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Nice start... pls update soon and pls add me in ur pm list...

 
Thanks. and sure honey i will pm u
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                                                                Hote Hote Pyaar Hogaya

Ye meri ff ka 2nd part hai. Ye possible huya hai srif Fariaa ki wajaise. Aker who mujhe encourage nehi karti to shayad main kabhi ye ff likh nehi pati. so it's 4 u Fariaa. Thanks a lot  4 supporting me. And I love u so much from my core. 

 

Part --- 2

 

 

 

At college

 

Mayank go to the library.   At the same time samrat was reading book in the library. He wear a blue jeans and a white shirt. As Usual he looks so sweet and januable. Mayank sat bsite him.

 

M : Hi sam.

 

S : Hi Mayank.

 

M : so dude. Keya karrahe ho?

 

S : Football khelraha hu? Dekhayi nehi deraha hai? Padhraha hu.

 

M : (Himself) khadoos kahika. Jab bhi bolta hai, kuch bura hi bolta hai.

 

S : kuch kehna hai dude?

 

M : nehi. Ha . who ye hai ke. Tumhe 1 baat pata hai?

 

S : jab tak tum bologe nehi mujhe pata keise chalega.

 

M : ha. Who keya haina gudia. Mera matlab hai nupur tumhari bohot tareef karrahi thi.

 

S : Oh . ( not at interested tone)

 

M : pocchoge nehi ? who keya kehrahi thi?

 

S : agar main nehi poochunga to tum nehi bataoge?

 

M : Nehi aisi koi baat nehi hai. Phir bhi tumhe janne ka interest nehi hai ke ussne tumhare bare me keya kaha?

 

S : Thik hai batao. ( abhi bhi itna interested nehi hai)

 

M : (himself) khadoos. Itna vhao kiyu kharaha hai. Isse to apne apko Khush naseeb samajh na  chahiye ke gudia ne isse pasand kiya hai. Warna gudiya ki piche to pure college ke ladke pagal hai.

 

S : Tum kuch kehne wale the dude. Jaldi kaho. Mujhe padhna hai.

 

M : who keya hai ke. Nupur kehrahi thi ke tum bohot responsible ho or bohot hi sensible or mature bhi ho.

 

S : O.K

 

M : ye sada se o.k ka keya matlab huya?

 

S : To keya main khushi se dance karna start kar du?

 

M : Maine aisa kab kaha? Per tum thode se reaction to dekha sakte ho na?

 

S : ( pls leave me act) o.k. fine. Main bohot khush hu ke nupur ne mere bare me ye sab kaha. Ab thik hai? ( himself) kash main bhi uske bare me ye sab kehsakta.

 

M : keya? Keya kaha tumne?

 

S : kuch bhi to nehi (suddenly).

 

M : dekho! Baat ko badlo maat. Maine suna hai tumne keya kaha.

 

S : O.k ha maine kaha hai ke kash main bhi nupur ke bare me ye sab kehsakti. Kiyu ki mujhe ussme koi maturity dekhai nehi deta.

 

M : Tum aise keise kehsakte ho dude? Nupur ne to tumhari bare me kitni acche baate ki.

 

S : to keya huya? Mujhe mature kehdene se who immature se mature nehi banjayegi. Or who hi kiyu, mujhe to tumhari group me se kisi ko bhi mature nehi lagta. Except Gunjaan.

 

M : dekho apna ye sada sa POV tum apne pass hi rakho.

 

Mayank gusse se waha se chala ata hai.

 

 

 

At corridor

 

Mayank is walking and thinking himself : Mujhe samrat se iss tarah se baat nehi karna chahiye tha. Gudiya sunegi to gussa ho jayegi. Per ussne gudiya ke bareme aisa kiyu bola? Per ussne gunjaan ke bareme to accha bola hai na? or gunjaan se to tu pyaar karta hai. Tujhe to khush hona chahiye? Ha thik hai. Gunjaan ke bare me accha bola hai (soft tone). Per phir bhi gudiya ke bare me to bura bola haina (angry tone). Or gudiya to tera buchpan ki dost hai. Yaar girlfrnd ayi to keya best frnd ko bhool jayega. Nehi maine thik hi kiya. Koi mere samne gudiya se kuch kahe ye main seh nehi sakta.

 

 

At music room

 

Gunjaan was listing music. Suddenly nupur has come.

 

N : Hi gunzi. Keisi hai?

 

G : thik hu. Tum keise ho?

 

N : I m rocking.

 

Gunjaan ke pass baithe baithe

 

N : accha gunzi tujhe Monkey I mean mayank keisa lagta hai?

 

G : kiyu? Aise kiyu poochrahi ho?

 

N : nehi! Bus aise hi pooch rahi thi. Bolna?

 

G : accha hai.

 

N : srif accha ? or kuch nehi? (disappointed tone)

 

G : kiyu ? or kuch bhi  kehna chahiye tha keya?

 

N : nehi per who to tere bareme bohot kuch bol raha tha.

 

G : accha? Keya? (who bhi itni interested nehi hai)

 

N :(herself)( behenji kahi ki. Itni vhao kiyu kharahi hai. Isse to shukur gujar hona chahiye ke monkey ne isse like kiya).  kehraha tha ke gunjaan bohot sweet, sophisticated hai or bohot intelligent bhi hai. Balke who to darraha hai ke usski badle me tu na iss bar top karle.( loud tone)

 

G : (smile) accha? Phir to usse mujhse nehi samrat se darna chahiye. Kiyui ki samrat Delhi me usski college ka topper rehchuka hai. Usse harana namumkin hai.

 

N : (Angry tone) keya ? keya kaha tune? Dekh Mayank ke liey kisi bhi cheej namumkin nehi hai? Or mayank ko kisise bhi darne ki koi jaroorat nehi hai. excel college ka topper Mayank tha or Mayank hi rahega.

 

Nupur bhi gusse me waha chli ati hai.

 

Nupur walking and thinking himself: Mujhe gunjaan se iss tarah se gussa nehi hona chahiye tha. Monkey sunega to naraz ho jayega. Per ussne aisa kiyu bola? Lekin ussne samrat ke bareme to accha bola haina. Mujhe to khush hona chaiye. Sam to mera boyfrnd haina? Monkey bhi to meri bestfrnd hai. Pyaar mila to keya dosti bhool jayegi? Nehi maine thi hi kiya.

 

At corridor

 

Mayank and Nupur banged on  each other.

 

M: uffffffffffffffff.

 

N : uffffffff. akhe hai ya button. Dekhkar nehi chalsakta?

 

M : tu kiyu apne akho ko asmaan me rakhkar chalrahi thi?

 

N : dekh?( Phir usse gunjaan ke baat yaad ati hai). Tujhe or koi nehi mila pyaar karne ke liy? Chashmish, behenji kahiki. Samajhti keya hai apne aap ko? (angry tone)

 

M : tujhe bhi or koi nehi mili pyaar karne ke liye? Khaoods kahi ka.

 

N : dekh tu samrat ke bareme aise maat bol. main usse pyaar karti hu.

 

M : Tu bhi gunjaan ke bareme aise maat bol. Mai bhi to usse pyaar karta hu.

 

N : wah . keya chun chun ke namune dhoond he pyaar karne ke liye.

 

M : accha! To tu konsa asmaan ka tara dhoondliya hai pyaar karne ke liye?

 

N : dekh tu mujhse iss tarah baat mat kar.

 

M : tub hi maat kar.

 

( dono hi gusse me chup ho jata hai)

 

Than mayank put his hand on her shoulder

 

M : Gudiya? (soft tone)

 

N : maine kaha na mujhse baat maat kar (angry tone)

 

M : Gudiya! Agar hum dono hi ladne lage to plan ka keya hoga?

 

N : (thinking) ha ye to sahi baat hai. Agar hum hi ladenge to plan ka to raam naam sath ho hi jayega.

 

M : To phir frnds?

 

N : Forever.

 

Than they hug each other. After a while Mayank broke the hug and said.

 

M : mere pass ek plan hai.

 

N : keya?

 

M : batata hu. Batata hu. Have patience yaar. Tu to bus jaisa main kehta hu waisa hi kar.

 

Phir Mayank kano me nupur ko apna plane batata hai.

 

N : uff monkey tu bhi na (happily) .

 

M : janta hu. I m the best. (Apna shirt ki collar ko raise karte huye) ab dekhta hu. Ye samrat bachkar jata kaha hai.(smiling)

 

Hey guys. Pls do read nd comment on it. Tumlogoki comment ki bohot importance hai meri liye.

 

With love

 

Tapoor

 

 

Edited by Tapoor - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi sweety

Awesome part.

Here Samrat is totally different. He is  as like as our bookish mayank of mjht

And Mayank as like as our mjht samrat.

Loved the conversation of gunur and sayank

Both nups and mayu possessive 4 each other.

Hey dear loved it so much.

Keep updating.

Thanx 4 pm





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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyyy tapoor
Thatttt was an awsome blossom update
I really really loved it
Nd we all know that mayank aur nupur main hote hote pyaar ho hi jaayega
But for now waiting to know wat their plan is
Thanx for the pm dear
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Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi sweety

Awesome part.

Here Samrat is totally different. He is  as like as our bookish mayank of mjht

And Mayank as like as our mjht samrat.

Loved the conversation of gunur and sayank

Both nups and mayu possessive 4 each other.

Hey dear loved it so much.

Keep updating.

Thanx 4 pm





 
faria. bujhtesina kemon responce pabo. mon valo lagtesena. but shob kisur jonno tomake onek onek thanks.
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Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyy tapoor
Thatttt was an awsome blossom update
I really really loved it
Nd we all know that mayank aur nupur main hote hote pyaar ho hi jaayega
But for now waiting to know wat their plan is
Thanx for the pm dear

 
Thanks a lot dear. thanks 4 liking my ff .  
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapoor

 
faria. bujhtesina kemon responce pabo. mon valo lagtesena. but shob kisur jonno tomake onek onek thanks.



respone er tension koro na. inshallah valo reponse  e pabe. r na holeu khoti nei. bcoz tomar lekha to r kharap hoini. eta onek onek valo 1 ta update hoyese.
all the best dear
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respone er tension koro na. inshallah valo reponse  e pabe. r na holeu khoti nei. bcoz tomar lekha to r kharap hoini. eta onek onek valo 1 ta update hoyese.
all the best dear

 
Actually faria mujhe lagraha hai ke main update me apne andar ka jo emotion who thik tarah se express nehi karpa rahi hu. or ye baat mujhe bohot hurt karrahi hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey tapoor nice part dear
sammy to buhat sadu hai yaar.........
n mayank n nupur defend each other waooooo that was great
do cont soon
aur han pm pe link bi post kr dena tha.....isse aasani hoti hai parne main...
ok update next soon..
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Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey tapoor nice part dear
sammy to buhat sadu hai yaar.........
n mayank n nupur defend each other waooooo that was great
do cont soon
aur han pm pe link bi post kr dena tha.....isse aasani hoti hai parne main...
ok update next soon..

 
so sweet of u honey. thanks 4 the comment. or main ff me nayi hu na issiliye samajh nehi payi. soory. age se link bhi post kardoongi