece of imagination. Wish LRL had gone your way 😍
Posted: 15 years ago
Absolutely Su

what  BEAUTIFUL fic

its sad some people do not know the meaning of   "Confession"

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