Beautiful Mirror, Make me lucky- Update p.22 - Page 2 | Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

Ra @Ra92 IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 15 years ago

wow Aishu!...the story is sooo nice!!...it's really good!. the story, you've written is so different from others that I have read so far!😛...plz plz cntinue! I can not wait to see what happens after!.. how Sunshine's life changes after that!..😍

luv Sana🤗

thiz was my comment for the 1st part!..but when i post my comment i have seen the second part!( I wonder how much i'm stupid?😆😆😆)..anyways after reading the second part: well .. the story is becoming much more interesting!..i'm looking forward to read the continuation!😍!...Sunshine & Neil's love story is FAB!..

[ i love romantic stories. i'm completely mad about that gendre of bookss or movies ]

Edited by sana_92 - 15 years ago

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Unique @Terenaina IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by Girl_2007

wow! its beautiful... Aishu... can i call u Aishu? 😛

the conclusion wich wid i came out is that, beauty and success dont bring happiness and satisfaction always.. 😛

but the suspense comes in the last senteces, when neil tells her that he used to be her friend before... 🤔

please update soon. 😃

sure u can call me aishu😳 yes beauty and success don't bring happiness, actually money don't bring happiness😆 Happiness comes when you have the love of your family and friends😳 Happiness is when you find your true love😛 It would be great if one had everything from wealth, health, lover, family and friends😳 But seems like you can't have it all😆

yes neil and sunshine were friends. Sunshine considered Neil to be her best friend and told him everything but he wasn't interest in her talk at all. She was more like a stalker to him

Edited by veryuniquestyle - 15 years ago

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Unique @Terenaina IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by sana_92

wow Aishu!...the story is sooo nice!!...it's really good!. the story, you've written is so different from others that I have read so far!😛...plz plz cntinue! I can not wait to see what happens after!.. how Sunshine's life changes after that!..😍

luv Sana🤗

thiz was my comment for the 1st part!..but when i post my comment i have seen the second part!( I wonder how much i'm stupid?😆😆😆)..anyways after reading the second part: well .. the story is becoming much more interesting!..i'm looking forward to read the continuation!😍!...Sunshine & Neil's love story is FAB!..

[ i love romantic stories. i'm completely mad about that gendre of bookss or movies ]

thank you sana🤗 Me too, I love love stories😳

The first part was like a introduction so don't worry😆 I'll continue some other time because I don't know what to write for next... I have to make it shocking u know🤣

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Archana @Girl_2007 IF-Rockerz Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by veryuniquestyle

sure u can call me aishu😳 yes beauty and success don't bring happiness, actually money don't bring happiness😆 Happiness comes when you have the love of your family and friends😳 Happiness is when you find your true love😛 It would be great if one had everything from wealth, health, lover, family and friends😳 But seems like you can't have it all😆 it depends on how u deal it 😛 u have to keep those things carefully balanced, if u want them all.

yes neil and sunshine were friends. Sunshine considered Neil to be her best friend and told him everything but he wasn't interest in her talk at all. She was more like a stalker to him

very true 😃

well, money doesnt bring satisfaction, its a thing wich wid we are all familiar... 😛 i mean, we have viewed, readed and listened a lot about it,

about beauty, technically, its happiness wid brings beauty, not the opp. way. 😛

and success doesnt bring happiness..... thats not a common thing.. 😛 but its true, success, or atleast, wat we tend to considere success does not bring happiness, not always.

thanks for clearing the Neil-Sunshine thing 😊, plz, pm me about the next part, 😃

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Unique @Terenaina IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 years ago

very true. Happiness brings beauty

okay I'll pm you when I updated it

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Jess. @Jess. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 years ago

Very good Aishu!👍🏼

i like the fact that Sunshine knows that neil only likes her for her beauty..so she rejected him😆...!!

now i bet he knows how she felt before...and those mean girls >(.. i hope she gets revenge on them too LOL

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Unique @Terenaina IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by Angad luver#1

Very good Aishu!👍🏼

i like the fact that Sunshine knows that neil only likes her for her beauty..so she rejected him😆...!!

now i bet he knows how she felt before...and those mean girls >(.. i hope she gets revenge on them too LOL

thanks😳 ugh those mean girls🤢😡 I'll add some twist to the story so don't say she rejected him yet😉

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