Sirf Tum (A RaDev Story)..FF..Ch48,49,50..on..Pg59 - Page 5

Posted: 15 years ago

loved both parts continue soon

Posted: 15 years ago
nicely written............
Posted: 15 years ago
yay!!!!!!! we get two updates
thanks
loved em both, they were great
ugh i hate vishaka
no no no!!!!
vishali/dadi come on you should know what is in your son/grandson's heart, it's not Vishaka it's Radhika!!!!
you better talk to your son soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
love raji
Posted: 15 years ago

awsome parts..Vishakha flirting with DEv..Radhika don't jelous seeing Vish with DEv..Poor DEv..i hope Radhika get sense..

i hope Dadi & Vaishali don't get wrong impression that Dev like Vishakha..

i hope DEv tell them who he love..

waiting for next part..wht Radhika thinking..

Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Payal, Irika, raji and everyone.
 
I'm sorry that its being a lil late to post next part......but it'll soon be updated.
Please keep checking to read whats coming up.
 
For now.....I'll post a new promo for u guys....i hope that'll help. 😃
 
Posted: 14 years ago

NEW PROMO.

Daadi and Viashali plan to ask for Vishaka's hand from Punditji during the rat-jaga they organise.
 
It was rat-jaga night when Dev holds Radhika's hand to stop her and pulls her close to him in anger......n stares down at her....which makes Radhika a lil scared of him n she gets teary-eyed looking at him as a request to leave her.
 
 
 
PROMO SAYING:
Gharwalon ne Vishaka ki khwahish ki.....per lagta hai Dev ko ho raha hai Radhika se pyaar.....
Kya chal rahe shaadi ke iraado ko.....rokega yeh pyar ka khumar.
 
Posted: 14 years ago
nice promos but please continue thiss FF
Posted: 14 years ago
Thanx for the great promos!!!
Looking forward to reading the next parts. Plz continue!!

Posted: 14 years ago

 

 

Chapter 9

 

 

Vishaka felt on top of the world being so close to Dev…..she came back inside all shy n Amma saw that….she knew there is something that Vishaka is hiding from them.

Amma goes to Vishaka in her room n asks…."kya baat hai bitiya….aaj kal bina baat muskurati rehti hai….kuch baat hai jo humse chupa rahi hai kya ??"

Vishaka blushes n looks at Amma n says…."koi baat nahi hai amma….aap ko kyu aisa lag raha hai."

Amma says….."toh phir ek baat batayiyo….tu Dev ko dekh kar Sharma kyu rahi thi…..kahi tu usse pasand toh nahi karti??"

At that Vishaka doesn't anwer anything but just blushes….Right then Radhika comes in with Devki n when Devki sees Vishaka blushing….she asks Amma…."amma….yeh Vishaka kyu sharmaye jaa rahi hai??"

Amma very happily says…."arre bahuriya….tumhari beti ko Dev pasand hai….isliye Sharma rahi hai."

Radhika was kinda surprised and was confused with the weird feeling she was having….it was like she was happy for Vishaka n also was not happy……Radhika didn't understand her mixed feelings n looked at Devki who looked concerned.

 

Radhika asks Devki…."kya hua maa ?? aap kya sonch rahi hai??"

Amma n Vishaka who were happy in their own thoughts turn towards Devki in question…..n Devki replies…."hum yeh sonch rahe hai Radhika beta ke kaha hum log aur kaha Purohit parivaar…..kaisa mel ho sakta inn do parivaro ka…..yeh sab sonchna bhi bekaar hai….Vishaka yeh sab tu apne dil se nikaal de….kyunki yeh rishta kabhi mumkin hi nahi hai…..bina sonche samjhe khushiya manana bekaar hai."

Vishaka gets upset n asks…."per maa??"

Devki cuts her question n says…."beta tere bauji hi nahi maanenge pehle toh….unn logon ka jawaab sonchna toh bahut door ki baat hai."

Vishaka looks at Amma who was in deep thoughts n says…."Amma…aap hi kuch kaho na maa ko."

Amma says….."nahi teri maa bilkul sahi kahe hai….lalla hi nahi maanega iss rishte ke liye."

 

Amma n Devki leaves n Radhika comes near Vishaka to comfort her n says…."Vishaka….voh log bahut bade khandaan ke hai…aur bauji apni taraf se kabhi pehle baat nahi karenge….tu yeh sab bhool jaa aur apne aap ko sambhaal."

Vishaka gets more mad n very rudely says…."Radhika…..tu please yaha se chali jaa….mujhe thodi deir akele rehna hai."

 

Radhika feels hurt but she also understood Vishaka's situation….so she quietly leaves the room….She goes to the outhouse n sits in front of the kanha idol n thinks as to……'y do I've mixed feelings about Vishaka loving Dev….y am I not completely happy from my heart for vishaka….i think I shud not behave like this n be happy for Vishaka….n I'll be kanha….coz she is my sister.'

 

Here Vaishali n Daadi discuss about Vishaka after coming back home….n Vaishali says…."maaji….mujhe toh Vishaka bahut achchi lagi….dekha na aapne kaise daant kar Dev ko haldi lagayi usne zakhm per."

Daadi also says…"haan bahu…aur Dev bhi kitni baat sunta hai uski….mujhe yeh dekh kar achcha laga."

Vaishali says….."maaji….mera dil karta hai ke main usse ek baar aur miloo….per samajh nahi aa raha kaise??"

Daadi very smartly says…."bahu kyu na hum….ek rat-jaga rakhe aur punditji ko sah-parivaar nimantran de…toh voh log zaroor aayenge."

Vaishali was very happy with the idea….she gets up immediately n says…."theek hai maa…main abhi unhe phone kar deti hoon."

Daadi laughs n says…."arre abhi toh hum waha se aaye hai…..abhi nahi bahurani…kal subah kar lena kehna hum kal raat ko rat-jaga kar rahe hai."

Vaishali laughs putting the phone down n says…."kya karoo maa….mujhse sabar hi nahi ho raha."

Daadi says…."aakhir aisa kya chal raha hai tere mann mein??"

Vaishali smiles n says…."maaji…..aapko achche se pata hai main kya sonch rahi….phir bhi mujh se pooch rahi hai??"

Both look at each other smilingly then bursts into laughter.

 

Dev was in his room working on the file….when he turns his head….his neck hurts n he puts his hand on his neck looking in the mirror n then he imagines Radhika's face in front of him……Dev thinks to himself if what he is feeling inside is love...coz y does he thinks about Radhika when he is alone.....y does he sees her face in front of him all the time…..But after what happened today....it didnt look like she shared the same feelings in her heart as he does for her……And then he pacifies himself saying....maybe its just the attraction towards her that i feel....her innocent face always gets me distracted.

He shakes his head and shruggs off her thoughts from his mind and returns to the file.

 

Next morning at Shastri house….Radhika was cleaning the floor…..Amma was again nagging after Radhika saying she doesn't work as she's suppose to n all that…..no one said a word even though they were right there. Vishaka sat there eating mango….whereas Devki made helpless faces…..But noone said a word….Radhika was very sad but she tried to clean the floor nicely just to please Amma.

The phone rang and Amma again making faces said….."ab kya hum hi uth kar phone uthaye….tu wahi toh baithi hai…..uthati kahe nahi hai."

Right then Punditji enters n says very rudely to amma…."ab bas bhi kari amma….bechari aakhir kitna kaam karegi….aur waise kya ho jaayega agar app ya koi aur uth kar phone le le toh."

Amma makes faces n looks at Radhika furiously…..and here Punditji picks up the phone n says…."namsateji….haan haan…..kyu nahi…..bilkul…..hum zaroor aayenge….aur sah-parivaar aayenge…..dhanyavaad."

 

Amma asks him……"kiska phone tha lalla??"

Punditji says….."voh Purohitji ke ghar se phone aaya tha…..Purohitain keh rahi thi ke aaj unke yaha rat-jaga hai toh hum sab zarror aaye….aap log sab shaam tayyar rahiyega…..hum saath hi chal padenge."

Punditji asks Radhika to gather all the things necessary for him to take as he will be the one performing the puja….Amma looks at Radhika cunningly….and chants her mantra.

 

Posted: 14 years ago

 

 

Chapter 10

 

 

At Purohit Mansion…..Vaishali is eagerly waiting for the Shastri family to arrive n then Daadi observes this n comes to her n says…."kya baat hai bahu….maine tumhe kisi aur ka aaj tak aise intezaar karte hue nahi dekha….jitna tum Vishaka ka kar rahi ho."

Vaishali smiles n says…."kya maa aap bhi na mujhe bas kal se chede jaa rahi hai…..lekin maa abhi tak voh log aaye kyu nahi ??"

Daadi says…"aa jaayenge bahu…..bas thodi deir……"……….Daadi was still in the middle of the sentence when she turns to look at the door n finds the Shastri family arriving n says….."lo yeh log toh aa bhi gaye."

Daadi and Vaishali greet them n vice versa….Vaishali then comes n stands by Vishaka n says…."aao beta aao na….hum tumhe apna ghar dikhate hai."

At that everyone turns to her n stares…..so Vaishali stutters n then says….."mera matlab hai….ke aap log sab chaliye na….main aapko hamara ghar dikhati hoon."

 

Everyone smiles then n follows her…..but for Vishaka….it was a surprise….she liked the way Dev's mom was being friendly with her….but for Mrinalini….who was standing upstairs watching all this…..it was something weird….and fishy…..she wondered why Vaishali was being so nice to these guys….especially when they were not upto their standards n stature….she decided to find out…the truth.

 

Here Vaishali n Daadi was taking everyone upstairs n Radhika stared at all the paintings on the stairway….and Daadi observes her n says…."kya hua beta….achchi lagi ??"

Radhika smiles n says…"bahut achchi hai Daadi ji….mujhe yeh dekh kar aisa lagta hai jaise….yeh aapki pasand hogi."

Daadi smiles n says…"haan…..magar sab nahi….kuch maine pasand ki hai aur kuch mere bete ne…..usse bhi paintings bahut pasand hai…..jab bhi kuch achchi lagti hai toh khareed leta hai."

Amma turns to find Radhika chatting smilingly with Daadi….so she calls out…."arre Radhika….kahe peeche reh gayi….sab ke saath chal bitiya."

Radhika looks at Amma….and Amma stares her down…..n murmers something in the mouth….n Radhika tries to catch up….but Daadi tells amma…"aap fikr na karo ji…..main iske saath hoon….yeh kahi gum nahi hoegi."

Amma smiles cunningly at Daadiz answer n looks away.

 

Radhika was staring at the family picture n didn't realize when everyone including Daadi went ahead and she was left behind…..her attention broke when Mrinalini asked from behind her…."aisi kya khaas baat hai iss family picture mein jo tum iss khadr kho gayi….ke sab logon ka tumse door jaana bhi mehsoos nahi hua??"

Radhika jumps at her voice n gets embarrassed when she sees no one around n then Mrinalini asking her this question….she looked down n then Mrinalini continued saying…."tum jaisi middle class logon ka yahi problem hai….bade ghar mein aane ke bade khwaab…..waise kya khaas tha iss picture mein….hum sab ke zevaraat ya hamara rutba ??"

Radhika gets teary eyed n looks here n there to find rest of her family n then she looks at Mrinalini who was looking at her cunningly n then huffs at her n leaves from there…..Radhika gets upset n starts walking to look for the other members.

 

Radhika goes into one room…look in there n then comes out n then she goes into another n then she sees someone in the rocking chair n she gets scared n runs out of the room…..n then bumps into someone who was coming out of another room as well….Radhika was so scared that she closes her eyes tight.

 

Dev got ready for the puja n was coming out of the room to go downstairs when someone comes running towards him n bumps into him….Dev holds her tight by embracing her into his arms to support her from falling down….But the person gets stiffed n a hand moves n lands on his chest as though trying to push him away….n he hears the noise of the bangles.

Dev gets stiffened by the feel of someone getting stiff beneath his hands. He tightens his grip on her arms n then lets go…..And then he observes that the person whom he just held in his arms was none other then Radhika….he kept staring at her n then he sees tears in her eyes….Dev gets a little disturbed by seeing tears in her eyes…..he cudnt understand the reason….was it him holding her that made her so upset….was she scared of him….or else what cud be the reason ??

 

Radhika got away from him n started to go across…when Dev held her hand n asked…"kya hua….aap ro kyu rahi hai??"

Radhika gets more mad at Dev for holding her hand….but actually she was afraid that if someone saw Dev holding her hand they wud think of her as an opportunist…..so she turns n says…."mera haath chodiye."

Dev asks her again…."pehle batayiye ke aap ro kyu rahi hai??"

Radhika then snaps at him n says…"main kyu ro rahi hoon usse aapko kya matlab hai….aap please mera haath chodiye….mujhe nahi pasand koi mere saath aisi harkat kare…..aap log honge bade ghar wale jisko koi fark nahi padta…..per mere liye…yehi sharm aur bezatti ki baat hogi agar koi mujhe aise dekhe aur bura bhala kahe…main apne bare mein ya mere ghar walo ke bare mein aisa kuch b hi nahi sun sakti….aap please chodiye mera haath."

 

Dev gets mad listening at her assumption about his personality….he pulls her towards him n holds her by her arms n stares her down….Radhika's hands lands on his chest n she looks at him with fearful eyes….n the way he was looking at her…she was actually getting afraid of him now….she didn't mean to provoke him…she was just trying to get away but it backfired as her words hit his ego strongly.

 

Dev stares at her n pulls her more close to him….n Radhika's breathing gets fast….n then he asks her in a grunting tone…."toh  batayiye….ke aapko kya lagta hai ke main aapke saath kya harkat kar raha tha…."…..Dev was asking the question but Radhika was struggling under his hold to get loose….but was helpless…..so Dev continues….."agar kisiko concern dikhana kisi ke liye bezzati ka sabab hota toh…..iss duniya mein koi bhi itna courteous nahi hota."

And then he pulls her more close so that there is no space between them n says like a wisper…."aur jab kuch logo ke aankhon mein aansoon achche nahi lagte toh…..raha nahi jaata bin pooche."

At that Radhika stops struggling in his arms n looks into his eyes…..Dev gives her one more hard stare n releases her from his hold n turns away to leave…..Radhika stands there just staring at his back until he was completely out of her sight.

 

 

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