Written Update 09/06/10

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 1
Starts wid Bhairon telling Teepri dat our friendship was reduced to ashes bcz of da fire wich u lit alongwid Masa,in which u both wer planning 2 destroy 3 lives & 3 families.
Teepri keeps saying:Na Bhairon,Na!😭
Bhairon says now I wont stop!
He picks up his suitcase & walks out.
Teepri keeps calling him.
Sumitra & JaAn follow him.
Gehna says:Jiji!
All of dem stop.
Sugna calls Bhairon.
Bhairon luks around.
SumiRon & JaAn spot Masa.
Masa's lukin sad.
 
Part 2
Bhairon holds back his tears & walks out.
Da odr 3 follow him.
SS run after dem.
Masa has tears in her eyes.
Gehna shakes her head & cries.
Teepri is still sitting on da floor & crying.
Masa cms down.
She sees both Gehna & Teepri crying.
She sits on da swing.
Teepri says:Woh chale gaye..
Den she gets up & starts goin 2wards her room.
She keeps muttering smtyn & slowly climbs da stairs.(Again,brilliant acting by Sakshi!)
Masa is trying 2 control herself.
Teepri enters her room & falls on da ground.
She keeps sniffing.
 
Part 3
Shyam stops SumiRon & JaAn at da haveli gate.
He says u cm wid us.
Bhairon says no,v wil go on r own.
Shyam asks wer?
Bhairon says anywer...V r leavin dis village.
Anandi has tears in her eyes.
Shyam says wot r u sayin,kakasa?
Why shud u go smwer else wen v r der?
Bhairon says I cant live in my daughter's sasra.
Sugna says y not?Plz cm.
Bhairon says plz try 2 understand da situatn beta...Stayin in a daughter's sasra is not looked upon wid respect in r society...
Shyam says I understand.I dnt think ur decisn of movin out is wrong,hence I didnt say anythin 2 u on dat matter.Bt I dnt agree wid ur decisn of not stayin at my houz.
Sumitra & Anandi look on.
 
Part 4
Shyam says:Beti k ghar naa sahi,par ek bete k ghar chalkar toh reh sakte hain na aaplog?👏Aaplog mujhe apna beta mante hai ya nahi?
Bhairon looks at Shyam bt doesnt say anythin.
Sumitra says wot r u sayin?
Shyam says if a son wants 2 tk his parents to his houz,wots wrong wid dat?Y r u refusing,plz cm wid us!
Jagya says bapusa,its so late now.V wont get a bus so easily.Lets go 2 Jijosa's houz!
Shyam says JaAn r very tired.U tell me wer u wil go about wid dem?
Bhairon luks at Sumitra,who nods.
Shyam says cm wid us & tks da suitcase frm Bhairon's hand.👏
Sugna takes da bag frm Jagya's hand.
Bhairon says wait Shyam!Had I been alone,I wud hav never agreed.Bt since da kids r der wid me,I hav no odr option.Bt u wil also hav 2 listen to me... V wil stay at ur place only 2nyt.We'll leave early 2rw morning?Ok?
Shyam looks at Sugna.
Shyam nods & says cm wid me.
 
Part 5
Da drunkards r talking loudly outside da hut.
Basant wakes up hearing dem.
He runs his hands thru his hair.
Den he feels his kurta & frowns.
He struggles to wear his shoes & walks out.
A few men r sittin outside.
He asks dem if it rained,coz his kurta is wet.
One man says,not lightening struck u!
Basant is confused.
Dat man says ur wife is no less dan lightning!She came here smtym back.She tried hard 2 wake u up.Den she cried & cursed u & left.
Basant remembers seeing a hazy image of Gehna who was tryin 2 wake him up.
He leaves.
Da man say atleast tell us wen u wil b back bhaiji...
Another says v wil wait 4 u!
And dey laugh at him.
 
Part 6
Radha opens da door & is surprised to find JaAn & SumiRon along wid SS.
She says u all?
No1 says anythin.
SS luk at each odr.
Radha says Ghani Khamma & asks dem 2 cm in.
MS cms der & greets dem.
Bhairon & Jagya sit down wid MS.
MS says Shyam had called me & I know evrythin.
Bhairon doesnt say anythin.
MS says wotever decisn da mahapanchayat took was absolutely right!Odrwise God knws wot wud hav happened!I never thought I wud hav 2 see a day lyk dis one!(He's talkin as though his mother has got Shyam remarried.🤢)
Bhairon is embarrased.
MS says wotever happened is good.Atleast it stopped da matter at da right stage.
Bhairon nods.
 
Part 7
Shyam says bapu,I'll jst hav a look at da guest room & b back.
Radha asks y?
JaAn & SumiRon r embarrased.
Shyam says dey all wil b stayin here 2nyt.
MS & Radha exchange looks.
Bhairon says actually I & my family hav left dat houz.
MS & Radha r shocked.
Tausa & Taisa arrive at dat precise moment.
MS says wot happened which compelled u 2 leave ur houz?
MS looks at Shyam.
SS r lukin at each odr.
MS says Shyam told me dat evrythin is alright now.
Tausa greets dem.
 
Part 8
Tausa:Panchayat ka faisla suna dene se woh chot toh na mit sake jo inko inke gharwalon ne di...😡
Tausa says samdhisa took da right decision.
He says sm1 has tried 2 create havoc in da lives of his son & bheendni...which father wil b able 2 tolerate dat?
MS says so sad!Bt u dont worry samdhisa...dis is also ur haveli.
Sugna smiles.
MS says u can stay here til da tym u want.👏
Bhairon says yeh to aapka badappan hai.
He folds his hands & says v wl leave 2mrw morning itself.Sorry to bother u all 2nyt.
MS says dnt embarass me by sayin all dat samdhisa.
He says:Ek hi parivar hai,samdhi hai humlog,toh phir sankoj kis bat ka hai?👏
Tausa says if v do not help each other in times of need,den wots da use of being relatives?
Den he asks Shyam to check da guest room.
Shyam leaves.
 
Part 9
MS says samdhisa...I wanna say smtyn.I'm confident u wont feel bad!
He cms & sit next to Bhairon.
He says da doors of my haveli wil always b open for u...U can stay here wenever u want & for as many days as u wud like to....dat wil not b a problem 4 us!👏
Radha smiles.
He says:Apna ghar toh apna ghar hi hota hai,kaha-suni toh har ghar me hoti hai,par aisi choti-moti bat k liye apna ghar-bar chodh dena samajhdari ki baat koni hai.
He adds dat I know wotever majisa did ws wrong.Yet I want u 2 think over ur decision of moving out once again.
MS says:Is umar me masa ko akela chodh...
Tausa says:Arey sochne ko ab bacha hi k Madan?Sahan karne ki bhi koi seema hove... bahut sahan kar liya samdhisa ne!
Bhairon doesnt say anythin.
Tausa says u dnt hav 2 feel sad samdhisa...u hav taken da right decision!
 
Part 10
Shyam cms der & says da rooms r ready,cm wid me.
JaAn & Sugna follow him.
SumiRon r a little behind.
Tausa says:Ishwar ki leela bhi ajeeb hai!Koi bhi na jan sake hai kab kisko kaisa samay dekhna padh jave!Kal sham tak bhi kitne khush the woh log,aur aaj?Bechare samdhisa ko apni beti k sasre me aasra lena padh raha hai...😡
SumiRon hav heard evrythin.
Sumitra starts crying.
Bhairon puts his hand on her shoulder & dey go into da guest room.
 
Part 11
Teepri looks at da family group photo & sobs.
She recalls masa telling her dat if I get u married to Bhairon,u wil bcum my bheendni- Bhairon ki bheendni.
Little Teepri smiles.
Teepri luks at Bhairon's pic & sobs.
She recalls herself & Bhairon sitting under a tree,wen dey wer kids.
Teepri tells him I hav 2 face a lot of trouble in bringing dis(sm food item) for u.
Bhairon is eating dat.
He says so wot?Wen u bcum my bheendni u wil hav 2 cook daily 4 me.
She says r u sure u wil marry me?
Bhairon says of course,I'll marry u!
She cries as she thinks of all dat.
 
Part 12
Basant enters da houz calling Gehna.
He spots Masa on da swing.
He asks her wot happnd,since Gehna had cm 2 look for him?
Masa doesnt say anythin.
He asks her why she's not answering him?
Masa jst closes her eyes.
Basant is confused & leaves.
 
Gehna is crying while putting Nandu to sleep.
Basant says I heard u came lukin for me...Wot happnd?
Gehna doesnt answer.
He says wots dis new drama?I asked masa & she did not reply.Nw m askin u & u r crying.Wot happnd?
She doesnt say anythin.
He says u shud hav cm der 2 call me.Nw wen m here,u r not talking!Tell me,wot happened?Was der any new drama in da houz?😡
Gehna says:Bahut jaldi khayal aaya aapko sabka?Poora parivar toot gaya aur ab pooch rahe hain aap ki sab kahan hai!😡
He asks her not to talk in riddles.
She says Bhaisa left da houz,alongwid Jiji & da kids.
Basant is shocked.
 
Moral:Aadmi jitna bhog bhogta hai,utna hi dukhi hota hai... kintu us dukh ka ehsaas use tabhi hota hai jab uske karmon se parivar tutne lagta hai...
 
Precap:Masa says hav u gone mad Teepri?
Teepri's hair r open & shes lukin quite mad.
She says:Mhara dimag kharab koni hua hai dokri!Thara dimag kharab hua hai,thara...jo Ram nam lene ki umar me aisa paap kare hain tu?Thari samajh me koni aave hai kain?
Masa is about to slap her,bt she holds her hand.
Teepri says:Eh dokri!!!Khabardar jo mhare ko haath bhi lagaya tune!😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
thats a real quick update. waiting for u to update part 4. thanx😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG hope they wont go to Madan's hpuse.. that thausa wont spare them and all their peace will be gone and can expect more taunts

 

Thanks Apara

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Posted: 13 years ago
good episode, glad bhairon walk out. Show is picking up, tomorrow precap awesonme, faceoff betwwen masa and teepri. Teepri was acting like crazy, masa deserved this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
1st of all thx for the update.

Bharion took such a brave decision! I'm proud of him...

n Shyam is a gem of a person!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just saw the precap, Sakshi is superb in that mad act...
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Mhara dimag kharab koni hua hai dokri!Thara dimag kharab hua hai,thara...jo Ram nam lene ki umar me aisa paap kare hain tu?Thari samajh me koni aave hai kain?
Masa is about to slap her,bt she holds her hand.
Teepri says:Eh dokri!!!Khabardar jo mhare ko haath bhi lagaya tune
 
🤣 Love Teepri for those lines.. it was time massa hear something like this from an outsider🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: ammoos

Mhara dimag kharab koni hua hai dokri!Thara dimag kharab hua hai,thara...jo Ram nam lene ki umar me aisa paap kare hain tu?Thari samajh me koni aave hai kain?

Masa is about to slap her,bt she holds her hand.
Teepri says:Eh dokri!!!Khabardar jo mhare ko haath bhi lagaya tune
 
🤣 Love Teepri for those lines.. it was time massa hear something like this from an outsider🤣🤣🤣


it was hilarious, the way Sakshi(Teepri) was saying  those lines n then Maasa's expressions! 🤣
no one must have ever talked to maasa like this before... 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOL....sounds like Manjulika of Bhul Bhulaiya....hahaha ..ab aayega asli maza..hahah..Go Teepri...
Thanks for the update Apara!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Iam starting to think that the teepri charachter is ACTUALLY MAD -maybe she has escaped from some mental hospital,maybe her husband will turn up soon to reveal the truth..Maasa needs a reality check and teepri's Psycho avatar will stun even cold-hearted maasa..
this will be fun to watch for us 😃 😆