"Ankahey Rishtey" - AR FF(The End pg113) 11/07/09

Posted: 15 years ago




THANK YOU NEHA aka Neha_luvPRB FOR THIS WONDERFUL POSTER..

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Hello friends..

This is my fanfic 'Ankahey Rishtey'.. it is about our old intern gang as senior doctors building new relations with their juniors and their life after all of them are married..

The main couple in focus is AR nd their son ridhaan AND radhika & karan (new interns)..

It is about how AR win Shashank's acceptence to their marriage after six yrs. Of their marriage.. YES , OUR VERY OWN 'AR' IN THIS FF MARRIED AGAINST SHASHANK'S WILL..

New interns consists of : Radhika, Karan, Aakansha, Akshay nd Aditya..

The basic theme here is about how love relations bond better than blood relations..

That's why it is called 'Ankahey Rishtey'..

 
WARNING : GUYS I POST MY FFS ONLY AT INDIA FORUMS.. IF ANYONE WANTS TO SHARE AT SOME OTHER FORUM ASWELL DO INFORM ME BEFORE DOING THAT OR ELSE I'LL FEEL BAD CONSIDERING IT TO BE PLAGAIRSM..
 
TO MY READERS : PLEASE... IF YOU SEE MY FFS POSTED ANYWHERE ELSE BE LOYAL AND LET ME KNOW..

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Mrs. Ridhhima Armaan Mallik [Shilpa] : married to armaan for 5yrs. now .. Mother of a 2 and a half yr. old son Ridhaan. She is a physician, new incharge for the upcoming interns..

 

Mr. Armaan Mallik : for 5yrs. he's been married to his love, ridhhima.. Proud father of a 2 and a half yr. old son Ridhaan. He is a Neurosurgeon and also helps ridhhima in managing interns..

 

Ridhaan Mallik : A sweet , caring 2 and a half yr. old boy, with deep green eyes like his mother and a  naughty yet charming smile of his father.. he has all his mannerisms lik ridhhima yet he is a bit mischievious like his daddy' He is referred to as 'Shonu' by his mom and 'Buddy' is what his dad calls him..

 

Mrs. Anjali Joshi :she is married to atul for 3yrs. now.. she has a cute bubbly daughter of 8months ('NAINA').. she is a Heart Surgeon now..

 

Mr. Atul Joshi : happily married to his Anjali for 3 yrs. and is is a father of his cute princess 'naina'.. he is a Child Specialist..

 

Mrs. Muskaan Grewal : She is married to Rahul for 6yrs' mother of a 4yr. old son 'Dhairya'.. She is a Gynaecologist..

 

Mr. Rahul Grewal : Married to muskaan for 6rs now, still he has to run sometimes to save his life wen his wife is mad at him.😆.. he is a father of 4yr. old son.. He is considered the best Surgeon in Sanjeevni after Dr. Shubhankar..

 

Dhairya Grewal : He is a splitting image of his mother but is much more calm in nature as compared to muskaan' He has inherited his mannerisms from rahul.. He is a gud friend of Ridhaan too..

 

Dr. Shubhankar : Acting head of Sanjeevni, since Dr. Shashank retiered.. Best surgeon in the country. Finally confessed and married Kirti..😳.. Father of 2 cute daughters : 13y. old Navnita and 6yr. old Suhana'

 

Dr Kirti : married to Shubhankar for 8yrs. now.. she is now the head of Children's ward, Child Specialist.. Still instructs our old star intern gang..

 

Dr. Shashank Gupta : Ex-Head of Sanjeevni.. Taken over the charge of Lonavla Orphanage with his wife padma.. He is unhappy with Ar's marriage and has still not accepted them..

But still secretly longs to be with Ridhaan, couldn't resist the charm of that lil angel..

 

 

P.S.1: Shashank and Padma still visit mumbai once a month to their daughters.. padma is happy with AR's marriage nd meets them wenever in mumbai..

 

P.S.2: Bua of the lonavla orphanage is still there, to handle the kids wen shashank ad padma are in mumbai..

 

** NEW INTERN GANG**

 

Radhika Verma: 21yr. old sweet girl wid angelic presence.. Cares for every1 around.. Has a smile worth dying for.. Longs for a family as she has never felt true love coz she is an orphan and lived all alone..

 

Karan Shergill: Rich, handsome dude of 22yrs.. He has dat Milion Dollar Smile wid perfect body.. Searching for his perfect love angel.. Sometime he is rude , due to his past experience. (will be told in the story later)

 

Aakansha Sharma: Rich, hot girl with loads of  attitude.. LOVE is just a word for her.. To her life is chilling out with friends and having a good carrer..

 

Jai Gupta: Sweet, innocent boy who is extra caring for his loved ones.. he can bring smile on any1's face with his cute nd sometimes silly talks.. he has a healthy family background..

 

Aditya Kapoor: Handsome man, has manners wen talking to girls.. He is a flirt.. Aspires to be Neurosurgeon..


**INDEX FOR MY FF**


Part 1 - pg 1&2
Part 2 - pg 3&4
Part 3 - pg 6
Part 4 a - pg 7
Part 4 b - pg 9
Part 5a - pg 10
Part 5b - pg 12
Part 6a - pg 14
Part 6b - pg 16
Part 7   - pg 17

Part 8   - pg 19
Part 9   - pg 22
Part 10 - pg 24
Part 11 & 12 - pg 27
Part 13 - pg 33
Part 14 - pg 37
Part 15 - pg 42
Part 16 - pg 46
Part 17 - pg 49
Part 18 - pg 53
Part 19 - pg 58
Part 20 - pg 62
Part 21 - pg 67
Part 22 - pg 72
Part 23 - pg  77
Part 24 - pg  83

Part 25 - pg 92

Part 26 - pg  97
Part 27 - pg  102
Part 28 - pg  108

LAST PART - pg  113



Edited by frnd.of.frndz - 13 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
WOW!!! interesting  introduction dear...waiting for the main story to start now.... ur first post itself is so interesting.. keep going dear...
Posted: 15 years ago
seems too b intesrting..doo continue
Posted: 15 years ago
WOW!!! interesting  introduction dear...waiting for the main story to start now.... ur first post itself is so interesting.. keep going dear...

Posted: 15 years ago

Thank you guys for boosting my confidence.. i know i'm not perfectbut i'll try my level best not to bore you.. here's the first part..


Part 1

It is a BIG day for our old star intern gang.. From today onwards they'll not be interns or juniors, from today they'll be recognized as the Senior Doctors of Sanjeevni Hospital..

They're now specialists in their particular fields which they ever desired for..

 

In the Conference Room :

(Dr Kirti ' K and Dr. Shubhankar 'S)

 

K: Congratulations doctors..! All of you here have always been my family to me.. And today you've all made me proud and I hope you keep up gud work in future too.. Aaj main khush hoon ki mere parivaar ka har ek member apni life mein bohot khush aur successful hai..

The upcoming new intern batch will learn from you.. will idolise you.. So please, apne behaviour ka khayal rakhiyega aap log.. Especially Dr. Armaan aur Dr. Rahul , aapke col. Aur internship ke din khatam hue so please take your work more seriously now..

and once again congratulation to all of you..

 

Sh: Congratulations friends.. Aapko saari instructions to Dr. Kirti de hi chuki hain.. main bas aapko yeh kehna chata Kal aap sab time pe report karenge.. kal ki meeting mein aap sab ko aapke special work areas assign kiye jayenge.. Aur haan aaj aap logon ko half day leave di jaa rahi hai.. So have fun and That'll be all Doctors..

 

All: thank you sir .. thank you mam'

 

*scene change*

In Canteen : (1pm)

 

Mu: Guys aaj kitne dino baad hitler ne apni marzi se off diya hai.. Chalo na apni leave aur apni success dono celebrate karte hain..

A: Kya baat hai muskaan.. Iss rahool k saath rehke bhi tujhe itna achha idea ayaa..(grinning)

Ra: Oye Armaan saare time bakwas na kiyakar.. varna..

A: varna.. varna kya rahool..(acting) OMG basket mujhe Dr. Rahool se bohot darr lag raha hai.. BACHAO'

R: shut up armaan.. Sorry rahul..

An: cut it out you guys.. Hitler ki warning bhool gaye..

At: abe haan yar anjali bilkul theek keh rahi hai.. sudhar jao tum dono ab juniors ke saamne hitler class legi tumhari..

Mu: oye tumlog bore matt karo yaar.. ye batao ki aaj karna kya hai..

Ra: Kyun na Sea Rock (pub & disco) chalein..

R: Rahul hum to chal lenge lekin Ridhaan, Dhairya aur naina ka kya..

At: haan yaar naina ki babysitter 6baje tak chali jati hai aur ridhaan aur dhairya bhi 2 baje tak apne play school se free ho jayenge..

A: arre yaar champ chill..(patting himself) Main hoon na "the great armaan mallik" ke paas har problem ka solution hai..

An: Stop praising urself and please will u be kind enough to share ur great idea with us..

A:Ofcourse anji.. See we wanna party right nd we can't leave kids alone too.. so why don't you guys come to our place.. we'll have our kind of celebration and kids can have their fun time too.. (raising eyebrows).. wat say'

At: waah mere bhai.. idea to achha hai par..(cuttin in b/w)

A: Par gaya tere sar mein.. mujhe kuch nai sunna (getting up, holding rids' hand).. humeinabhi ridhaan ko bhi pick karna hai so see you guys at 5..

R; bye guys..c ya..

All:bye..okk shaam ko milte hain..

All go back home nd get ready for the evening..


Edited by frnd.of.frndz - 14 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear... its a good start.. liked it alot... plz continue soon..
Posted: 15 years ago
hey wow yaar realy nce concept nd intrestng tooooo would lv 2 read yaar wow all r mrried nd hv childrns also grt yaar nd shanky didn't  acceptd thm ohhhh bt thir koshish goi on hahaha
cont sooooon
luv yachna
Posted: 15 years ago
Conitnue soon and plz pm me
Posted: 15 years ago
superbbbbbbbbbb
pls pm me when u'll update next part
Posted: 15 years ago

Its 4 in the evening.. and it was raining..

At Mallik residence.. It's a beautiful BIG bunglow wid a Lawn in front having colourful flowers nd a swing..

In AR's room:

R: armaan maine tumhare kapde nikal ke bed pe rakh diye hain tum ready ho jao.. okk..

 

As she passed him he pulled her by her wrist nd now she was sitting in his lap..he was nuzzling in her hair nd neck..

 

R: armaan kya hai.. chodo mujhe.. mujhe abhi ridhaan ko bhi ready karna hai..

A: usse baad mein ready karlena.. pehle mujhe tumhe achhe se congrats to karne do for the success.. (leaning in to kiss her)

R: (timidly) armaan.. ridhaan yahi kahi hoga.. chodo..

A: (naughtily) sochlo.. abhi ya phir shaam ko jab sab honge tab..

R: (getting up from his lap) armaan tum pagal hogaye ho.. ab jaldi se ready hojao.. ridhaan ko ready karke mujhe khud bhi ready hona hai..

 

As she left the room, she went to look for ridhaan.. In his room, he was not there..

R: ridhaann..

In the dinning hall, kitchen..

R: ridhaan.. Shonu kaha ho aap'

In the drawing room..

He was nowhere.. then as she headed towards the lawn there she saw her life, her son, playing with waterdroplets , dancing in rain, jumping in water puddles.. A smile escaped her lips.. As she came out..

R: Shonu andar aao.. aapki tabiyat kaharaab ho jayegi, u r all wet..

Ri: (looking at his mom sweetly) mamma aap bhi bahar aao na.. mujhe aapke saath khelna hai..

R: nai shonu.. mamma bahar nai aarahi hai aap andar aarahe ho.. chalo ab jaldi yahan aao.. nahi thandi lag jayegi aapko baby..

Ri: (very cutely) mammaaa plzzzz.. thodi der aap bhi aao na.. phir main pakka gud boy ki tarah andar chalunga...plomishh... plzzzz na mammaaaaaa'.

 

Ridhhima smiled to herself and wondered how her son always manages to convice her on the most impossible acts of hers.. She herself feels lik a 2 and a half yr. old kid wen ridhaan is around' She has made it a point to come back home everyday before ridhaan gets back from school since the day he has been admitted in the school'

Everyday they play video games.. and have sweet chit-chat for hours nd hours..

She went a head nd joined her "shonu" in rain.. She picked him in her arms twirled him around as he giggled loudly.. both were having a gr8 time forgetting the world around..

 

On the otherhand in Rahul's car:

Ra: abbe yar muskaan teri ladayi ke chakkar mein main ek impt. Case file lana bhool gaya' ridhhima ne subah hi mujhe remind karaya thha..

Mu: oye kankhajure tujhe ab yaad aaya hai jab hum unke ghar bas 5 min. Mein pohochne hi waale hain.. pehle yaad ataa to vapas jaake le aate na.. aur dekh ab baarish bhi kitni ho rahi hai...

Ra: oye zyada bakwaas na kari mere naal... ab chup karke baith main usse phone karke poochta hoon ki file usse aaj hi chahiye kya.. to phir main tujhe drop karke file le aaunga..

 

He dials armaan's no.

*TRING TRING*

A: yes Dr. Rahool'.

Ra: armaan yar ridhhima hai kya vahan..?

A; nahi vo ridhaan k saath hai kyun kuch kaam hai'

Ra: haan yaar usse koi case file chahiye thhi aur vo ghar pe hi reh gayi.. hum raaste mein hain.. so if its urgent then i'll get it just now otherwise kal sanjeevni mein le aaunga..

A: Hmmm.. wait main usse poochta hoon'.

 

Now same scene goes with armaan' he is searching for ridhhima in every room but no sign of her.. as he reached the drawing room saw the most beautiful sight ever'

Ridhhima and ridhaan were playing in rain ridhhima's suit clunged to her body as she was completely drenched' she was making cute baby faces and her eyes were full of love as she saw ridhaan so happy' She herself looked so innocent.. he was loving her more with every passing minute'

Armaan knew both ridhhima nd ridhaan were waterbabies.. they loved rain like anything..

He was mesmerised by her beauty yet again and completely forgot about rahul's call..

 

On the otherhand rahul was screaming and shouting on the phone but in vain.. so he finally decided to go to their house.. with in a few mins. Rahul's car entered the mallik house's driveway' they came out and stood beside armaan who was standing lik a statue staring at ridhhima and his cellphone in his hand'

Rahul came closer to his and shouted in his ear..

Ra: abbe saale majnu.. kitni der se bula raha hun behra hogaya hai kya..

 

Hearing a suuden voice armaan fell on ground , and Rahul and muskaan ran into fits of laughter.. it was then that ridhhima and ridhaan noticed them.. ridhhima kind of figured out what happened just now and blushed while ridhaan said

Ri: (giggling) mamma buddy to gir gaye..

R: ( still blushing) kuch nai hua aapke budy ko shonu.. ab chalo gud boy ki tarah andar chalo..

Ri: (to armaan) buddy aap thhek ho na..?

A: (still a bit embaressed) (ruffling ridhaan's hair) yes buddy I'm fine.. ab aap jaldi mamma ke saath jaake change karlo varna mere buddy ko thandi lag jayegi..

 
With a bit of embarressment he invited muskaan and rahul in , while ridhhima nd ridhaan went to change..

PRECAP: COMING UP NEXT WILL BE PARTY MORE OF AR , RM ND AA ROMANCE ND OFCOURSE MY FAV. RIDHAAN'S CUTENESS..

guys dats it for today.. i'll update alternate days...
this was a big mallik family scene.. C YA ON SATURDAY..


Edited by frnd.of.frndz - 14 years ago

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