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Hi everyone!!
first things first i'm fiza a big PraSh fan this my 1st attempt at a FF. The character sketch is up, and part one will be up very soon . Enjoy and please comment with feedback of wheather u liked it or not and If should continue. Good or bad??? Anything.
Here it goes........( the storys is very different to the original Pyaar Ka Bandhan story line)
Here it goes........( the storys is very different to the original Pyaar Ka Bandhan story line)
LOVE AJJ KAL
Character Sketch:
The Manhortra's
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SHASHANK MANHORTRA: 27 yrs old .a very loving man who has a very successfulfashion house which is one of the biggest fashion houses in india.. is married to ARAINA for about 5 years , is a loving,suportive husband and is doing his best to be a good husband from his side of the marriage. thinks it's time they havea child. he is open minded doesn't mind his wife working but feels she should also fulfil the duties of a wife. He use to be aA very chilled out dude, that believed life should be lived with no tension but lost himself through the years . he becomes serious when it ARAINA. use to be Very flirty type of a guy,(thats how ARAINA fell 4 him) but believed in his true love which hethought he found in ARAINA. life is good but could be way better
ARAINA MANHORTRA: 23 yrs old. .Her Dreamwas to be a superModel and she is one of the biggest models in india .She couldn't have done with out her husband SHASHANK. who doesn't mind her working as a model. but hates the fact he keepsnaging her abt being agood wife and starting a family. but feels she cant at this point in time of her career she's at the top.. she is the showstopper in everyshowand wants to manatin her figure she use to bea very bubbly girl but now sucess has changed her. she is veryarrogant she is hot and she knows it not afraid to use her looks 4 anything becuz it always works. her perfessional part of life is great but thinks her homely part ties her down even without having kids.
RONAK RAI: 27 yrs old:he is india's # 1Fashion photographer.. his career is at the top his company is one of big ones in the country. Married toPRATEEKSHA for5 years . . He THOUGHT he WAS a good responsbile husband untill that one night 3 yrs ago. but He still thinks he is good to her by is earning and supportting her. and by giving her a really high class living big mansionBMW'S, best saris ,jewls,servents drivers money etc..caring very demanding greedy,Egotistic (me me me) .Has a little attiude problem .. does not take any nonsense from others not even his wife ..most people who dont know him might take him like a angry young man type! is willing to let PRATEEKSHA go bak 2 work if she wants. Hates the rain it make him feel even more gulity for what happend that night .
The Manhortra's
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SHASHANK MANHORTRA: 27 yrs old .a very loving man who has a very successfulfashion house which is one of the biggest fashion houses in india.. is married to ARAINA for about 5 years , is a loving,suportive husband and is doing his best to be a good husband from his side of the marriage. thinks it's time they havea child. he is open minded doesn't mind his wife working but feels she should also fulfil the duties of a wife. He use to be aA very chilled out dude, that believed life should be lived with no tension but lost himself through the years . he becomes serious when it ARAINA. use to be Very flirty type of a guy,(thats how ARAINA fell 4 him) but believed in his true love which hethought he found in ARAINA. life is good but could be way better
ARAINA MANHORTRA: 23 yrs old. .Her Dreamwas to be a superModel and she is one of the biggest models in india .She couldn't have done with out her husband SHASHANK. who doesn't mind her working as a model. but hates the fact he keepsnaging her abt being agood wife and starting a family. but feels she cant at this point in time of her career she's at the top.. she is the showstopper in everyshowand wants to manatin her figure she use to bea very bubbly girl but now sucess has changed her. she is veryarrogant she is hot and she knows it not afraid to use her looks 4 anything becuz it always works. her perfessional part of life is great but thinks her homely part ties her down even without having kids.
RONAK RAI: 27 yrs old:he is india's # 1Fashion photographer.. his career is at the top his company is one of big ones in the country. Married toPRATEEKSHA for5 years . . He THOUGHT he WAS a good responsbile husband untill that one night 3 yrs ago. but He still thinks he is good to her by is earning and supportting her. and by giving her a really high class living big mansionBMW'S, best saris ,jewls,servents drivers money etc..caring very demanding greedy,Egotistic (me me me) .Has a little attiude problem .. does not take any nonsense from others not even his wife ..most people who dont know him might take him like a angry young man type! is willing to let PRATEEKSHA go bak 2 work if she wants. Hates the rain it make him feel even more gulity for what happend that night .
PRATEEKSHA RAI: 23 yrs old.Very simple and straight forward girl.Wanted to be the best fashion Designer in the world! but got married to Ronak at a young age of 18. she married him becuz she was really attractive to him and thought she was was madly in love with him( untill 2 yrs after they were married when he showed his true colors and that one night.They have been married for 5 yrs. she Is a loving Caring Supportive Wife and wishes only if that ronak would have be just as supportive 2 her 3 yrs ago life would have been diffrent forboth of them... Feels that some how they have lost each other because of ronaks attiude and selfisheness and decsions each other and feels their is lack of love and understanding from from ronaks side and feels she should look for work to keep her busy and not think abt what happend in her life 3yr ago. hates the rain it brings back painful memories
The Das's
AZIZ DAS: He is mixed personalitly. funloving prankster,Very caring toward his family, but strong in his Textiles business. Married toSUHANI and they have a 2 yr old son Nihaal.he is very happy in his family life and grateful to having a loving wife as SUHANI. and isPRATEEKSHA Bro he thinks she ishappy in her married life even after the all shes gone through.
AZIZ DAS: He is mixed personalitly. funloving prankster,Very caring toward his family, but strong in his Textiles business. Married toSUHANI and they have a 2 yr old son Nihaal.he is very happy in his family life and grateful to having a loving wife as SUHANI. and isPRATEEKSHA Bro he thinks she ishappy in her married life even after the all shes gone through.
SUHANI. Das: A lovely positive girl, she had only 1 dream to get married to a guy who luved ur and kept her happy(which came true ) She believesshe found her true loveAzizshe is a little inhibted when it comes 2 her weight but her Aziz,big bro Ronak and best friend /bhabi and nand PRATEEKSHAalways make her feel as the top of the world, they do any thing to boost her selfconfidence. she knows prats not happy in her marriage cause her bro ronak never undertood her and was very Egotistic and has time no for her he only wants to earn money.
New Entery
Ishita manhotra: is Shashank little sister and Partner in crime and use to be Araina's best friend but feels that araina has changed too much after her success. Is just like her bro is such a prankster has a great sense of humor her innocent one liners are always funny. Waiting for her Mr. Macho she always is fascinated with rough and tough bad boys types. Is an upcoming model but is really a match maker she always sets people up. Fun loving, coo land a total girly girl.
Milind Bose: Shanks best friend since they were kids,cool laid back ,not as much a Prankster like shank is but knows how to have fun n luvs devika
Devika Gupta: She is Prats, Sumo n Ishita's best freind ,she is politicians daughterand loves Milind ,sweet,innocent loving, caring
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hey guys here's the teaser
ch 1 will b up soon hope u like it do comment and give ur feedbak.
Teaser
I slid the pink heel into my Feet. The mehndi on my feet dark as ever, that was a sign he would love me forever. I smiled, and as usuaal i could feel the blush on my cheeks. I got up from the bed and walked over to my dresser taking a seat on the small chair in front of it. I observed my self in the mirror, My face, my eyes showed the happiness inside of me, the love i felt for him and my destiney that would lead me to being his forever.
"Parteeksha Wow, baby you look awsome." My sweet and rocking husbands sister Suhani. "Turly bohat achi lag rahi hoo." She placed her kajol on me as i smiled. "But i have to, compare to your brother i look like a simple girl." Suhani fixed my bindi. "In my opnion you look like an angel sweety." She said placing her hand on my cheek. "You seem a bit too happy today." Why wouldnt i be, my life would change and my mr perfect. Mr.Rounak would be mine today, and i would be his for now and forever. Again the blush peeked on my cheeks.
Everything about Rounak made me happy, his way of life, the way he talked, smiled, looked at me. EVERYTHING about him was perfect, he was perfect and he would keep me happy. Today my life would change for better and all of my dreams will be reailty.
Will Her Dreams Come Ture? Will She BE Happy With Her Prince? Or Has Destiney Planned Something Else For Her? Stay Tonned to Love Aaj Kal to Find out.
CH 1 on pg 2
CH2 on pg 3
CH3 on pg 4
CH4 on pg5
CH5 on pg7
CH6 on pg9
CH7 on pg10
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