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Ch5
In the room
Preteeksha:Don't you Dare touch Me!
Raunak has is hand on his face right where he got slapped furiously he looks up at Preteeksha
Raunak yelling : PRETEEKSHA! tum ne muhje thappar kyun mara main ne kya kiya?
Preteeksha: cheekhne ,chilana se kuch nahi hota main bhi cheekh sakti hoon. Aur haan don't you try to act innocent with me Raunak Kya kiya. Itne disgusting or cheap harkat ki hai ki muhje sharm aarey hai bolne bhi . Prashant had called and you know what he said hey yaar Raunak so did my idea work I'm sure you'll get some action tonight if you know what I mean and then he started laughing …today you have really hurt me , how sick can you be …how can you disscuss are personal matters with your friends.
Raunak is so shocked:Dehko Preteeksha calm down kyun itne choti si baat ko itna baari issue banana.
Preteeksha: Choti si baat Raunak for you it might bhi choti si baat for me bhot baari baat haan. Kyun aise kya .
Raunak: Kyun ki tum kabhi muje tumhre kareeb nahi aane dehti I mean itne dooriyaan hai humare beach. For god sake I'm your husband Preteeksha I have every right tumhre pass aane laken you never let me itne dooriyaan kyun hai .
Preteeksha: Kya kareeb nahi aane dehti how can u lie like that Raunak … I have always fulfilled the duties of a good wife up in till today in fact yeh phele baar hai ki I have pushed you away from me other then that I have never refused you … aur haan doori kyun your asking me this Raunak you know exactly why even though I forgave you I still can't forget what ever happened 3 yrs ago and that horrible night and you know what Raunak you're the reason the reason for the dooriyan between us your attitude, ego and selfishness has made it happened not me. You never have time for me it's only work work and work… Every night I cry myself to sleep that one year was the worst year of my life because it showed me your true colors and who you really are and took away my dreams.
Raunak: You will never let me forget what happened na ?I know it's because of me and my attitude, ego and selfishness but you can at least cry yourself to sleep and you are very lucky u don't have to live with guilt I do. I feel so guilty for everything that happened 3years ago I still can't face you or myself for what I did ,I know I don't give you any time but I'm doing this for you so we have a good lifestyle Preteeksha please try and understand me what so wrong in what I did? I love you that's why I did all of this.
Preteeksha:I know every single day you live with guilt and I always try my best so you don't feel it but It's not that easy to move on with life I have tried to the past 2 yrs but I just can't . Aur tum kya bole that you love me that's why you did all this, no Raunak don't lie yeh tum iss liye kare kyun ki you wanted to fulfill your needs. I am your wife once you start treating me like it only then your so called needs will be fulfilled. End of discussion Understood! ( she takes out her night gown and is walking out of the room)
Raunak blocking the door with his arm : Where do you think you're going?
Preteeksha: Guestroom(and walks out)
Raunak bangs his hand on the wall in anger :!@#$%&*!
Milind's house
Shashank is lost in his thoughts FLASHBACK: Preteeksha jerks her head up her hair hits Shashank face .
He looks up at her she is starting to yell at him but he is so lost in her beauty. And can't stop thinking about Preteeksha's teary eyes.
Milinds snaps his fingers in front of Shashank: yo Mr.cool kya hua what are you thinking about?
Shashank: huh oh um kuch…… kuch nahin.
Milind: kuch toh hai kya whats up… if you think I 'still made at u I'm not, you did all this for me so it's ok.
Shashank: yaar you might forgive me but I feel so bad for making her cry she had tears in those beautiful eyes of hers. You know something she seemed very sad not because of all that that happened but because of something else there some kind of sadness in them . wish only if I could make her smile just once I would feel so much better for what I did.
Milind: Oye! What are you saying it seems that there is more to what you are saying , I feel it just excuse so you can meet her again. By the way you have already done enough and haan you are forgetting a few things 1. Your married 2. She's married 3. She won't want to see your face after what you did so there no use just stay away from her and she will be happy .
Shashank: no yaar it's not an excuse I want to say I'm sorry and you will help me otherwise I will go tell Devika that I lied and this was all your idea. Smiling his mischievous smile
Milind: but it was your idea I didn't even know you were going to do all this you wouldn't lie to her
Shashank: yes I will if you don't help me… you will help until she forgives me then Devika will also be happy because her friend is happy got it.
Milind: no one can win with you what will I have to do ?
Shashank: now that's what I'm talking about first of all find outTelu raams name then go and get as much info about her where she lives her number and what all she likes meaning fav flowers chocolates anything then get back to me ASAP. I better be going Araina will be back from her shoot soon so I will c you later.
Later that night
Shashank is in bed wide awake think about what happened today and Araina is fast asleep
Araina turns on her side looks up and sees shashank awake: shashank you still haven't gone to bed kyun are you feeling ok is something wrong? u are acting really weird today I mean you only act like this if you have done something stupid. What did u do now?
Shashank:Araina babe you are calling your pati stupid…it's nothing of the sort I just have some work related tension.
Araina: work related whats up kya hua ?
Shashank: yeah um ek clinent kay saath confusion hogaya tha gaalti se wrong package got delivered to them and big humgama happened that's all I will sort it all out lets go to sleep.
Early next morning
Araina is at the park jogging with Ishita
Araina: Ishita you know your bro was acting so weird last night ,I asked was up but he said it was work related do me afavor a find out whats up ok
Ishita: sure will do aww look at that puppy
Araina: what dog I hate dogs (she starts to hide behind ishita then sees the puppy looking at her she starts running and puppy runs after : ishita help me!
She is running and keeps looking behind her to see how far the puppy is from when she suddenly bumps in to a guy who catches her from falling (just he did like in the masquerade ball ) they have a eye locking session. Ishita is watching all this from far
After a few min of eye locking guy still has araina in his arms : Are you ok where were going in such a hurry
Araina: stupid kutta !
Raunak:What ( upset at fact of being called stupid kutta ! he lets go of araina which makes her fall flat on her but!
Araina: Ouch! (looking up at him from the ground ) you idiot why did you let go of me like that
Ishita comes running to araina after she falls on the ground
Raunak:mind you how dare you call me a stupid kutta ! after I helped you .
Araina pointing her index finger at him : main tum ko (suddenly she sees the puppy grueling at her she jumps on to his bike with both feet up ) main tum ko nahin yeh stupid kutta ! kay bare main baat karereh thi point to the puppy that's barking at her .
Raunak:what oh I really sorry listen plz don't be scared come down (he gives her his hand)
Araina: what the hell do you think of your self learn to control your anger naak pe gussaa
Ishita whisper to araina kya hot hai yaar : walks by the guy um excuse me but do u belive in love at first sight or should I walk by again?
Raunak on his bike : not interested and drives off.
Ishita: but I am interested uff kya style hai but I think I have seen him around some where but where?
Araina: ishita why were you flirting with mr.anger young man by way who is he not sure.
Shashank is in his car he sees preteeksha at a bakery he runs in there and orders a cake and tells the sale guy to give it to her with all her other packages
Preteeksha checks all the shboxs before leaving the store and opens the boxes of sweets and sees in one box is a chocolate cake with abig smile on it saying I'm sorry : yeh mera box nahin hai
Sales guy: no the guy over there told me to give it to you (points to Shashank)
Preteeksha takes the box and is walking to Shashank: what is all this
Shashank: cake you don't like cake? Dehko I'm sorry for what happened (he turns to give her the box when he slips and the box opens and cake falls allover Preteeksha .
That's I t for now hope you all like it do comment press the like button precap ch6
Will araina find who Mr. angery young man is , will ishita have a chance with him and what will Preteeksha reaction be .
This content was originally posted by: Lily96First! (I think)
Great work yaar! Love the chappie! Waitng to seewhat Pratiksha will say to poor shanky, lol!
Keep it up!!!!
This content was originally posted by: skoler123
Wow, that was just awasome!!! Poor PratzAww I love the way u bring real shanky in to ur story.Wonderful post. LoL I hope pratz dont get too angry on poor shanky. LOL maybe she can throw some of the cake back on hes face, and then shanky stoping her, by graping her arms, and they can have eye lock 😍
This content was originally posted by: The_May_RosePlease make it longer, I always want to read on, after the end. Loved how Ishita is Shashank's sister. Waiting for the next part.😊
Hope they have a 'Raksha- Bandhan'(brother-sister day) scene in the actual show, they both have no siblings and so they can celebrate that together.
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