That moment:Fanfiction - Page 3

Posted: 14 years ago

That moment Part 7


Akshara:Rohit….my sister sacrificed her life for me.She hid her pain to see my wedding.
R:What are you saying?
A:Bani is not happy with Mr.Walia.
R:What?
A:I don't know if Shamoli's condition is also the same.
She weeps.Rohit is upset.

Bani gives the lunch box to Jai:Lunch..
J:No need.I will order from outside.
B:I cooked specially for you.
J:Really?
She smiles.
J:Then 100% sure..i won't have it.
He leaves the room.Bani keeps the lunch box in his bag.Jai comes back and takes the bag.

Jai is in the office.He calls his staff and shouts at him:Where is the lunch?
He:I'm sorry Sir.The hotel near by is closed.We will buy food from another hotel.
J:But no other hotel is in this location.All other hotels are far.Oh!
He:We will call and tell them to deliver.
He goes.
Jai opens the bag and is surprised to see the lunch box.
J:That stupid girl kept it inside my bag.How dare she?
Suddenly he realizes how hungry he is.So he opens it and tastes it.Then he eats it.

Jai goes home.He stares at Bani.Bani is scared.She thinks:Is it because I kept the lunch box inside his bag?
J:I had your lunch.It was nice.Very tasty food.
She is surprised.she smiles.
J:Tomorrow onwards I will have the lunch prepared by you.I'm fed up of hotel food.
She smiles.Rohit and Akshara see it and they smile.
Rohit tells her:Jai uncle is good at heart.Her anger is only a pretence.
Rohit goes to Akshara with bangles.
A:Wow!
R:Wear it.I want to see that.
She wears it.He smiles:Beautiful?
A:Really?
R:Yes,the bangles are beautiful.That's why I bought it.If I was a girl I would have worn it.since I can't wear it..i thought.. let you wear it.
A:What?
Rohit laughs:You are very beautiful now Akshara…these bangles look good on you.
She smiles:Bani loves bangles..
Jai overhears it.
A:Ok…I'm going..
R:So fast?
A:Ya…have work in the kitchen.Bye….
Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice change..............jai had the lunch and said he will only eat what bani cooks and now he heard that bani loves bangles..............cont soon...............
Posted: 14 years ago
Oh that was sweet! Rohit n Akshara did a gud job for Jai n bani. Liked the last scene as well. Pls continue soon.
Posted: 14 years ago

That moment Part 8











Jai enters the room.
J:I saw some bangles in a shop.I thought I will buy it for you.
He gives the bangles to Bani.She is surprised.
J:Wear it…
Bani can't wear it properly as it's a shock for her.
J:Relax.Sit and wear it.
She sits on the bed and wears it.Jai sits:Did you like it?
B:Yes..very nice…I love bangles.
J:Bangles suit you very well.
She smiles.

The servant gives tea to Jai.He tastes it:Its sweet.
Jigyasa:Don't you know that Jai can't drink sweet tea?
He:It's made by Bani Ma'am.
J:Bani!
Bani comes.
J:Why did you add sugar to Jai's tea?You want to harm his health?
B:I did'nt add sugar.I don't know how it became sweet.
J:Liar!
Bani cries and goes to her room.
The servant gives the tea to Jigyasa.She tastes it:Hey…no sugar in this tea.
The servant:Sorry Madam.I gave you the wrong tea.It was for Mr.Walia.
J:Oh!
Jai:Without knowing that you were so rude to Bani.

Jai goes to the room where Bani is crying.
J:We are sorry Bani…
Bani keeps her arm on his lips:Don't apologize please.
J:Actually I drank Jigyasa's sweet tea.We misunderstood you.Without knowing that we pained you a lot.
B:No…you have not.
J:Every wife expects love from the husband.But I could not.I was rude to you.Sorry…you are so nice Bani.I never knew that somebody could love me without seeing my wealth.Then how can I not love you?
She is surprised.Both of them weep with happiness.

Rohit gives a baby pink frock to Akshara.
R:You wear this for tonight's party.
A:Wow!Beautiful.

Party…
Akshara comes wearing the pink frock.Rohit can't take his eyes off her.
A:Why are you looking at me like this as if you have not seen me before?
He smiles:You look like an Angel.I want to dance with you Angel..
She smiles.They both dance.

Jai goes to Bani and holds her arms.They dance together happily.Rohit and Akshara smile seeing it.
A:I'm relieved seeing their love.

Kunal goes to his room where Shamoli is sitting.
Akshara thinks:Where is Shamoli?She must be dressing.I will go and call her.

K:Party is happening..why are you here?
S:Because I don't want to attend the party.
K:Why?
S:I will have to dance with you.I hate it.
He is shocked:Why?
S:Because I hate you.I never wanted to marry an old man like you.I married only for my sister's happiness.
He is shocked.Akshara who goes there to call Shamoli sees it and is shocked.
Posted: 14 years ago

Thx 4 the comments

Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Ohh.....now the next couple is having probs. I'm sure Rohit n Akshara together can mend it as well....waise I luved Jai-Bani scene. Pls continue soon.
Posted: 14 years ago
great going yaar, loving the way stroy is proceeding
Posted: 14 years ago
jai bani paroblems solved and now kunal and shamoli...................hope rohit and akshara solve it.................cont soon.............
Posted: 14 years ago

That moment Part 9






Akshara goes down with tears.Kunal goes out.Akshara sees it.She goes to Rohit:Mr.Kunal is leaving the party.You go and bring him back.
R:He must have gone out for something important.Then why should i?
A:No,he is depressed.In this condition going out alone is not good.
R:Why should he be depressed?
A:Shamoli told him that she does'nt love him.
Rohit is shocked.He goes out searching for Kunal in the car.It's raining heavily.Rohit feels difficult to drive.He can't see anything.He sees a man lying down with blood.He goes near him:Kunal Uncle!
He is shocked.He takes him to the hospital.
All are in the hospital.Shamoli cries.
Akshara goes near Rohit.He holds her hand.
R:I don't know what to do.
A:Be strong..
The police comes:Mr.Rohit!Mr.Kunal's condition is due to an accident.How did you find him?
R:He was lying on the road.I did'nt see how the accident happened.
Shamoli's reaction was unexpected:How can we trust you?What if you are the one who caused the accident?
All are shocked.
S:Why did you go out leaving the party?Because you wanted to finish Kunalji for his position.You don't want to be his assistant always.
R:Shamoli!
The police:It's a possibility.Mr.Rohit!You are under arrest.
All are shocked.
R:Sir,I did'nt do anything.
A:Shamoli,what did you say?Are you in the senses?You tell the police not to arrest Rohit.
Jigyasa:Please don't take my son away.This stupid Shamoli….
Shamoli does'nt listen to anyone.
The police takes Rohit away.
Shamoli thinks:I hurt Kunalji a lot.I did'nt love him at all.But when I realized that I'm losing him forever I feel so weak.

Akshara is shattered to see the pathetic condition of Rohit in the jail.She cries along with Rohit.
A:Sorry…I apologize on behalf of my sister.
R:No Akshara.Be strong.Truth will be out one day.

Akshara goes home.Keshu comforts her:Don't worry…When Kunal gains consciousness,he will tell the truth to the police.Rohit will be released.
A:How could Shamoli behave like this?Because of her…Rohit is suffering.
K:She is a wife.In this condition any wife will behave abnormally.

Kunal opens his eyes.The doctor tells Shamoli:Good news.Your husband is conscious now.
Posted: 14 years ago
is shamoli out of her senses???????????????  how could she?????????? i wish i could slap her for saying so...................cont soon................hope rohit is out of the jail.................

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