My poems

Mind blowing Ashu.. i love the first n sometimes in life.. 

beautiful peoms i love them i could see an image by reading the peoms and i could feel that i was standing in that place while i was reading it

hey ashu teacherji.. dear...sabhi poems achche lage but 'a ray of hope' and 'visit to a new place"...bahoot -bahoot achcha tha...wo eng.mein kya kahte hain na..mind blowing...dimag ghoom gaya...mujhe bhi new place visit karna and new people se milna...oonki life,culture ke baare mein janna bahoot achcha lagta hai...and others sad poems padhker mai soi nahi but roi...specially" waiting" padhker...love you teacherji...maine aapki ff abhi padhi nahi padhker comments karoongi.....love..
punam

Heyy!!! All the poems are superb👏👏Aur nahi Ashu di koi bhbi soyega nahi agar aap itni achi poems likhogi toh. I especially liked d first two and d last. Di aap aur bhi poems likhte rahyega.Once again, awesome.

great peoms dear:)
Starting wali thodi depressing thin yet very touching.

Hey Tuti fruti😳

aare wah😛
Tu poem bhi likhti hai😲😲
Multi talented TF😉..must say😆
All the poems r awesome👏⭐️
Loved them all😳
Keep up doing great works like these👍🏼
thanks for the PM

love ya
urs PP😳

Edited by nidha1983 - 13 years ago

Great work yaar .
Lovely poems.

heyyy dear,
nice poem
thanks for PM.



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