This content was originally posted by: saridenahi priya....... hiiii soumya
thks for the pm dear.....no need...dear...ur always welcome.nice part yaar....thanxbut it was little bit confusingwhen did amar die??u skiped one yearupdate soooooooooooooooooonand plzzzzzz clear my confusion....ab sare mystery ko itni jaldi to khatam nahin kar sakti hoon na...dear!!!! thoda wait to kar hi sakti ho....!!!!luv soumya
This content was originally posted by: hinal60update was amazing ......Thanx Hinal...!!
but yeh amar ka kya suspense ho gaya. matlab ke death he kar di. haan....ab is suspence ko clear hone main thoda waqt to lagega.well its good ab RN ki line clear hai.......haan...woh to hai😉Thank u so much dear.😊
This content was originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Hello Priya too good update👏 n full of commedy of Alekh....Thanx a lot dear.
Apun ko nahi pata tha ki Alekh ji itne sharati hain vow kya baat hai😉?Ab vo Neelu se milne jaa raha hai that's g8.😊haan...neelu prob. main jo hai!!!!!
Ye Ali bhi na humesha ek dum tuff bana rehta hai baap re thoda hassi mazak bhi nahi kar sakta hai.ab kya kare...yaar use aisa hi charcter main rahna pasand hai...
Amar kitna kameena tha apni bacchi ko maar daalna chahta tha accha hi hua ki mar gaya vo.😡haan...woh us bachhi se nafrat to karta tha...kyoun??? yeh tumhe agle part main pata chal jayega.
Naina ne apni flower shop khol li good.😛actually hua...yun..k naina ne mujh se pucha tha k woh apne flower shop ka kya naam degi??? to maine use apne ek dear friend ka screen name bata diya.😆
Hope Raj jaldi hi Naina se mile.😊...bhagwan kare teri dua jaldi se kabul ho jaye.
update soon.
Hey i am a new member here.
just loved the concept of ur fic.
update soon.
This content was originally posted by: prerna1thst was good but bit confusing
....confuse mat ho yaar....dhire dhire sab main se parda uthega...trust...me😊u skipped a year....kyoun ki main kahani k present aur past ko ek sath likhne wali hoon .i hate Amar when he said He will kill Palak ...haan....is k piche bhi ek chota sa reason hai.hope Raj aur Naina ki mulaakat jaldi ho......me too.plz continue soon
This content was originally posted by: varshita
I liked this update so much.😊....thanx varshita
accha hua Amar ki maut ho gayi😡, varna zinda hota to Naina ko abhi tak jeene na deta nahi palak ko.haan...woh to hai.
Alekh is really funny😆.....haan...akhir bhai kis ka hai.😆
us ko us ki Neelu mil gayi nice.....haan...ab neelu se to us ko milna hi tha na...😉😉update soon.
This content was originally posted by: vvdnHey Hii dear,...hiiii Namita
Amazing update.......👏thanx...dear.
poor Naina she bear sooo much.Amar is really a disgusting guy😡😡😡
apni khud ki beti ke jaan ke piche pada hai..ya i said thahaan..is k piche ek chota sa reason hai
what decision Naina made😕 now Amar is dead much relife to Naina but it's murder n no one findout about it's happening🤢🤢🤢
it's all mysterious...........waqt k sath sath sare mysteries main se parda uthega.waise m now looking forward when Raj is going to meet her first time,so update dear........yeah..... i m also eager to know what happen in that time & im really try to ud soon.Thank u so much dear.
This content was originally posted by: watch rajeevud plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz aur iss baar raj aur naina ko milaao yaar
This content was originally posted by: riyaa_1985Hello!! Priya!!.....Hiiii Riya!!
Thanks a lot for the pm dear!! u r most welcome dear.
Aaj kal kuch zyada hi busy rehti hoon to IF visit karne ka
mauka hi nahi milta...koi baat nahin....tumhe jab bhi waqt mile tab comment kar dena.
waise the story seems to be very different.....
Very nice....specially loved the way you have described the
relationship between a mother and her daughter...
well....Raj's part was definitely very hilarious....actually main Raj ko hamesha ek comic role main dekhna chahti thi. to isliye use maine use is character main rakha hua hai.
Finally.....loved both the updates...thanx.....dear.
and I am very sorry for the delay.....kya...yaar!!! bas karo kitna sorry bologi.
I hope u understand dear.....of course....dear !!!!
Very well written....Thanx dear.....
Take care.
Continue soon...
love
Riya.
This content was originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Thanx....shaina!
Amar ko ab Naina ka diamond set chahiye!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
Naina jab kehti hai usne woh Pallo ke liye rakha hai toh kehta hai uski apahij beti se shaadi kaun karega!!!! He is so rude!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡haan...woh nafrat jo karta hai naina aur paloo se.
Amar Palak ko marne ki dhamki deta hai toh woh darr ke set de deti hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Amar is a beast!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
Naina Palak ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai aur usne decide kar li hai ke usse kya karna hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊Woh karegi kya??😕 😕 😕 😕
Ek saal ho gaya aur Pooja aur Aalekh police mein hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊
Pooja hamesha pareshan rehti hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛No wonder Aalekh calls her Miss.Pareshan aur kitna tease kar raha hai usse!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆actually real Alekh to hamesha se serious hi rahta tha. isiliye main use yahaan jara comic character main dal rahi hoon.
Pooja ki har baat pe mazak kar raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He is too funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Aalekh Pooja ko bolne ki nahi deta!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊Usne Neelu ka naam liya toh Aalekh directly shaadi pe pahuch gaya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣haan...use achha jo lagta hai pooja ko pareshan karna.
Pooja ne flat mein milne ko kaha toh Aalekh ne baat ko kaha pahucha di!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛He is just impossible!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Aalekh is teasing Pooja!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉
Amar ke role mein Vikas bilkul fit baithta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊
Amar ka murder ek saal pehle ho gaya tha!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!! Uska yehi anjaam hona chahiye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊haan...woh to hai. lekin us ka murder mystry abhi baki hai...dear!!! kaise hua...aur kyoun hua????
Kahi Naina ne hi toh Palak ko bachane ke liye Amar ka khoon nahi kiya hai??😔 😔 😔 😔ab yeh to kahane k agle parts hi batayenge.
Raj sone ka natak kar raha tha aur Amitji ko bola ke woh sapne mein barmaala dalne hi waala tha!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆He is too much!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣haan..Raj ko comic character main maine kabhi nahin dekha ....isiliye main yahan par us ka character thoda aisa banaya hua hai.
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