mayur ff: hote hote pyaar hogaya - Page 7

@ Aancchal anytym dear 😊

@ Fariaa70 thxs dear i will try to update asap 😊

Originally posted by: mayur.rocks

second part is really good

Thxs dear 😊......i hope u also like ma other part of the ff 😉

well done!
i am waiting for their first takkar   😉
cont soon 👏   👏

Originally posted by: ruchi89

well done!
i am waiting for their first takkar   😉
cont soon 👏   👏

Thxs 😊........opf course akhi mayur ki first thakkar kuch hatke honi chahiye na 😆....i will update asap

Mayur thk alike

Originally posted by: -afsha-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Mayur thk alike</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Both are going to India togther</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Sharma wanna do partnershp wit Bushans </font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Hop they do it we'll get loads of Mayur than😉</font>

ya they do talk alike 😊 and lets see wht happen will they do partnership or not 😉 even if not u will get lots of mayur caz its just mayur ff 😆

heya..
lovet it.yaar..mind bolwing!!
plz cont soon..

Originally posted by: devz_g

heya..
lovet it.yaar..mind bolwing!!
plz cont soon..

Thxs 😊...i am trying to update it till saturday 😊

just read da concept.... seems really interestingg....
n update was awesum...
loved it....
continue it soooon...
n plz add me to ur pm list....

Hey guys am bck wth ma part 3…..i hope u like it….enjoy and don't forget to comment 😊.....and sorry if am not commenting on ur ff's actually i went out hav lots of ff's and sum i hav to start frm part 1 while current story has reached till part 30 or 40...so plzzz don't forget to pm me 😊


Next day at nupur place in morning
n- bauji maine ticket to buk kar li he par connecting flight nahi mili 😔
nd- kya matlab mein samja nahi?? 😕
n- who hum do din ke liye dubai hold pe honge phir india jayenge…who kya he na mujhe laga ke hum do din dubai jaa kar aye…thik kiya na meine?? 😊
nd- koi baat nahi…acha kiya tumne hum dubai bhi ghum lenge par do din ke liye?? 😕
n- ha who hum kuch hi jaga jayenge kyuki agar mein dubai ka hold bara diya to india mein free din itne nahi milenge aur india mein ghum ne ki to baat hi kuch aur he 😊
nd- thik he jaise tum thik samjo 😊


otherside mayank talking to his dad in his cabin
md- to beta tumhari tayari kaisi he project ko le gar?? 😊
m- thik he pas ek baar phir se ck kar lunga ke koi kami to nahi he 😊……who dad maine dubai hold rakha he do din ke liye……acha kiya na?? 😊
md- ha koi baat nahi he par do din ka kyu ek din ka karte to aram hojata aur india mein ek din zyada reh lete?? 😊
m- who kya he na ek din ka hi karne wala tha par ek meeting thi jo mujhe attend karni thi india jane se pehle isliye mujhe laga ke mein subha meeting kar lunga aur phir hum kuch dubai mein ghum ayenge 😊
md- oh acha acha 😊


mayank ke ghar par
m- ma aap aur dad packing karna suru kar lijiye hum 3 din ke baad nikal ne hi wale he 😊
mm- itni jaldi tu to keh raha tha ke hum 1 week pehle jane wale he?? 😕
m- who mujhe ek meeting attend karni he dubai mein aur hum thoda ghum bhi lenge isliye 2 din hold he waha par….isliye 3 din baad ja rahe he 😊
mm- thik he….acha hua bata diya packing to ek din mein hojayegi par ghar mein sab kuch set kar ke jana he na 😊
m- mujhe pata tha ke aap ko ghar mein kuch set karna he jaise kuch chize leni he relative ke liye hena ghar mein kuch nahi par shopping kar ni he ristedaro ke liye 😉
mm- to aur kya warna who log ka henge ke itne saalo bad 😊

mayank cuts him
m-itne saalo 😲 ma sirf 2 saal pehle to aap aur dad gaye the 😲
mm- to 2 saal….aur phir bhi kuch nahi laye to kya kahenge?? 😔
m-ma plzzz hum ghum mein jara he he to plzzz aap kisi bhi ristedar ki yaha nahi jayengi plzzz 😔


mayank's mom cuts him
mm- kya?? Kya kaha tumne to hum ristedaro se milne nahi jayenge?? 😔
m- ma hum ghum ne ja rahe he aur ise mera matlab ristedaro ke ghar se bilkul nahi tha…dad aap hi ma ko samjayena 😔
md- mein tum dono kle bich mein nahi anew ala mujhe sandwitch nahi bana 😉
mm- thik he tumhari meeting ke liye aur project ke liye ja rahe he na to tum jaisa kahoge hum waisa hi karenge 😡
m to himself- 😃 ma aap ko jab mera surprise milega to aap ristedaro ko bhi bhul jayenge bas 2 ghante hi baki he 😉


sham ko nupur ke room mein……nupur's mom enters
nm- are nupur ye kya abhi se packing karni suru kardi?? 😕
n- by god mein bhi na wo ma mein to aapko kehna hi bhul gayi ke hum 3 din baad ja rahe hein isliye mein packing karke abhi se rakh deti hu kyuki last day mujhe project mein kaam hoga isliye 😊
nm- kya 3 din baad par hum to 😕

nupur cuts her mom
n- ha ma who kya he na mujhe laga ke hum dubai kuch ghum aye isliye hum dubai ja rahe he aur phir india jayenge aur waise bhi abhi mujhe itna kaam nahi he yaha isliye laga ke thoda break lelu 😊
nm- thik kiya pura din kaam karti rehti ho thoda break acha rahega tumhare liye 😊
n- by god ma aap phir se suru hogayi plzzz ab aap jao aur kitchen mein kuch mere liye banedo mujhe bahot bhuk lagi he plzz   😊
nm- thik he jati hu baba 😊

nupur's mom leaves the room
n to herself- by god itni sari packing kar ni abhi baki he aur mere project ki bhi to packing karni he files aur sab papers (saying it tiredly)

after an hour
n to herself- chalo packing to hogayi....by god bahot thak gayi hu ab bas ek garma garam chai mil jaye to maza ajaye 😊


nm enters the room wth a cup of tea
nm- ye lo 😊
n- ohh ma thank you so much 😊

she takes a sip of the tea and smile cums on her face...she luks beautiful wooow
n-wooow ma app ke haath ka jawab nahi 😊 maza agaya 😊
nm- 😊

other side mayank is doing work on laptop
m to himself- ab sirf ek khanta baki he 😊

otherside in mayank's parents room
md-ab mujhe lakta he ke mayank bada ho gaya hai (with serious face)
mm- woh to kab ka bada hogaya he
md-mera matlab he ke shadi karne ke layak hogaya he
mm-ha woh to he 😊...mayu bada to hogaya he aur career bhi bana liya he 😊
md- ha ab yahi sahi waqt he uski shadi ka 😊
mn- are hum sab india ja rahe he to use kehte he ke 1 mahina waha reh kar ladki dekh le...kyu kya kayal he?? 😊
md- ha idea bura to nahi he....jab woh ayega tumhe mana keliye tab use kehenge...thik hai 😊
mm-par....vo....hamari baat manega??? (with little tensed face)
md- humari nahi par un dono ki to zaroor manega na 😊
mm- are ha unki bahot yaad arahi he...woh log ek mahine ke liye ghum ne kya chale gaya kuch kaami lagne lagi aur phi mayu bhi to akela hogaya   😔
md- don't worry ab sirf 2 week ki hi to baat he aur hum unlog ko sidhe india bula lenge aur woh mayank ko mana lenge 😊
mm-hhmmm

otherside in nupur's parents room
nm- are mein to batana bhul gayi woh nupur ki dost ka phone aya tha.....uski dost ke parents se baat bhi hui aur woh keh rahe the ke unke ghar hum 1 week rahe...aap ka kya kayal he?? 😊
nd-thik he nupur se baat kar lena 😊
nm-vo.....(little serious face)
nd- kya hua??
nm- vo log keh rahe the ke unko kuch khas baat bhi karni he humse
nd- to thik he na waha jakar baat kar lenge 😊
nm- thik hai

after an hour.......mayank gets a sms....he reads smiles and goes to his parent's room....his mom sitting on a chair and his dad on bed doing sumthing wth files
m- ma 😊
mm- mujhe tujse koi baat nahi karni bacho ke liye bhi kuch nahi le jane de raha he 😔
m- par maa hum ghum ne jaa rahe he aur hum sab riste daro ke ghar par nahi jayenge 😔
md- woh hum tumse isi maamle mein baat karna chahte hai
mm- hum log nahi...mujhe ise koi baat nahi karni 😔
m- ma plzz samjiye na...dad aap hi samjaye na 😔
md- mein nahi samjane wala........tum dono ke bich mein akar mujhe bakra nahi banna 😉
m- dad 😔
mm- mayu tu jaa yaha se mujhe tujse koi baat nahi karni 😔

suddenly ek awas ayi ek ladke aur ladki ki.....and mayank smiled
b and g- humse bhi baat nahi karni?? 😊

sab ne darwase ki taraf dekha aur ek sudden smile ayi unke chehre par

thts it frnds hea ends ma 3 part….hope u all like it and plzzz don't forget to comment..........to ab kya hoga??? kaun he ye ladka aur ladki???? kya mayank shadi ke liye manega??? kaunsi baat nupur ke dost ke parents ko karni he nupur ke parents se??? kya mayank aur nupur dubai mein mil payenge ya phir nahi?? Kya hoga unka reaction mil ne ke baad?? aur tender akhir milega kise?? To get the answers of this questions do wait for ma next update 😊Edited by mayur-arti.4eva - 13 years ago