Balika Vadhu

Written Update 08/06/10

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 1
SumiRon r packing der clothes wen Teepri runs into der room.
She asks Bhiron wot he is doin?Y is he packing his suitcase?R u really leavin da houz?
(Wot wer u thinkin Teepri?-dat he was kidding wen he told Masa bout it?)
SumiRon ignore her.
Teepri asks y Bhairon is nt replying?🤢
She says Kannimaa often says things which she doesnt mean wen she is angry?Did u feel so bad dat u r leavin da houz?After u leave,wot wil happen 2 Kannimaa?
Bhairon says all dat u r sayin doesnt bother me now,coz I hav made up my mind & no1 can stop me!
Teepri shakes her head.
Sumitra is crying.
Bhairon asks Teepri to leave.
 
Part 2
Masa is sitting on da swing,holding her pallu.
Gehna falls at her feet.
Gehna:Masa!Jis ghar ko apne barson se sambhalkar rakha woh ik pal me toot jayega!
She asks hw masa can allow her son,DIL & grandchildren to leave lyk dat?
Sugna folds her hands & asks her to stop Bhairon.She asks for forgiveness frm his side.She pleads her to forgive dem.😭
Gehna says nothing is out of r control yet,evrythin wil b alright again...
She requests her to stop dem & prevent da family frm breaking.
Masa doesnt reply.
 
Part 3
Masa continues to play wid her pallu.
SS luk at each odr.
Gehna asks masa to say smtyn bt she remains quiet.
Gehna says now I wil hav 2 do smtyn else.
She calls Makhan & asks him 2 tk out da car.
Sugna asks wer she's goin?
Gehna replies dat Masa wil nt stop Bhairon,so she's goin 2 ask Basant to do da same.
Shyam asks if she knws wer he wud be?
Gehna says she doesnt knw anythin,bt she wil find him anyhow!
Shyam says dat he wil accompany her,bt Gehna refuses.
She asks him 2 stay der & stop SumiRon.
He asks hw she wil b able 2 go alone at night?
She asks him nt 2 worry bout her since Makhan is der wid her & leaves.
 
Part 4
Shyam asks Dadisa to forget bout wotever happened.
She gets up & starts walking towards her room.
Shyam asks her to listen to wot he has 2 say,bt she doesnt stop.
Sugna also calls her,bt to no avail.
Shyam looks angry while Sugna looks scared.
 
Makhan & Gehna stop at sm tadikhana(local alcohol seller's) & enquire bout Basant bt no1 knw bout him der.
Dey resume der journey & keep stopping evry now & den 2 enquire bout him bt no1 knws anythin.
Gehna is scared.
 
Part 5
A man is walking ahead of da jeep wid a lantern in one hand.
Gehna asks Makhan to ask him.
He points to a hut in da distance.
After dat man leaves,Gehna asks Makhan abt it.
He says wotvr dat man told him.
He adds dat Basant cms der evryday.
Dey both get into da jeep.
Gehna & Makhan reach da spot & a man cums out of da hut.
Gehna asks if Nandu's bapu is der?
Da man asks who?
Gehna makes a face(coz f alcohol).
Da man asks who she wants?
 
Part 6
Gehna tries 2 get into da hut,bt dat man blocks her way.
Makhan & da driver handle him while she goes in.
Dat man starts shouting.
All wierd kinds of men(alcoholics) r der in dat hut,dey all get up wen dey see Gehna der.
One man cms wid a log of wood,an end of which is on fire.
Sm odrs cm wid laathis.
Maakhan & da driver tackle dem.
Gehna spots Basant lying on da floor.
She runs to him.
Basant looks at her through half open eyes.
She calls him bt he does nt respond.
 
Part 7
She shakes his shoulders & keeps calling him.
Basant sees a hazy image of Gehna.
She says get up,why arnt u answering me?
She asks him 2 cm home wid her & stop SumiRon frm leavin.
Basant still doesnt respond.
She asks if he recognizes who she is?
She keeps shaking him.
Basant passes out.
Gehna is left in tears.
 
Part 8
Gehna runs out & gets a bucket of water.
She splashes it on his face & Basant gets up.
He starts coughing.
He is still seeing a hazy image of Gehna,who is askin him 2 cm home,2 stop Masa frm doing da 'anarth'.
She says only u can stop him.
No response.
So she shouts get up!
Still no response.
One man asks her why she's troubling her husband?
He asks her to let him be.
Makhan is still fighting wid da odr men.🥱
 
Part 9
Gehna says I havnt seen another selfish man like u!
U knw only hw 2 mk ur own self happy,dat too wid da help of alcohol.
She pushes him & says:Padey rahiye aap yaheen!Aj jo kuch bhi ho raha hai us k zimmedar aap aur sirf aap hai,Nandu k bapu!😡(I really admire her courage!👏)
She cries.
Makhan says:Ghar chaliye hukum!
Gehna looks at Basant for one last tym & den goes out of da hut.
Makhan & da driver follow her.
 
Part 10
Anandi is putting her clothes in a suitcase wen Jagya brings a kidbag.
Anandi says can I ask u smtyn?
She says cant v ask bapusa to change his decisn?Cant v convince hm nt to leave dis houz?
Jagya says didnt u see hw angry he is?Nw hes not gonna listen 2 any1.
Anandi is disappointed.
He says to tell u da truth,I think wotever he's doin is absolutely right.I also dnt wanna stay here wid dadisa.
Anandi asks hw dadisa wil stay alone if dey leave?
He says u stop thinkin bout her.She'll call us back if & wen she misses us.
He asks her to hurry up.
 
Part 11
Jagya looks around & spots da picture of Kanhaji.
He asks her to tk it along wid her luggage.
She says she's gonna keep Kanhaji der itself,to tk cr of dadisa.(aww....)
Jagya looks at the picture.
She folds her hands & says wil u tk cr of her?Plz see to it dat noting happens to her.😭
Jagya asks her to pack her suitcase.
She cries as she does dat.
 
Part 12
Teepri is running after Bhairon asking him 2 stop.😆
Bhairon doesnt even look at her.
Sumitra also doesnt pay attention 2 her.
She says does any1 leave one's houz lyk dat?
Bhairon stops in frnt of JaAn's room & asks dem 2 join him.
JaAn cm der wid der luggage.
Teepri holds Bhairon's arm & asks him 2 listen 2 her.
Bhairon ignores her.
She looks at Sumitra & den runs after Jagya.
He also ignores her.😆
 
Part 13
SumiRon,JaAn & Teepri enter Masa's room.
Masa does not acknowledge der presence.
Bhairon says:Masa...
He swallows a lump & continues:Main apne parivar k sath ye ghar chodh kar ja raha hoon.Yeh aapki amaanat aur... sara hisab-kitab.
He keeps sm files on da table.
He says I knw u wont believe me,bt wotever happened in da whole incident has hurt u & I feel sad as well..
He says dat I cannot be happy after making u sad.
Teepri agrees.
He adds dat he doesnt regret doing wotever he did,coz wot he did was in accordance to social virtues & humanity.
Evry1 has tears in der eyes.
He says I didnt want 2 hurt u,bt at da same tym I didnt want injustice for any1 else.
Camera zooms on Anandi.
 
Part 14
Bhairon touches Masa's feet.
She has tears in her eyes bt she doesnt bless him.
Teepri keeps sayin hw cn u leave lyk dis?
She says dis houz,dis land & da property-all dis is only urs!😡
She says u cannot go.
She shakes Masa & asks if she wil jst sit & watch da whole thing?
She asks her if she wont stop her son?
Teepri:Arey apka beta...rooth ke,ghar chodh k jaave hai Kannimaa rok lo!Bhairon chale gaye toh je ghar-bar bikhar javega...aisa na karo!Rok lo...😭
Evry1 bcums emotional.
Teepri keeps shaking masa bt she does nt respond.
 
Part 15
 Teepri folds her hands & begs masa to stop dem.
Bhairon tks his suitcase & stands in a corner of da room.
Anandi touches dadisa's feet & she also stands next to Bhairon.
Next cms Jagya's turn.
Masa jst looks at him for a second & den looks away.
Sumitra touches her feet & den looks at her wid tears in her eyes.
She controls herself & goes towards Bhairon.
Teepri says y r u not reacting Kannimaa?Stop dem!
Wen Bhairon starts walking out,Teepri runs after him & asks him 2 stop.
Masa is alone in her room.
She starts crying.😭
 
Part 16
Teepri runs down da stairs after Bhairon.
She says:Arey koi ruko inhe!
Den she says does any1 walk out of da houz aftr havin an argument wid one's mother?
She cms & stands in front of him,blocking his path.
She says no Bhairon,I wil nt allow u 2 go!😡
Sugna is hugging Anandi.
Gehna holds Sumitra's hands & says plz dnt go jiji!
Teepri says:Ap chale gaye toh kis k sahare rahegi je Teepri is haveli me?Kiske bharose jeevegi?
Sugna asks Sumitra to stop Bhairon.
Teepri folds her hands & begs Bhairon not to leave.
She falls to his feet & says:Apko mhari saugandh,havedi chodh k mat jao!
 
Part 17
Teepri says:Aoko hamari dosti ki saugandh!
Bhairon keeps his suitcase on da floor.
He says wot promise?Which friendship r u talking bout?
He says:tune kaunsa is dosti ka man rakha hai jo tu mujhse ye ummeed rakhti hai?
Teepri asks wot she did?
Sumitra looks angrily at her.
He says:Tune masa ka is ghinaune kand me Masa ka sath dia.Aj jo hua hai us k liye tu bhi utni hi zimmedar hai jitni k masa hai!👏
Teepri says no Bhairon!I didnt do anything wrong.😲
Sumitra & Anandi look at each odr.
 
Part 18
Teepri says I informed u as soon as I cud.
Bhairon frees his wrist.
Bhairon says it was too late.Had u told us earlier,none of dis wud hv happnd.
He says:Tu is paap ki bhagedar hai Teepri!
She keeps saying:Na Bhairon,na!
Bhairon says:Main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki tu mere peeth piche,mere khilaf itne bade khel ka hissa banegi!
Masa is watching all dis frm da first floor.
Bhairon says u broke my trust Teepri.So u hav lost da right to ask me for an explainatn or stop me frm leaving.
He says r friendship was burnt to ashes in da fire which u lit wid masa,to destroy three lives & three families.
 
Moral:Man me chhupaye huye paapon se jab parda uthne lagta hai,toh sari kamzoriyan ujaagar ho jati hain aur vyakti ko samaaj ki nazron me gira deti hain.
 
Precap:Teepri is crying in her room.
She is about to slit her wrist wid a butcher knife.😲
Den she stops & tells herself dat she has not done anythin wrong.
Kannimaa is da only one at fault.
(I hope she's not planning to slit masa's wrist or worst...neck...)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Apara...
 
Yesterday it was Bhairon and today its TEEPRI👏 Sakshi no words to praise you and in the precap she is just the hard core psycho....
 
OMG someone had told that at the end Teepri wont hesitate to kill even massa and she is going to do that😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
This anandi is too much of a devi... after all this she still supports dadisa.. being a good daughter-in-law is one thing and having no self respect is another....if she is still supposed to be a kid....she should just listen to wat bhairov is doing since he has always supported her....

i think its high time they left dadisa to be on her own so that she will get some time alone to contemplate on what she has done or is doing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx 4 the update.............
basant is getting on my nerves............
how can a person b so sick and disgusting like him..
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Posted: 13 years ago
thx for the update!

can't believe that Anandi, like all Tele bahus still wants to stay with Maasa!! does she love to get shouted upon and then cry loud? 😕 😆

if Bhairon really leaves the house, then will Teepri go running after him singing, oh man! you're mine... 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
She almost said that.. she asked him if he leaves .... then hesitate and said kanni maa ka key hoga🤣  in fact she meant merakya hoga🤣🤣
Loved Bhairon to say what dosti kahaan ki dosti🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: ammoos

She almost said that.. she asked him if he leaves .... then hesitate and said kanni maa ka key hoga🤣  in fact she meant merakya hoga🤣🤣

Loved Bhairon to say what dosti kahaan ki dosti🤣🤣

 
LOL ...hai re Teepri tera kya hoga ab...Maasa is all choked..does she ever thought where her saccha beta Basanth is when all this happening???
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Posted: 13 years ago
To top all.. when Teepri was telling Bhairon that she called him at the right time and stuffs..massa was standing upstairs watching everthing😈 Teepri tho gayi kaam se..
 
May be massa asked her to get out and thats why she planned to kill massa🤔
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope she kills massa n ends up in jail or tryies to kill masssa n gets caught!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

There u go one evil blames other Evil..wah Teepri..Maasa won't be killed she is a spice of BV after all...