FF Frendship and Love.

Here's a new FF.

Intro:

In a hospital two persons were standing outside a room.The girl was crying and the boy was telling her continously not to cry that everything will be fine.The girl sat down on a chair.

Girl:It's all my fault.(crying)
Boy:It's not your fault it's just destiny.
Girl:It's my fault why did I let him go,why???
Boy:Please Hermoine control yourself.

Suddenly the door of the room opens and a doctor comes outside.

Boy:Doctor is everything fine????Is he ok???
Doctor:Please come and talk to me in my Cabin Mr.Potter.
Hermoine:Harry I'm also coming with you.
Harry:No,you stay here.
Hermoine:Doctor can I go inside and see him??
Doctor:Of course,nurse take Miss Granger inside.
Nurse:yes doctor.
Doctor:Please come with me Mr.Potter.

They enter the doctor's cabin and sit down.

Harry:Now can you please tell me what is the problem???Is he fine???
Doctor:He is very serious.
Harry:But what is the problem???
Doctor:He's gone in Koma.
Harry:What!!!!
Doctor:Calm down Mr.Potter.
Harry:You tell me to calm down when my friend is in koma.
Doctor:Please Mr.Potter.
Harry:Doctor, is there any way to get him out of koma.
Doctor:No,we can just wait.
Harry:There has to be some way.
Doctor:You can take him home,we'll send you a nurse.
Harry:Ok,when can we take him??
Doctor:Tomorrow but first you'll have to fill the forms at the reception.
Harry:Ok.
Doctor:Are you ok Mr.Potter???
Harry:I'm ok.Thanks for whatever you have done for him.
Doctor:Please don't thank me thank god.
Harry:I'll go now.

They shake hands and Harry goes out of the Cabin.He sees Hermoine waiting for him.Hermoine sees him goes towards him.

Hermoine:What did the doctor say???Will he be fine???He was unconscious.
Harry:Hermoine.....there's a problem.
Hermoine:What is the problem???Tell me.
Harry He's.....gone in koma.
Hermoine sat down on the chair and started crying.
Harry:Hermoine please don't cry.
Hermoine:It's all my fault why did I let him go??? why???
Harry:The doctor said we can take him home tomorrow.

Harry sat beside her.Hermoine stopped crying.

Hermoine:But is there any cure???
Harry:No, we can just wait.

Tears were falling down from Hermoines eyes.

Harry:I'll just go and fill the forms for the discarge.You go and sit beside Ron.
Hermoine:Ok.

Harry took Hermoine towards the room and she went inside.Harry went to the reception to fill the form.

Meanwhile in the weasleys house everybody was worried.Mrs.Weasley was crying and ginny was telling her not to cry.

Plz comment.

Hey, this is pretty good!!!! IT has a few grammar mistakes, but that's no problem because the plot captures you right in! By the way, is Ron the one in coma?

Nice start. It seems interesting
Plz continue soon