Hote Hote Pyaar Hogaya (Mayur ff)part-8 pg-53 - Page 7

Tumpa

tune to mujhe mar hi  dalegi yaar. meri ff main hi itna sare mistakes rehta hai, ki mein keya kahu. teri tu aisa kuch bhi nehi hai. tu mujhse jaida acchi likhti hai.

ok dear here  i tried at my best to correct it. but u know na i m very poor in hindi . so i apolize to all of u for any mistake.

ok now come to the update

Awww sweety,

Very very nice update yaar.

Loved it so much.

It was tooooooo gooooooood.

Ok I m coming to the update point by point,

First -the example of samrat shajahan and tajmahel. It was so nice.

2^nd  -nups teased  mayu by kitabi khana,that means tu kitabo ka fry, kitabo ka vharta or kitabo ki curry. Oh it was so funny and cute.

3^rd-  vegetable  fight in the kitchen. It reminds me the cute scene  b/w mayur at chunky mishra house.

4^th- mayu  ki palak paneer khana(without salt). It was the bestest part of ur update.

Mayank did it just bcoz of Nupur. So sweet of our mayu.

And lastly they feel some kind of strange feelings 4 each other.

Hmm abhi to kuch suru ho raha hai.

I totally loved every bit of it .

Great update dear.

Keep it up.