ff jaane tu ya jaane na mayur n mjht gang

introduction :

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1352777

1st part

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1353439

promo

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1353515

2nd part :

at nupur's home

nupur ke ghar par party chal rahi hoti hai or sab log aachuke hote hain mayank k ilawa nups pareshaan hoti hai k bahaar baarish chal rhi thi or usne mayank ko daant kar bulaya halaake wo bas aa hi raha tha

its been 1 hour but achanak se ghanti baji or nups ne darwaza khola to dekha mayank ko usne new year waala coat pehna huwa tha or bilkul bheega huwa tha

n. MAYANK! kya zarurat thi aane ki dekho baarish abhi khatam huwi agar baad mein aate to

m. achii (he sneeze)

n. mayank tum theek to hona dekha parh gaye na beemar mein tumse kitni bar kehti hun k apna khayal rakha karo

m. nupur aana zaruri tha ye dekho tumhare liye gift

a tear fall from nupur's eyes n she hugs him

precap : mjht gang is planning to go to hotel.

hey friends plz comment i know its again short but sorry i dont have time

its gud!!

7 views no replies nobody likes my ff????????????????

Originally posted by: kajenfanpari

its gud!!

but y dont u post all parts together?

it wud be better

anyways its awesome

i m sorry actually because of promo i was confused next part will be in same thread dont worry n thanks for rply

nyc yr

hey dear nice part and nice promo can't wait for next update, update soon and thanks for pm i will be waiting for your next part

its soooooooooooooooo short......

plz update a little longer/////

it was awesome..

it waz vry short but awesum!!! 👏 👏

wonderful part,👏
but plzzz thoda long part update karo,
plzz continue soon...Edited by shivangi278 - 14 years ago

nice part.....
loved nupur.....so caring......
thoda short update tha.....agli baar long update chahiye.....
thanks 4 the pm