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👏 lovely updates.
I'm glad that dev knows her name and also that u didnt get dev wet right before the puja (thats how these splashing with water scenes turn out to be).
looking forward to next part.
do update soon.
Chapter 3
Radhika was all drenched when she came back home and soon as she stepped in....Amma (the Daadi of the house) started yelling at her....."radhe krishn radhe krishn...ab kya pura ghar apne manhoos khadmon se geela karegi kya....ek toh itni deir se aayi hai aur voh bhi bheeg ke....chal jaa yaha se...peeche ke darwaaze se aaiyo."
Radhika became upset and turned around to come from the back door....she changed n went n sat in front of the Krishna idol in her room....she looked at kanha n thought about the guy she met at the mandir.....she shivered remebering his hold on her shoulders n suddenly covered herself with duppatta....she said to kanha...."yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe kanha....koi agar dekh leta mujhe uske saath toh kaisi buri bhali baatein kehta.....bauji toh mujhe maaf hi nahi karte."
Right then Nandu comes running in n says..."didi tum waha se kyu chali aayi...tauji tumhe pooch rahe the."
Radhika smiles n hugs him n asks...."laddu khayega ??"
Nandu nods excitingly so Radhika gives him the laddu from in front of kanha....and he leaves.
Devki calls Radkhika and she runs outside...Devki says..."beta tere bauji aate honge...zara chai bana do."
Radhika was preparing tea when Punditji comes n says...."bahut achche log hai Purohitji ke parivaar wale...itne bade log hai aur zara bhi ghamand nahi.."
Devki and Amma smiles....Radhika gives him water and tea....and then Vishaka grabs Radhika's hand n takes her inside...n says..."arre Radhika....tune usse dekha nahi...kya handsome ladka tha...main toh bas nihaarti reh gayi usse....Purohit khandaan ka chota beta hai voh aur lag bhi bahut laadla raha tha.....haye....mera toh dil abhi tak zor zor se dhadak raha hai uske baare mein sonch sonch kar."
Radhika...gets a little embarassed with Vishaka's talk....she says...."Vishaka...kaise baatein kiye jaa rahi hai...agar maa ya bauji ne suna toh kya sonchenge..."
Vishaka gets a little upset n says..."tu bas rehne de....ab jaa mere liye thodi chai le aao na."
Radhika shakes her head thinking...she'll never change..n leaves the room.
Radhika comes out of the room and then Punditji says...."Radhika...yeh vaid ji ki ladki ki kundli hai....mere payr mein thoda dard hai toh tum yeh zara unko de aao....kehna main kal mandir jaate samay unke yaha rukta hua jaonga."
Radhika nods and leaves.
She reaches Vaid ji's house and gives him the kundli but while returning Vaid ji stops her n says...."Radhika beta....mera ek kaam kar doge ?? mujhe dusre gaaon jaana hai kisi ke elaaj ke liye....tum yeh dawai zara Vrindavan wale maaji ko de aaogi ??"
Radhika doesnt know who that is so she asks...."Vrindavan wale maaji....yeh kaun hai vaid ji??"
Vaid ji explains...."voh Vrindavan naam ka bangla hai na....waha rehti hai maaji....sab unko daadi kehte hai...tum yeh de aao beta...main aaj nahi jaa paonga."
Radhika smiles n says...."aap fikr na karein vaid ji....main de aaongi."
Radhika stops in front of the Vrindavan Palace and she was hesitant to go in since the place looked so big....she was feeling a little awkward.
She comes in and the servant asks her whom she wants to meet and she says..."daadi ji hai kya?? yeh vaid ji ne dawai bheji hai."
Servant directs her to Daadi's room....Radhika comes in and Daadi was lying down...she looks at Radhika n asks...."kaun ho beta ???"
Dev was about to walk in Daadi's room when his phone rings n he stops there to talk.
Radhika answers...."ji mera naam Radhika hai....vaid ji ne yeh aapke liye dawa bheji thi...kaha woh aaj nahi aa paye kyunki unhe dusre gaaon jaana tha."
Dev as soon as he hears the name....turns to look into the room...but doesnt step in...he stands behind the curtain and looks at her back.
Daadi then says...."ohh haan....mere ghutno ke dard ki dawai bheji hogi vaid ji ne.....laao beta yaha mujhe dedo."
Radhika hands the medicine to her n turns to leave.....and then she stops right in front of the curtain thinking something...and Dev was just admiring her from the other side of the curtain.
Radhika turns slowly to look that Daadi was getting up with a lot of difficulty so that she can apply the medicine....so Radhika just runs towards her n says...."laayiye daadiji.....main laga deti hoon....aap leti rahiye."
Daadi smiles n looks at her....n here Dev was also smiling....he rest his left shoulder on the wall n folds his hands in front of him n just stands there staring at her.
Right then Mrinalini who was passing by notices Dev outside Daadi's room so she comes close to him n says'."kya hua devarji'kya aajkal Daadi ke upper nazar rakh rahe ho kya?? Andar nahi jaa rahe bahar se hi baatein sun rahe ho unki."
Dev looks at her lovingly n says'"kya karoo bhabhi'.jo aapko karna chahiye voh main kar raha hoon'.waise mujhe aapse poori shikayat nahi aadhi shikayat hai."
Mrinalini asks'"kya?? Aadhi shikayat ??"
Dev smiles again n says'."haan kyunki aap aadha kaam toh karti hai per jo asal kaam hota hai vohi nahi karti."
Mrinalini now gets upset with his answers so she asks'"kya matlab hai tumhara Dev??"
Dev says'.."ab dekho na'..aap anadar na jaa kar bahar khadi sabki baatein toh bahut sunti hai lekin'..sabka khayal karne ke liye'.unpe nazar nahi rakhti'ke unko kuch chahiye hoga ya nahi."
Mrnalini was fuming with anger then Dev slowly but in a serious tone says'."kabhi kamro ke andar bhi jhaank kar dekh liya kijiye'.ke kahi kisiko aapki zaroorat toh nahi."
She gets more mad and then looks at him cunningly and says'."mujhe kya karna chahiye kya nahi'.tumse seekhne ki zaroorat nahi hai'..mujhe kya karna hai main achchi tarah se jaanti hoon'..bas tumse itna hi kehna hai ke'.tum mujhe nahi jaante'..main kya kar sakti hoon kya nahi."
Still mad at him'.she walks away with her head held high.
Dev shakes his head thinking'..nothing is gonna work on her''he looks inside the room again and smiles comparing Mrinalini to Radhika'still a strange girl but with so much love and care for others.
Daadi then continues the conversation n says...."kya naam bataya beta tumne....Radhika....kahi tum Punditji ki beti toh nahi??"
Radhika smiles n says...."ji."
Daadi then continues...."bahut achche sanskaar diye hai tumhare bauji ne tumhe....bahut achchi ho tum....kabhi aate rehne aise hi mujhse milne....aaogi na??"
Radhika hesitates n then says..."koshish karungi daadiji.....achcha main ab chalti hoon...sab ghar mein intezaar kar rahe honge."
Daadi nods n Radhika turns to leave....she comes close towards the door when Dev slowly pushes the curtain on the side.....n Radhika just keeps staring at him with a nervous and fearful face'..Dev stares at her n then a smile spreads on his lips and he observes Radhika getting more uncomfortable. Dev also got a little worried when he saw her getting tensed but then before he could say anything'..Daadi says'.."Dev'.tum kab aaye??"
Dev breaks his eyelock and answers Daadi'.."ji bas abhi." Then he looks at Radhika n says'."yeh kaun hai Daadi??"
Radhika takes a tensed breath and hesitates to say anything but Daadi answers'.."arre haan'.yeh Radhika hai'.apne Punditji hai na Brij Mohan Shastriji'.unki ladki'..bechari itni door mujhe dawai dene aayi hai Vaidji ke kehne per."
Dev still staring at Radhika says'.."kuch log aise bhi hote hai Daadi jinki achchai hi unki sundarta hoti hai." Then he looks at Radhika and bends his head a little towards her face n looking into her eyes asks'."kyu sach kaha na maine??"
Radhika shivers watching him get close to her n then she says'.."achcha daadiji main chalti hoon'.mujhe deir ho rahi hai."
Dev gets uneasy that she was leaving so soon'..n then Daadi says'."Dev'..Radhika ko uske ghar tak chod aao beta'.usse waise hi itni deir ho gayi hai."
Dev agrees happily but Radhika hesitates and then when Daadi insists a lot'she agrees to go with Dev.
In the car Dev is happy having Radhika sit by him'.whereas Radhika was dying of tension as she was uncomfortable with Dev beside her, uncomfortable by his eyes on her, uncomfortable to even talk to him'..she just prayed her kanha to get her home as quickly as possible so that she has less interaction with Dev.
But less she knew that Kanha had planned something else for her.
Chapter 4
Dev and Radhika are in the car driving back to her house when Dev who was glancing at her every few minutes slowly asked….."kaha rehti hai aap??"
To this Radhika says immediately……"aap mujhe bas yahi chod dijiye."
Dev then looks at her keenly n then turns to look straight ahead n says…."dekhiye Radhikaji….ab aisa bhi nahi ke main aapko aur aapke pitaji ko nahi jaanta jo aap mujhe apne ghar ka pata nahi batana chahti……main toh bas vohi kar raha hoon jo mujhe Daadi ne kaha…..aapko aapke ghar tak chodna….aur uske liye aapke ghar ka pata bhi chahiye na…….varna waise bhi mujhe pura vrindavan ghoomne mein bhi koi problem nahi hai……basharte aap agar mere saath hongi toh."
Radhika was scared to death thinking about what people will say when they'll see her with him and moreover what Amma will say when she will find out…..she turns around towards him and still looking down she says…."aap mujhe krupa karke yahi chod dijiye…..main khud hi chali jaongi."……..And it was then that for the first time she looked at him with such innocent eyes that he cudnt say no to her….
Still looking at her he stops the car and she gets down n was going when Dev calls her out again….."suniye…."
Radhika stops but doesn't turn…..n Dev stutters……"aap…………..voh…………uhh….main……"
Radhika then sternly says….."mujhe deir ho rahi hai."
Radhika left from where he was and was walking down the road when she sees Vishaka standing with her hands on her waist and with a very angry face.
Radhika just stops right where she was and was getting scared thinking Vishaka might have seen her with Dev in his car…..but before she could say anything Vishaka walks upto her n says….."Radhika……tu uss ladke ke saath kya kar rahi thi??"
Radhika looks stunned n then stutters……"voh……voh mandir ka raasta pooch rahe the."
Vishaka asks casually……"phir tune bataya ya nahi??"
Radhika says immediately…….."nahi…..voh mujhe deir ho rahi thi na isliye."
Vishaka's eyes turns towards where Dev was and she says….."arre Radhika….yeh toh vohi hai…….Purohit family ka chota beta DEV……….haye…..aaj bhi kya handsome lag raha hai…..raaste per guzar rahi ladkiyon ki jaan lega agar aise hi bahar khada raha toh…..chal hum chalkar uski madad karte hai."
Vishaka grabs Radhika's hand n Radhika says….."nahi Vishaka….nahi tum jaao….mujhe bahut kaam hai ghar per."
But Vishaka doesn't listen to her n instead pulls her along to where Dev was.
Dev was kinda confused when he sees Radhika returning with her sister towards him…
Even before he cud think of anything Vishaka starts……"Namaste ji…..mera naam Vishaka hai….aur yeh Radhika."
Dev does Namaste to them n this whole time he was looking at Radhika n Vishaka back n forth…..trying to understand whats going on.
Vishaka continues……"aapko mandir jaana tha na…..aur shayad Radhika ne aapke poochne per bhi raasta nahi bataya hoga…..koi baat nahi..main bata deti hoon."
Now it strikes Dev what was going on…..he looks at Radhika with questionable eyes but observes that she seemed more embarrassed and tensed to even look at him……..Dev smiles at something he just thought n then says to Vishaka….."ji aapki bahut meherbani hogi….agar aap khud chal kar mujhe raasta bata dengi toh."
At this both Radhika n Vishaka look at him with question n so Dev answers flirtishly……"voh kya hai na ke mujhe raaste yaad nahi rehte….isliye."
Vishaka smiles n says…."haan haan chaliye…..kyu nahi."
Dev notices that Radhika just stood at one place whereas Vishaka already moved to sit in the car……then Dev with a very low voice says to Radhika…."aap bhi chaliye na?"
Radhika looks up and their eyes meet and she finds him looking at her with smiling eyes……she was hesitating but then Vishaka insists so Radhika sits in the back seat.
Dev was still happy that atleast he got sometime to spend with Radhika…..even though from far away but still…..
Vishaka started her blabbering as soon as they started to drive……Radhika was quite looking out the window…..but Dev was checking out Radhika from his rearview mirror….and was admiring her features.
Radhika hair blew with a breeze and when she was fixing her hair she saw Dev watching her from the rearview mirror….she looks at him all upset n then looks outside……Dev smiles at her reaction.
Vishaka asks Dev….."aapko raaste kya hamesha se yaad nahi rehte??"
Dev laughs lightly at her question n says…."ji bas kya kahoo….hamesha se yeh aadat nahi thi….per jab se vrindavan aaya hoon….yaha ki khubsoorti mein aisa kho jaata hoon ke pata hi nahi chalta main kaha chala jaa raha hoon…"……….n then he looks in the rearview mirror again to check out Radhika n says….."yaha ke nazaare….yaha ke log……bas ek baar dekho toh dil karta hai baar baar dekhta hi rahoon."
At this Vishaka laughs n says…."yeh toh sach kaha aapne….hamara vrindavan hai hi aisa."
But Radhika was getting mad with Dev checking her out every minute from the mirror and talking weird making her more uncomfortable.
Vishaka asks him to stop the car at one place n says….."li jiye yeh aa gaya aapka mandir…..ab hum log bhi chalet hai."
Dev immediately responds…."aap logon ne itni door aa kar meri mada ki hai….as a thank u main aap logon ko aapke ghar chodna chahta hoon….bas main darshan kar loo….phir chalenge."
Vishaka looks at Radhika who shakes her head saying no but Vishaka agrees saying….."theek hai chaliye hum bhi darshan kar lete hai."
Dev gestures them to walk first with his hand like saying 'after you'.
Vishaka walks in front and while going she says to Radhika….."chal na Radhika…..tere favorite bhagwaan ka mandir hai."
Radhika walks behind Vishaka but was very aware of Dev following her…..n then she hears Dev's whisper coming from right by her side….."isliye shayad aap per yeh naam bahut jachta hai……..RADHIKA!!"
Radhika feels like a current running in her body when she hears this……she looks at Dev who was looking straight ahead n then walks fast to catch up with Vishaka……and that brings smile on Dev's face…..it was as though he was loving the reactions he was getting from Radhika.
aww i love dev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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