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Posted: 14 years ago
hi meri jaan !! tune to meri jaan hi nikal di yaar !!! how shud i tell u tht how much i got affected by this os. everything was sooo pure & heart wrenching yaar !! Shabdo mein bayaa karna bahut mushkil hai. u shud have seen my expressions, kabhi frowning, kabhi darr to kabhi ajeeb si bechaini.

& like mallu said, i also wanna tell u 1 thing tht u shud never ask wether to continue or not. i m not saying this coz u r my jaanu or something, but bcoz i know tht whenever u write stuff u always excel in that & also i m sure u always try to make it muc much more better than the previous one.
so aisa sawaal phir kiya na to joote chappal nahi, pen ki ink padegi, samjhi???? ab jaldi se aage ka bhi update kardein, agar mann karein to kyunki is week ke episodes ke baad to woh thoda sa mushkil hain.

& i m really so sorry tht i read ur os just 2 days back.

loads of love
vinu jaanu 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

 

Hey guys

I had to inform u

My jaan requested me to change this ss into ff n I will be changing it into one

 

As usual me n simi got exited n choked up the whole story

Which as usual was basically hers n not mine……….

So guys m going to write this ff.. it will basically be a long short story having some 20 to 22 parts that's it…

Guys this part is not that good but from next part there will be better things cmg up or so I hope….

Pls read n comment

 

N one information

 

After few more days I will be highly inactive in the forums 4 two months

So the updates won't be fast ..

They'll be very very slow

 

Sorry 4 that pls bear with me guys

Lov

Dolly n simi

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Adhiraj.. was distracted…. Gunjan was lieing there covered in blood….the bullet meant for him had choosen her ….

Seeing samrat's condition was making him more desperate every second

 

 

He noticed ..students filling in the bb.court… all of them showcased horror striken expressions….suhani n diya being the specific in them…

He didn't notice when the goon tried to escape…

A hit.. a blow over his head made him scream…………..

It provided the distraction that the hooligan needed n within seconds he was out of the court…………….

Adhiraj was kneeling down on the floor ,,, the sudden force of the blow n the accompanying sharp edged pain made his thoughts un clear for a moment….

But then he heard suhani's shriek..

 

 

"ADHIRAAAAAAAAAAJJJJJJ"

 

He looked up….though His vision was blurred he could still see her running towards him… he tried to control his expressions….this was not the time when anyone needed to worry about him……

 

He got up,, n by the time suhani was able to reach him,, he was in perfect control of himself……the jabs of pain across his head didn't make any appearances in his expressions…

 

Su—adhiraj tum theek ho

(saying so she tried touching adi's hair…which he resisted)

 

A—I am fine suhani…. Suhani lets get gunjan to hospital first pls….

 

a change of expression on suhani's face…. A moment's distraction in form of adhiraj had made her forget about gunjan for a while….

 

 

Uday n benji had by now approached samrat n they were asking him too get up… but samrat wasn't responding … he kept sitting there on the floor..looking at gunjan,,, his eyes dead… tears dried up n face no longer showcasing any emotion…..

Things weren't looking that good….

 

 

Adhiraj  reached samrat n shook him..

A = samrat pls chalo hummein gunjan ko bachana hai lets go pls…

A jerk…samrat looked at adhiraj though his face was still blank …..

 

Samrat had reacted to the name of gunjan.. it took adhiraj only seconds to understand this……………

 

A – samrat hum mein tumahari chashmish ko bachana hai.. pls she'll die.. lets go .

 

Samrat moved so fast that it looked impossible…

One second he was on floor with gunjan in his arms ….

N the next second he was walking across the court cradling gunjan …

He was fast .. by the time the gang realised what had happened samrat was already out of the basket ball court…..

 

 

They reached the college parking area ..n saw samrat moving in direction of his car….yes today he had come in a car ..he had to pick up gunjan 4 the party n gunjan has said that it will be inconvenient 4 her to ride on a bike…..

 

Strange were the ways of providence ….

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SCENE 2=

Lilawati hospital(area in front of ER)

Dia is  currently completeing all the formalities …

Doctors had said that the girl's case was critical n she needed to be operated upon quickly..the bullet had to be removed as soon as possible……………….

 

It was a police case , there by police was needed to be informed too..

Adhiraj n benji  had gone to fulfil that job…

Dia sighned the sheets with trembling hands ,, her tears already smudging the forms….

 

She gave the signed sheets back to the ward boy n broke down completely….

Her sobs though weren't high on pitch magnitude yet still the expressions of pain n fear on her face were un endurable…

seeing her condition uday ran forward n hugged her..

 

U= deeds aap mat ro pls….gunjan meri sabse sweet sis hai usko kuch nahin hoga..aap dekhna…

 

Strange are the relations ,, uday was saying to his sister to stop crying  n yet he himself was unable to stop his silent tears….

Everyone was shaken,,, the last few minutes had changed everything so very completely…..

suhani was just observing samrat…samrat who had not spoken a single word from the moment gunjan had lost consiousness…

all the while,,,his face had supported the same dead look…

There was nothing to see on his face,, no pain ,no fear, no hope ,,it was absolutely blank….

N this nothing ness was much difficult to endure ..

Samrat was standing beside the ER door ..

the doctors had gone to prepare the OT  for operation .. while the ward boys were send with a stretcher to bring gunjan till the OT………………….

They picked up gunjan rather carelessly..

Next second samrat was inside the room, ,n giving murderous glares to the wardboys who backed off from him…

He himself picked up gunjan,,his hands cradling her in the lightest way possible …he hardlt jostled her n placed her lightly on the stretcher…

Then he moved the stretcher carefully out of the room n moved it towards the OT on the same floor………………

He wasn't allowed to enter the OT..

No one was allowed….

A strange silence fell in the corridor…dia was no longer crying she was sitting with uday in a corner,, her head on his shoulder n her face hidden in his jacket….

Uday ket patting her awkwardly from time to time…..

He was never required to calm down his sister b4,,

suhani was too frightened n shocked to react in any way possible..

she just kept looking at her brother ,who was once again silent…

 

samrat wasn't reacting to anything.. his face had again turned expressionless as b4…the anger that he had shown towards the ward boys no longer marked his face..

suhani was afraid to approach him.. samrat looked strong n brittle at the same time.. she didn't know what to make out from all this…

 

adhiraj n benji returned n they almost came running down the corridor to join the gang..

benji approached samrat whil adhiraj stood beside suhani

 

B—samrat.. gunjan kaisi hai???

S—(looking at OT's door) patanahin..

 

Benji kept looking at samrat confused ,, he had never heard this voice of samrat b4 it sounded so empty,,, even suhani was shockedon hearing samrat's voice..

Adhiraj looked at suhani 4 answeres n suhani just looked back at him desperately .. unable to give her back any answeres ….

 

A—samrat hum police station gaye the humne complaint likhva di hai n even us ladke k sketches banva diye hain .. police un logon go jaldi hi pakad lenge …

Samrat just nodded without taking his eyes off the door…

Adhiraj looked helplessly at benji ..

No one knew how to react…

The silence stretched on…

It was broken once again n this time by samrat..

 

S—adhiraj pls tum bauji aur bui ko inform kardo n nupur ko bhi ..unko kaho ki vo jaldi pahunch jayein…

 

Samrat said all this while looking at the OT's door.. his voice was empty as b4 ..

But there was a strange urgency in his words

As if not much time was left with them……………..

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Oki guys that's all 4 now .. I know this part wasn't good at all sorry 4 that.. but I promise from next part onwards there will be a lot of activities going on…

 

Precap==

Bauji is looking angrily at mayank n a crying nupur… his face showed no pity ..

A hand on his shoulder…

He turns around to see samrat standing in front of him with folded hands…

 

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Posted: 14 years ago

ok dolly teri dictionary mai urgency ka matlab kya hota hai

i mean mujhe teri urgency ka matlab kuch khatarnak lag raha hai
plz kuch ulta sidha mat update karna warna teri bandh baja dungi 😆
chal ab mujhsa gussa math ho yaar just joking but i seriously think ki tu next update mai zrur kuch gadbad karna wali hai kya i dont know
anyways plz continue soon
as it was nice awesome blossom fantastic update
n thanx for the pm jaan 😊
 
ur love
sana.😳
Edited by sana866 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee ud dollyyyyyy...
it ws mindblowinggg as usual..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzz cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..Edited by sajanroxx20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

grt part...cont soon

                        lota of love ATTITUDE BABY

      

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Posted: 14 years ago

yaar har baar bolna padega

that it's awesome, nice ,superb
well it's excellent
continue soon
u rock
luv ya
 
Edited by ---ishita--- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
dolly check my comment jaan
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Posted: 14 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sana866

ok dolly teri dictionary mai urgency ka matlab kya hota hai

i mean mujhe teri urgency ka matlab kuch khatarnak lag raha hai
plz kuch ulta sidha mat update karna warna teri bandh baja dungi 😆
chal ab mujhsa gussa math ho yaar just joking but i seriously think ki tu next update mai zrur kuch gadbad karna wali hai kya i dont know
anyways plz continue soon
as it was nice awesome blossom fantastic update
n thanx for the pm jaan 😊
 
ur love
sana.😳

u know me soo wellll love u jaan n i'll update soon may be today itself😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sajanroxx20

awesomeeeeeeeeeeee ud dollyyyyyy...
it ws mindblowinggg as usual..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzz cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

thanks jyoti sooo much lov ya 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
This content was originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

grt part...cont soon

                        lota of love ATTITUDE BABY

      

thanks attitude baby
 
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dolly😳