That moment:Fanfiction - Page 4

Posted: 14 years ago
Why Rohit??? I mean ye to ajeeb baat hai.....he actually helped by taking Kunal to the hospital....and he is being accused??? Bhalayi ka sach me zamana nahi hai.....anyways....pls continue soon.
Posted: 14 years ago
Why Rohit isin jail?
Plz jaldi usko bahar le ek aao
we cant see him like that
Posted: 14 years ago

That moment Part 10






Shamoli runs to Kunal:How are you?
Kunal does'nt say anything.The police comes:Sorry to disturb you in this situation.Who is behind your condition?Rohit?
S:I'm sure that it's Rohit to hav success.
He is shocked:How could you think that Rohit trid to kill me.I was not in my senses.I was careless.So the accident happened.It's my fault,I broke the traffic rules.
P:Sorry for the disturbance Mr.Kunal.

Rohit is released.Rohit arrives home with Akshara.Jigyasa and Aditya hug him.
Shamoli goes near them.
J:You want to hurt my son again?
S:I'm sorry…please forgive me.
R:Don't suspect anyone without any proof.
Shamoli is upset.
Kunal:Tonight let us have a party here.
J:Why?
K:I will disclose it during the party.
All are anxious to know that.

Party…

Kunal:Thanks a lot for attending the party.This party is to inform you all a serious thing.I and Shamoli are going to get separated.Means…we heading towards divorce.
All are shocked.
K:You all maybe thinking whether divorce is a reason to party.For Shamoli who alays dreamt of having a young handsome husband is free with this divorce.So it's a happy occasion.So celebrate.
He takes a champaign bottle.Champaign is flowing.
Shamoli cries and goes out.Akshara goes near her.
S:Yes,I hurt Kunalji a lot.I did'nt love him.But now…
A:You love him.Otherwise you would not have reacted like that during his accident.
S:I'm going to lose him forever Akshara.
Akshara is upset.She goes near Kunal:before taking a decision you could have talked to Shamoli..to know what is in her mind.
K:She has told me what is in her mind.Nothing more.
Rohit comes:What if Shamoli's mind has changed?One moment is enough for our mind to change.

Shamoli is crying.Kunal goes near her:You are going to be free.Then why are you crying?
S:I told you that I did'nt want to marry you…I don't love you….but why did'nt you ask me whether my attitude has changed before announcing divorce?Atleast now why don't you ask me?
Kunal is shocked.
Shamoli raises her voice:Ask me…
K:Asking you…do you…do you…?
S:You lack the courage to ask me.Yes,I love you now.
Kunal grabs her hand and takes her to the party hall.
K;I'm sorry to tell you that what I announced is wrong.We are very much together.We are not going to divorce.
Everyone smiles.
K:Whatever happened here was just a drama.Because today is April first.April fool!
All are surprised and stare at Kunal.They all laugh.

Rohit and Akshara are in the car.
A:I'm relaxed now.Because both my sisters are happy in their married life.
R:I'm relived.So now we can enjoy peacefully.That's why I planned a long drive.
Akshara's shawl is flying in the cool breeze.
Rohit catches it.She smiles.

They go a restaurant.
R:One second.I will go to the wash room and come.
Suddenly one guy gives a flower boquet to Akshara:Madam,this is a gift for you..
She:But who sent it?
He goes out without saying anything.Rohit comes back:Who gave you flowers?
A:Rohit!You only sent me the flowers.I know that.Who else will give me flowers?
Not only that…these flowers have the fragrance of love.This makes sure that it's sent to me by you.
Rohit smiles:I wanted to surprise you..but…
A:I know your thoughts now..
R:Yes…because you are my soulmate.
They both smile at each other.They walk out holding hands together.

The end
Posted: 14 years ago
nice ending.........alls well...................
Posted: 14 years ago
Thx a lot 4 the support & encouragement friends
Posted: 14 years ago
That was very sweet and cute ending
loved it
Posted: 14 years ago
Nice ending....liked the fact that one love marriage of Rohit n Akshara managed to change the luck for other couples as well....that was really sweet!!!

And here....my fav character has to be Rahul n Akshara....the way they set up others' lives as well....it was really very nice!!! And then fav scene....well I liked the couple's realization scenes....and RA scenes as well.😃
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
i liked ur whole story
and the ending was too goood and cute
i really liked Shamol'is character

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