Written Update 16/06/2010

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 1
Bhairon sees Teepri ascending da stairs.So he pulls anandi to one side.
Now Bhairon & Anandi r hiding behind da door.
Teepri cms singing bt as soon as she sees da door open,da bowl of kheer falls from her hand.(It looked as though she deliberately threw it!πŸ˜‰)
Teepri cms inside lukin for dem.
Immediately Bhairon goes upto her & tries 2 control her.
Teepri goes hysterical.
Bhairon asks Anandi to tk out Nandu.(Nandu makes a face,as though he's tryin 2 say,arey yar!Bas karo,kitni der mujhe leke yahan-wahan bhagte rahoge tumlog?πŸ˜†)
Teepri says:Bhairon,maine apse pucha tha ap mujhe dhokha to ni de rahe,par apne mera biswas tod diya!Apne mhare parem ka majak udaya!😭
Bhairon asks Anandi to work fast!
Teepri shouts:Chore ne chhodh de!😑
 
Part 2
Anandi manages to tk out Nandu frm da dupatta.πŸ‘
She runs wid him,bt keeps lukin back now & again.
After sm more kushti,Teepri successfully pushes Bhairon on da floor.😲
She runs after Anandi.
Bhairon gets up & starts running aftr Teepri.
As soon as masa sees Nandu wid Teepri,she asks Maakhan to untie da ropes.
Sumitra helps Makhan in setting masa free.
Teepri keeps shouting:Anandi!Chhodh Nandu ko!😑(her hair r open now)
Bhairon is running aftr Teepri shouting:Ruk ja,Teepri!
Anandi continues racing down da stairs.
Sugna & Gehna r really worried for Nandu.
Masa asks Gehna to tk Nandu fast.
 
Part 3
Anandi hands Nandu to Gehna.
Gehna kisses his forhead.
 
Teepri is racing down da stairs wen she slips.
She rolls down da last 5-6 stairs.
Bhairon is also about to slip,bt he controls himself.
Der is blood on Teepri's elbow.
Evry1 is shocked & silently watching her.😲
Teepri is not moving
Basant makes a grand entry.(sab kuch khatam ho jane k bad!πŸ˜›)
He sees Teepri & tries 2 help her,bt Bhairon stops him.
Bhairon asks him 2 stay away frm Teepri.
 
Part 4
Basant asks y no1 is helping her up?
Bhairon says jst stay away frm her bhaisa!
Basant asks da reason🀒(Ramayan khatam ho gayi,phir puche Ram kaun aur Sita kaun!?!)
Teepri moves now.
Her hair r scattered all over her face.
She looks at Basant angrily & slowly gets up.
Evry1 else is lukin at her as a person wud luk if a cheetah walking upto him/her.
She shouts:Arey!Sara kiya-dhara toh thara hi hai aur tu hi puche hai k hua?Na tu Dokri k khatir mhare Bhairon se ladta,na he dokri Bhairon par barasti aur na mhare Bhairon ghar chhodh k jate!😑😭
Basant still cant believe wot he's seeing.
Teepri continues:Arey kitna lalach aur swarth bhara hai thare andar,Basant!😑
She goes to him & grabs his collar.
Bhairon tries 2 separate Teepri frm Basant.
She keeps sayin hw dare u do dis to my Bhairon?😑
 
Part 5
Evry 1 is really scared.
Bhairon says:Chhodh de....chhodh Teepri!
Teepri asks him 2 leave her!
She keeps howling at Basant.
She says I tried so mch 2 remove u frm da havedi,bt u removed my Bhairon frm here!
Jst den Maakhan cms der.
Bhairon finally separates Teepri frm Basant & drags her to da pole wer Masa was tied.
Teepri keeps shouting I'll not spare u Basant!😑
Bhairon shakes Teepri's shoulders & asks if she has gone mad?
Maakhan starts tying her up wid da rope.
Teepri screams YES! so loudly dat masa covers her ears wid her hands.
Teepri says yes,I've gone mad!
Sumitra shakes her head,as if to say:Mujhe toh pehle se hi shaq tha!πŸ˜‰
Teepri resumes howling:Pagal ho gai je Teepri!😭
Bhairon leaves her.
Now she's tied in da same way Masa was tied earlier.
 
Part 6
Teepri howls:Pagad ho gayi je Teepri....aapk liye!Aapk kaaran!Kyun na hou main pagad?
Har lugai ka dharam hove hain apne bheend ki khatir pagad hona,main bhi ho gayi toh kya ho gaya?😑😭
Bhairon is shocked as well as sad.
Odrs are all shocked.😲
Teepri howls:Jis din se is havedi ma kadam rakha maine Bhairon,siraph apk bare me socha maine!😭
Sumitra gives a look wich says:Bas kar,varna kachcha chaba jaungi!πŸ˜‰
Teepri says I only thought bout ur wellbeing,bt a lot of ppl came btwn us-lyk dis old hag,who only liked her bheendnis!Dat is y I wanted 2 get rid of dese bheendnis!
Anandi is afraid now & is holding Sumitra's hand.
Teepri says:Nahi toh k mhari mati gayi jo main kheer main namak dalti...?😑
Sumitra is shocked to hear dis!😲
Teepri says I did all dis for u!Aapko pana chahti thi main,Bhairon....😭
 
Part 7
Teepri howls:Jab bhi apke pas aane ki kosis ki jis Anandi ne mhara rasta roka!
Anandi starts crying now.😭(Jungle ko jalane k liye ek chingari hi kafi hai!πŸ˜‰)
Teepri says I wanted to get rid of her which is y I left da gas burning dat day!
Evry1 is super shocked now.
Now Teepri shreiks:Aaapki khaatirrrrr!!!!!!Tohhh kainnn buuuuraaaaa kiiiiyaaaaa?😑
She says da ppl of dis houz r jst faking der concern n luv for u!
Teepri says:apki jaydat par,apki har cheej par saap ki tarah dera jamay baithe hain jahan pe sab!
She looks at Basant.
Gehna looks sad.
Teepri says I jst did all dis for ur benefit.😲
Bhairon luks angry.
Teepri says I thought v both wil live happilu together,lyk v used 2 b happy in each odr's company in r childhood.I wanted to b ur wife since childhood...I came here to fulfil dat dream,so wich sin did I commit?😭😑
 
Part 8
Teepri says:Aapke parem me je Teepri bawdi ho gai,Bhairon!😭
SumiRon luk at each odr.
Teepri starts shifitng in her place & says:Mhane maaf kar do!
Den she shakes her head & screams:Mhare Bhairon mhane maaf kar do!
Bhairon shouts:Bas kar,Teepri!Chup kar!😑
Bhairon says til nw u havnt realized ur mistake?U wer aftr da life of a small child.
Nandu is sleeping in Gehna's arms.
Bhairon says:Ise prem kehti hai tu?Yeh prem nahi pagalpan hai!😑
Teepri keeps shaking her head.
Sumitra is crying.
 
Part 9
Bhairon continues:Yeh jante huye ki Sumitra meri patni hai,bachche hain mere,damad hai,bahu hai.... tune woh sab socha mere bare me?Arey main toh tujhe apne bachpan ki sathi samajhta tha....mujhe ghin aati hai yeh sochkar ki tere man me mere liye ye sab tha!
Masa closes her eyes.
Bhairon says u wanted to rift both da brothers apart,ryt?And y did u hav 2 do all dis 2 insult Anandi in front of Masa?😑
Teepri screams:Toh kain karti main?Je sab log mhare apne na hain!Mhare inse koi nata na hai!
Bhairon is irritated now.
Teepri says:Mhara nata toh siraph aapse hai Bhairon....😭
She howls dat u decieved me,u rejected my love,Bhairon....😭
 
Part 10
Shyam & Jagdish cm der wid  Teepri's husband,daughter &  parents.😲
Masa is really surprised to see dem.
She asks da old woman if she is Shanti?
BB r also surprised to see dem,since Teepri had said dat dey had passed away.
She says yes & da parents greet Masa.
Da father introduces Teepri's husband as der kunwarsa & her daughter as der navasi.
Teepri screams:Koi na hai je mhare...!😑
Masa recognizes Teepri's daughter & says u wer da one dat day in da temple,ryt?
Her husband nods.
Teepri is still shaking her head.
Masa looks at Teepri,den at Anandi & den again at Teepri.
Masa recalls Teepri telling her dat her parents hav passed away & her husband has left her,since she cud not bear a child.
Den she recalls askin her wer she went wen da proposal had cm?Teepri says I was feeling very thirsty so I went to drink water frm da well.
Later Teepri rejects her daughter sayin dat she luks very simple,we need a hasmukh girl for our Jagdish.
Masa is very angry.
 
Part 11
Masa slaps Teepri hard.πŸ‘
Evry1 is shocked.
Teepri screams:Mana kiya tha na mhane hath mat lagana!
Teepri's daughter is really scared.
Masa says:Mhare parivar ko jo takleef di hai tune,uski je saja hai!Apne swarth k liye jeher ghodne aayi thi mhare parivar me?
Teepri resumes howling.
Masa says:Apde gharwadon ko bhi na chhoda?Jin ma-bap ne thare ko janam dia unhiko mara bataya?Aulad hote huye bodi aulad na hai,bheend ne ghar se nikad diyo!
Teepri's husband is shocked to hear dat.
Masa shouts:Arey....jhoothi,makkar!!!😑
She is about to slap her again bt her husband says enough majisa!
He says:Jis lugai ko apna hos hi na hai use saja dene ka k fayda?Mhari bheendni ko ap maf kar dijiye...
Masa says:Itda bada kadja na hai mhara ki main isne maaf karoon!😑
 
Part 12
Masa asks:Itde sare logan ne dhokha dene ka koi pachtava hai tanne?
Teepri screams:Na hai koi pachtava mane!😑
Evry1 is shocked.
Teepri screams:Je sab kain kiya maine....bod kain kiya?Jhooth toh tune boda mhare se...
Badpan me Bhairon ki bheendni mhane banaya,isidiya aai phir...
Bhairon is lukin in da other direction.
Teepri screams:Mhare Bhairon ka dooja byah kar diya tune...kain Kannimaa mhane kain na dhoondha tune..?😭😑
Masa is still lukin very angry.
Teepri screams:Bod Kannimaa...main mar gayi thi k?😑😭
Masa says no,bt u left da village,widout givin ur address...so y r u blaming me?
Teepri shakes her head & howls:Dosh toh thara hi hai dokri...dosh toh thara hi hai!😭
 
Part 13
Teepri's mother shouts:Teeja!Kalyani bhabhisa se aise kain bat kare hai tu?Hos me aa... chhori hos me aa....in sab se mafi mang tu!😑
Teepri howls naa!
She looks at her mother & says:Na mangungi main mafi kisise samajh me aayi,hat!😑
Her mother is also really scared now.
Evry1 else jst keeps lukin at Teepri who is still shaking her head.
Teepri's father said dat aftr shifting to da new village,Teepri used to always remember her Kannimaa & Bhairon.
She used to say dat Kannimaa has fixed my marriage wid Bhairon,bt v never payed heed to it.V thought she's jst sayin it widout understanding da meaning of all dis!So, v got her married to r kunwar-sa!
Teepri screams:Kar diya mhara byaa!Mar dala mane!Sabse bade bairi ho mhare,dusman ho mhare tum dono!
Her parents r shocked.
 
Part 14
Teepri screams:Kitda kaha maine...eh bapu!Mhara dooja bya koni karna....eh maa!Mhare saadi toh Bhairon se hogi,par tum dono ne mhari suni koni!😑
Sumitra,Sugna & Anandi look upset.
Teepri screams:Kar diya mhara DOOJA BYAA...!Tum dono ko bhi saja midni chahiye! Dekhna... main bhi panchayat budaungi haa!....Mahapanchayat budaungi main!...Phir je dooja byah kharij ho javega,mhara bhi aur Bhairon ka bhi!...Haa!Dekh lena tum sab!😑
Evry1 is super shocked.😲
Teepri starts crying & muttering panchayat.....Bhairon......😭
Her husband says der wer certain incidents in which she called me Bhairon!
Bhairon is shocked to hear dat!
Her husband says once sm1 asked da name f her dhani so she said Bhairon...bt I nevr really understood y?Today I got to know...wot was der in her mind!😭
Masa is shocked.
 
Moral:Bachpan se sanjoye sapne jab poore nahi hote toh insan na keval apne vartaman ko nakarne lagta hai balki mansik roop se vikrut bhi ho sakta hai.
 
Precap:Bhairon n family r leavin da haveli.
Basant stops him n says I beg of u!Plz dont leave us & da haveli n go,plz..
Anandi turns back to see Dadisa,who's probably havin a heart attack.
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG what an episode.. full of Teepri ki bhootπŸ˜† Sudss was right.. can someone act like this.. its got to be Teepri's bhoot inside Sakshi.... she is just mind blowing.. she stole the show.......πŸ‘
 
Thanks Apara... your time is wortth..
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Posted: 13 years ago
teepri had taught good lesson to massa . massa kept faith on the others more than her own people. I hope from this massa learns something.
Edited by kalika_29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kalika_29

teepri had taught good lesson to massa . massa kept faith on the others more than her own people. I hope from this massa learns something.



yes... definitely..she should learn something..and i hope that this turn of events acts as an eye-opener for her....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Where is part 9 and further??
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx apara...teepri to gayi kaam se..now will maasa realise for good or again for a couple episodes???kuch keh nahi sakte..
PS: the later part is not loaded..are u still completing it or did it not get loaded..take ur time..thanx for writing such detailed updates..πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
ab Teepri ka kissa khatam hone wala hai BV mein....but where would possibly she be going.....

uska husband toh shayad usko na hi wapas leke jaye....she is acting like a possessed soul right now...parent ko bhi daant rahi hai..dangerous way mein.....

i feel she should be sent to mental asylum till she recovers her senses.......otherwise she will continue to howl and cry Bhairon and might even harm people physically when let loose...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the update!!! You've updated it word for word.. Thank u!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
teeprii... ugh, no, sakshi... no no... tepri.... sakshi... teepri??
btw, whozzit?? sakshi or teepri? like in those fairy tales where the characters come to life... it really looks like teepri has come out of the scripts 😊
anyway, what a superb performance!!!! am sad her role might end here

thanks apara for the scene to scene update 😊