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1. Is the story's pace going okay or are you eager for more action?
I'm very happy with the story line.I think it's going just at the right pace as would any real life incident would.
I'm very happy with the story line.I think it's going just at the right pace as would any real life incident would.
2. What did you think of the semi-romantic scenes?
Nice.They blended well and wasn't a hasty start :)
Nice.They blended well and wasn't a hasty start :)
I liked how you interspersed thoughts of the audience with Samira's singing...the lyrics,the link you provided everything was fabulous.This new way of narration was applaudable.Infact the whole scene was so described that I felt I was watching a movie.My only question is abt Rehaan's character-he sort of seems mysterious withhout his past unfolden but I guess you want it to be kept as a suspense.Just one more thought - I wish you could add more abt Karan in this story too as I really like Arjun in MJHT (lol 'm being selfish here 😳)Waiting for the next update-do make it available as soon as possible :D
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