MJMM-MAYUR FFF(Fully Faltoo Fiction)-updated pge13

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys and girls,This is my first FULLY FALTOO FICTION....
The basic objective is to make you cry,laugh even faint...but due to all WRONG REASONS. šŸ˜‰
If I fail in the basic objective, please don't feel offended....
I promise to try harder next time......


Episode starts-

Mayank and Nupur are standing near the pool side in the moon lit night.The Mayank(moon) in the sky
is looking bright but not Mayank sharma....

M-nupur meine tumsee 99 baar maafi manga hai..iss baar toh maaf kar do...

N(looking redder than her red salwar)-mayank tumhe pyaar ke baarey me kuchh nahi pata,
pyaar mein kitne sitam uthana parta hai tumhe pata hai?? 10000000 baar
sorry bolna parta hai tab jaake ladki maanti hai!

M-Par nupur....

N-Tumhe mujhse sharam aati hai, pata hai mujhe..

M(looking very repentent)-Nahi nupurrrrr....yeh dekho meine apne seene pe tumhare naam ka Tatoo
banaya hai....(shows her the tatoo in Baazigar Style, bazigar o bazigar playing in the Back ground)

N(leaning on him with a suspicious look starts scratching at the tatoo with her red nails)- YEH NAKLI HAI !!!!

M-Nahi nupur yeh nakli nahi hai.. kal mein college bunk karkey tumharey liye yeh Tatoo banane gaya tha..

N-JHOOTH...yeh tatoo tumko Sheena ke Innerwear store se free mila hai.....

M-Par tumhare naam ka tatoo Sheena ke paas kaise hoga??wahan to sirf rang berange chadii miltey hai....

N by then has turned away and is furiously walking away...

M-yeh kya museebat hai...meine pehle hi theek tha...Pyaar karne ke pehle sochna chahiye thaa...

M absentmindedly takes a step back and accidently falls into the pool...But all those who think that
M the Great knows how to swim may not rest assured....Becos there is a CROCODILE in the swimming pool...
It was a special gift from Sheena to Samrat on their 10 minute anniversary....
M makes no effort to leave the pool....his tears salinates the non saline water and increases its level..
The crocodile slowly moves towars him and mayank remains unaware.....

COMMERCIAL BREAK FOR 15 minutes....All girls and a few boys feeling really IRRITATED n TENSED...

Episode comences again..

The scene shifts to the pool side where Mayank is shown lying on his back with the crocodile on Top
(the holi scene pose)

crocodile-I LOVE YOU MMMMMMMMAYANK(Darr style)

M-Par tum ek crocodile ho....aur maine ek Insaan...

Crocodile-Everything is Fair in Love and War...

M faints and crocodile bats eyelids and blushes....

Crocodile-Mayank bilkul RAAZ ke tarah hai... Cute boy...

Episode ends here with all viewer flustered,wondering what they all have seen...The title track plays
and the Title becomes clear-Miley Jab MAYANK ur MAGARMACHHII.....

Written,directed,created by- Rinky Hegde(inspired from Mtv,Animal Planet,Hindi movies etc...)



P.S- Please post your replies/opinions....am eagerly waiting...


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey yar! ths is totally hilarious! i cant believe it! ur imagination is damn gud yar! keep it up! If ur continung, plz plz plz pm me! btw my name is Fats!
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Posted: 14 years ago
magarmachšŸ¤£



plz pm me the next time u update it
Btw ye atank wadi humla tha
dhaasu post tha
par plz iss love triangle mein mayu ki setting magarmach ke saath karna






Edited by mdkr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i like the fainitng mayank
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: mdkr

magarmachšŸ¤£




plz pm me the next time u update it
Btw ye atank wadi humla tha
dhaasu post tha
par plz iss love triangle mein mayu ki setting magarmach ke saath karna

aur loved it
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2 mayu faint ho gayašŸ¤£






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Posted: 14 years ago
@mdkr...... wait karr.. pehle iska trp kaisa hota hai woh toh dekhh loo...
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Originally posted by: abs_insane

@mdkr...... wait karr.. pehle iska trp kaisa hota hai woh toh dekhh loo...


isske toh best trps hongešŸ˜›
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Originally posted by: carolinecj

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i like the fainitng mayank




hey hey.. thank u
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey nobody liked it?? dont see too many replies...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar!!
after that precap, its better mayank find someone else
ur crocodile atleast lowwes him!!