ff=(mjht)..v-day bash.the end.(part 6,pg23)du c:-) - Page 7

awesome update.loved it.too good.emotional also. continue soon dear.

great part!!
amazing work!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww awesome update dear..enjoyed reading it!!!! luved it..very impressivve!!! all da parts were really cute...jst like u dolly!!

hi jaanu !!

1st of all congrats for making this ss into FF & thanku also to u and simi for getting this idea.
now coming to the update, just answer my 1 question, why u didn't like this part jaan??
i m not saying ki, "kaisi ladki hai??? itna acha likhke kahti hai ki i didnt liked it at all". No its not in tht way, i just wanna know, what made u think tht its not a good part. Coz if u r saying this then let me tell u, romance or comedy or beauty is not the only thing in a ff or a story. other emotions ko cover karna bhi bahut zaroori ho jata hai, which u have done soo well tht i m so proud of u jaan. U have again proved tht u r 1 of the finest writers & simi, the finest thinkers.😊 I loved it. & kah de rahi hun jaldi se update kar and mere ss mein bhi reserved ko hata jaldi, warna tere liye hospital mein bed reserve karna padega😉

loads of love
vinu

hiii dolly and simi

Part 3

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[samrat's outhouse,terrace]

 

Nupur had never felt this happy in her life b4..

Everything was soo beautiful,, so complete..

What else was their to enjoy beyond this????

 

She looked into mayank's eyes n smiled.. a small tear marked her cheek…..

Mayank erased the lone tear with the aid of his lips..

He was smiling too..

No one of them had ever imagined,, that lov could bring so much happiness to them..

It redefined their existence.. redefined their dimensions…

It was pure n it was majestic….

It was serene n godlike…

It was the biggest treasure of life…

N they both had excess to this treasure……

They both had excess to love….

 

They had been so different n yet in this moment they were one..

Nupur looked at mayank again..

He was looking adorable today..

White did suited him..

No wonder it was his favourite colour….

Mayank traced her fingers b4 proceeding to do the same with her cheeks n neck……..

Both of them had an increased heart beat…………

 

 

A RING ….

 

Who the hell created this phone..

By god if nupur by any means could have excess to graham bell she would have killed him for sure….

The phone ringed again

This was for tenth time in the past few minutes…

Mayank was actually feeling that his friends were behind this goof up…

But how could they plan to destroy this so special day of his life with their meaningless pranks?????

 

He would kill who so ever was on phone literally..

M= nupur mein dekh k aaya k kaun hai.. may be its something important..

Nupur didn't offer any response she was busy designing plans to murder graham bell for his ghastly invention called phone…..

 

 

[hall, samrat's outhouse.mayank picks up the phone rather angrily]

M= kya hai…

 

Their was no response ,just some mild sounds coming from background that he couldn't recognise in his anger..

M= kaun hai.. dekh benji agar yeh tu hai.. to by god mein tujhe zinda nahi chodunga……………………..

 

He hears someone sobbing silently..

Dia???

What the hell was she crying for???

Mayank's anger disappeared in the next second to be replaced by anxiety..

Suddenly the night didn't look as beautiful as b4….

 

M== dia dia kya hua.. tum ro kyun rahi ho??

D== mayank …… mayank ..vo ..gunjan…

Her voice breaks again n this time she starts crying uncontrollably on the phone….

 

M== hell dia what happened .. kya hua gunjan ko..

Dia plsss batao mujhe

Dia tried controlling her sobs.. by stifling her fist in her mouth.. but the grief and the fear had her in tight bounds…

The fear of losing someone this close was indeed terrible…

Uday took the cell from her n answered mayank

U== mayank mein uday bol raha hun..

M== uday yeh ho kya raha hai.. dia aise kyun ro rahi hai .. kya hua gunjan ko???

 

Uday who just a moment b4 was in control of himself suddenly felt breaking down…

The fear n anxiety in mayank's voice was the reason 4 it..

How could he tell him simply that there lives had changed??

Nupur … nupur was with him too.

How was he going to tell her????

 

M== UDAY GODDAMMED TELL ME…

Mayank literally shouted….. suddenly he felt as if his world was breaking apart..

Something ominous had happened.. n he was afraid that his intuition was right…

 

U== mayank …aaj college mein kuch gundae aaye the.. aur aur ..unhone gunjan ko shoot kar diya………….

M= huh??

U== gunjan ki haalat bahut khrab hai mayank.. hum log is waqt lilawati hospital mein hain…..tum dono jaldi aa jao pls..

M== gunjan ko shoot?????

U=haan tum dono….

M= mein nupur ko kaise bata….

U== main nahin jaanta tum bas use lekar aa jao pls..

M== samrat… vo kaisa..(mayank's voice breaks too)

Uday doesn't respond .. yet still his silence was an answer enough for mayank…

He disconnected the call.. n crumpled on the sofa below..

How could everything change so suddenly??

Love gave them happiness..but how could it give so much pain too??

Mayank didn't realise when his eyes were full of tears…

Nupur how was he going to tell her.. how???

She was soo happy n how could he …

A strange fear engulfed him.. what if what if.gunjan never came back..

 

No no mayank don't think that way..

Samrat.. what about him.. uday didn't answer..

Mayank got up.. he had a job to do,… he had to tell nupur abt this n then had to reach the hospital.. all of them needed to be together…

He got up n turned..

He saw a stupefied nupur standing at the door way,,,

She must have hear him shouting…then she must have cum runiing down…

Did she see him going to pieces like this????

Nupur looked horror striken..

She had no idea what had happened ..but seeing mayank crumpling like that had been an ominous sign n then she had heard gunjan's name ..she was involved..

What happened to her..

She looked at mayank..

His features were terrified ,,she has never seen him like this.. mayank had always been composed ..

The only times that she has seen him in pain were

First when samrat had met with that accident n the second one when she was going to be married off to someone else…

 

But that pain was nothing compared to what his eyes showcased now………………

Nupur approached him.

N== kya hua mayank?????

Mayank didn't answer he wasn't prepared 4 this..

Nupur's fear was increasing by every paasing second n mayank's silent deamenour wasn't helping……..

N== mayank pls batao mujhe kya hua???..tum gunjan k bare mein kya baat kar rahe the??? Aur tum aise kyun…

Saying so she wiped off the fresh tears in mayank's eyes…

N== kya hua mayank pls mujhe………

 

Nupur's sentence was cut off in between ,by a sudden n intense higg from mayank….

M== she 'll be fine ,, hum use kuch nahi hone denge nupur..

Saying so she huuged her tigter then b4..

Gunjan was hurt .. terrible…her gunjan was hurt..

Nupur changed in one perfect statue..not able to comprehend anything further….

M== nupr hummein abhi hospital jaana hai..

He ended the hug..

N cupped nupur's face in his hand..

M== nupur hum sab log saath hain .. tu…tum ghabrana mat hum gunjan ko kahin nahi jaane denge…

 

 

Nupur simple nodded..

She still wasn't reacting..

Her brain refused to feel the pain …. The pain would be too much..

She won't be able to handle it….

 

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Bauji is looking angrily at mayank n a crying nupur… his face showed no pity ..

A hand on his shoulder…

He turns around to see samrat standing in front of him with folded hands…

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Police staition ..adhiraj n benji shouting at the officials in visible anger…

A= aap log yeh kya keh rahe hain

Mujhe phone aaya tha k un ladkon ko pakd liya gaya hai ..n now u r saying k aapko koi nahin milla

Police== dekhiye aap log hummein humara kaam na samjhaiye..

B== hummein samjhana padega .. meine us ladke ko abhi yahan se jate dekha aap log aisa nahi kar sakte….

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Ok guys this was 4 today.. sorry 4 delay.. n sanu n jyoti u people were right I can never ever update in time..

Simi did beat me up severly 4 the delay

 

Sorry guys

Lov ya all

Dolly devi

 

 

Awesome update but kitna short update tha!!!!!!

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heyyya amazng update hopeu continue soon.... loved it....