Originally posted by: Aneeka_GS
Hey mirchi missy, very nice story and ideas u got there, makes me want to create stories as well, keep it up darl me give 10 outta 10 for all chaps π
Ch 4
In the car Shashank is holding Preteeksha's hand tight so she doesn't try to run away even though the doors are locked while driving
Preteeksha ( yelling at the top of her lungs and trying to pull her hands away ): let go of my hand haath choro.
Shashank driving stops at the light Suddenly Preteeksha jerks her head up her hair hits Shashank face .
He looks up at her she is starting to yell at him but he is so lost in her beauty he doesn't hear one word she is saying .
Preteeksha: tum kaun ho, aur tum mere saath yeh sab kya hai just leave my hand let go of me
light turns to green but Shashank is just stairing into her beautiful eye's suddenly from the back lots of people are honking for him to go.* beep beep beep*
Shashank gets back to reality and starts driving again thinking to himself : Shashank tum ko kya hogaya hai woh tumhare dost ki gf hai aur tum iss ko aise dehkre ho come on shanks focus .
Preteeksha with tears in her eyes : for the last time tum kaun ho, aur tum mere saath yeh sab kya hai just leave my hand let go of me or else mein tumne nahin chorogi I will not leave u, forget about me mere pati wont spare you he will put behind bars .
Shashank thinking to himself and smiling : wah kya pyar hai yeh Milind ko itna pyar karte ki abhi sai apna pati maanti hai, aww how cute is that⦠Milind is really very lucky.
Preteeksha: your smiling omg! Tum pagal ho ,mein ek pagal kay saath hoon, bachao bachao koi hai bachao!
Shashank: What me Pagal noooo no dehko tum plz don't cry ,I hate to see tear in any one's eyes ( he gives her his hankie) I will explain everything to you sirf chup hojao .
Shashank: the love of your life has sent me here to get you and mein kaun ho I'm Bonds James bond haha just kidding we have never met before but I'm your pyar's best friends since childhood Shashank.
Preteeksha thinking to herself : kya yeh sab is because of Raunak has sent him to do this par kyun.
I know all of Raunak's Friends he never once has talked about this Shashank to me .
In suhaani's and devika's car
Devika is driving Suhaani is in the front with nihaal
Suhaani; Devika yeh kya hua hai I hope prats is ok warnaa mian bhaiya ko kaise face kar sakti hoon
Devika: don't worry suhaani she will be fine have faith sab theek hoga
Oh no
Suhaani: kya
Devika: Yeh toh Milind ka neighborhood hai yeh sab Milind ka kiya kara hai sure of it.
Suhaani: what laken kyun
At Milind's house
Shashank and Preteeksha walk inside the house
Shashank: Arey my rajesh khanna where are you I have bought your spano ki rani
Milind comes running to Shashank thanks yaar you're the best so where is she?
Shashank points to Prateeksha there she is
Milind whispers to ShaShank : yeh kaun hai
Shashank: your lady love
Milind: u idiot u brought the wrong girl
Shashank: Kya Sh*#@!
Prateeksha looking at Shashank : you said ki tum Raunak kay Dost ho phir yeh kaun hai Raunak kahan hai?
Shashank: Raunak Who's Raunak
Prateeksha:Raunak meri pati tuhare dost
Shashank: Pati oh no dehko I'm really very sorry bohot baari misunderstanding hogaya hai mein gaalti se I thought tum Milind ki gf haan aur phir mein aap ko
Prateeksha: kya what u kidnapped me and brought me and on top of that u lied to me bachao bachao koi hai bachao! (she starts wacking him with her bag )
Milind comes in between to stop her from hitting him but instead she starting hitting as well
Devika and Suhaani hear bachao bachao koi hai bachao! And come running in the house they see her hitting them with her bag.
Devika: Milind Alekh Bose What !@#$%&* is going on here ! I am 100% sure ki sab tumne ka kiya kara hai .
All of a sudden Prateeksha stops hitting them ( but her bag accidentally hits Shashank really hard below the belt right where it hurts for guys)then runs to Devika and Suhaani
Shasahank: bends over in pain *uff tum ne yeh kya kardiya abhi tak mein baap nahin bana hoon *.
Milind whisper to shanks : yaar shanks r u ok it look like that was painful, oh no Devika called me by my full name thanks to u I'm dead.
Suhaani: Prats tum theek ho (wiping her tears ) don't worry we are here now everything
Will fine.
Preteeksha:Devika u know these kidnapers
Devika:Prats they not kidnapers at least not Milind he is my boyfriend the I was telling guys about .
Prateeksha: boyfriend devika u sure u want to marry him , I mean you know what they say na u can always tell man by his friends that where the saying a man best friend is a dog comes from and that's y they act like them .
Devika: Prats he is not like that
Suhaani: some one plz explain how this happened.
Shashank: I will explain milind wanted some alone time with Devika but he was scared of her papa so I asked him where is was he said u guys were shopping so we went to go get her but I mistook her as Devika.
Suhaani: how did u get confused
Shashank: all he told me was she is wearing polka dots and hoop earrings and has shiny black hair
So I looked up saw her and she fit the description .
Prateeksha: You saw that I was wearing polka dots and hoop earrings and have shiny black hair, but didn't see my sindoor or my magalsutra ,I even told u that my pati wont spare u even then u didn't find out I was the wrong girl and how on earth did u come up with such a stupid idea!
Shashank: well when u said that your pati wont spare I thought u love him so much that u already take as your pati and as for the idea have u ever seen the movie Ajab Prem Ki Gazhab Kahaani I got it from there.
Prateeksha: Ajab Prem Ki Gazhab Kahaani are you serious . Bas I have had it enough is enough I can't take this nonsense any longer Suhaani, Devika lets go.( Prateeksha angerly runs out the door)
Suhaani runs after her: Preteeksha Babes wait
Devika giving him the eye's: Milind I'm so fuming we will talk about this later I'm so not done with you and walks out .
Milind: thanks a lot Shanks because of u Devika is so heated and on top of that I made such a horrible impression with her friends hope your happy.
Shashank: yaar don't worry if she is upset wait till she cools down then go and say sorry
In the car on the way back
Devika: Prats I really very sorry because of me u had to go through all of this .
Preteeksha: no it fine it's not your fault it's all because of that fool, anyways Suhaani don't say word to Aziz about this because I'm not going mention anything to your bro because he will go crazy and if Uncle finds abouts this then Devika's love story will end.
At the Rai's House
Preteeksha walks in the house it is decorated with Rose all over the house the lights are out there's only candel light thru the house and Raunak is at the table lighting the last few candles the table is set and dinner is ready .
Raunak walks over to Preteeksha kissing her hand : thank u because of you I signed a big contracted jo file Mr.Shaw ko submit karna tha woh galati se Mr. rao kay pass tah and he loved it. Aur kaal raat mein kya kya bola tum ko I'm really sorry aao you must be hungry let's eat I order your favorite food.
Prateeksha: yeah sure sirf ek minute mein fresh hokay aati thinking to herself in the bathroom Raunak never has done anything like this for me in the 5 yrs of are shaadi all of a sudden yeh sab kyun , there has to be more to this I know raunak to well just because he signed a deal he wouldn't do this.
At the table
Raunak : I order all your favorite things let's see veg chow mein, kung pao chicken, sweet and sour prawns and eggplant and tofu.
Preteeksha : thank you but you hate tofu
Raunak: no it's fine I don't mind so how was today shopping and all what did u buy
Preteeksha : oh aaj it was crazy I mean the stores where so crowded that I got lost but then I found Suhaani &Devika ,I bought lots of sari's and some shirts for you .
After dinner Preteeksha is cleaning up the table when Raunak comes behind and pulls her sari and the put his arms around her waist bends his head and kisses her neck
Preteeksha : Raunak tum yeh kya kare
Raunak: today your looking very sexy in this sari leave all this raju and shanti will clean up he picks Preteeksha up in his arms and takes her up to the room .
In the room
Raunak puts Preteeksha on the bed his cell phone falls out his pocket on the bed
Raunak :Preteeksha I will be right back tab tak tum change karo he goes down stairs
Just then his cell rings Preteeksha picks up the cell before could say hello
Prashant: hey yaar Raunak so did my idea work I'm sure you'll get some action tonight if you know what I mean and starts laughing
Preteeksha is shocked she couldn't believe her ears just then Raunak walks in she close the phone.
Raunak: putting his arms around her you haven't change yet
Preteeksha jerks his arms away turns around and gives him a tight slap across the face.
That's it for now hope you like the chapter don't forget to comment and press the like button
Precap: how will Raunak react and Shashank cant stop thing about prats .
Originally posted by: Aneeka_GS
SECOND ππ
I've only read till the end of Shashank and Prateeksha part and just the second line where Pratz says : Tum kaun ho? reminds me of the whole Pratz hitting Shanky scene in the real PKB π Shanky goes: Tum kaun ho? Main kahan hoon?π€£π€£Did that scene inspire you by any chance? πCan't wait to read the rest sooonIt's very nice! very well written π€
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