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visrom

@visrom

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi All,

Glad to know that you all are enjoying the 'Write a scene' contest.

I have added a few rules. Please follow them.

The usual deadlines apply.

Last date for posting entries - Saturday

Voting - Sunday and Monday.

Results - Monday evening.

Here are this week's pictures. These pics are as per Somu_05's choice.

(Thanks Somu 😊)

All the best!!!

Rules:

1. Please do not quote other's post.

2. Please post the scene number on top of your entry.

3. If you like a scene, please hit 'like' and kindly avoid commenting till the contest is over.

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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somu_05

@somu_05

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Posted: 13 years ago

I wanted the Contest to Be a Little Difficult this time..!! so thought of choosing scenes which were Unconnected...!! [:p] Try People.. Lets see what we can make out of itt..!!

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

SCENE1

let me try

Daya: sir humne sab jagah chan mara " The case of Missing Bullet " ki CD kahin nahi mili.

Abhijeet: itne din hogaye SONY walon ne humme batay bhi nahi ki CD kho gayi hai bechare hamare Fans, ye to unhone humme bataya ki koi chakkar hai warna to hamme malum bhi na chalta

Daya: sir mujhe lagta hai hamme XYZ se milna chahiye us smay vo SONY channel ke head the.

XYZ refuses that he knew anything so called in forensic lab for live detector test

XYZ: aap ko kitni bar keh chuka hoon mujhe nahi malum vo CD kahan hai. aur itne donion baad apko vo CD kyun chahiye

ACP: CD kho chuki hai ye pehle kyun nahi bataya, main tumhari baat pe vihwas kaise karun Salunke chalo test shuru karo.

Salunke starts questioning. he is just asking basic question now, like name etc first

Daya: sir agar CD ke bare mein pata chal gaya to main nachunga
Abhijeet: yes sir.
ACP; to tumhe kya lagta hai main kya karonga

Other side Salunke questioning
NEXT DAY

CID team SONY's office gives them CD and warn them then everyone moves out.

Head (to other person standing there): CID team kya baat hai apne Fans ke liye kya kya karti hai.
Abhijeet turns and .....

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 13 years ago

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JP22

@JP22

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

SCENE 2

Daya:Sir etana dhundha yaha waha es ghar mein lekin kuch nahi mila 'Kuch nahi hein yaha.

ACP:Ye tum kehe rahe ho Daya'.Aaj tak kabhi aisa nahi huwa ki koi muzlim ne koi galati nahi ki hogi.Dundho dhudo kuch to milega hi dekho'apani dono aakhein khli karake dhundho.

Abhijeet: Sir Salunkhe sahib ka call aaya tha.Unho ne hame sabako Forensic lab mein jald se jald bulaya hein.

Forensic lab :

All CID officers Daya,Fredy,Abhijeet and Muskan enter with ACP sir

ACP: Oy Salunkhe kyo bulaya ham sabako..kuch khas baat pata chali kya?

Dr.Salunkhe:ACP sahib aap sab khushi se nachane nalege?

ACP:Yane kuch pata lag gaya.Salunkhe tumhe manana padega.Batao kya pata chala hein.

Dr.Salunkhe:Aap sabako soney walon ne Jhalak Dikhala Ja ka invitation diya hein .

ACP: Kya? Salunkhe ye batane ke liye tune ham sabakon yaha bulaya.

Dr.Salunkhe:Boss soney walon se order hein manana to padega.Wo Hamare mai baap hein agar nai kiya to hamara hi nukasan hein.

ACP: wahi to,last time muze Indian Idot mein bulaya tha waha apane khud ke naam se bhi nahi ja saka'.Waha bhi ACP banakar bulaya aur unhone diye huvi line bolane ko kaha.Muze to...

Dr.Salunkhe:ACP sahib hamare bolanese koi sunega to nahi jo bola hein wo hame karana padega.

ACP: wo to hein hi,Chalo ye bhi sehe lenege BP ji dekh rahe hon na aapke bachho ka kya haal ho raha hein aaj kal aur aap hein ki aapako CID ke liye fursat hi nahi.

Dr.Salunkhe:Chalo Sab ab se dance ki practice shuru karege.

Fredy:Lekin sir ye to Fornsic lab hein yaha ham Dance kaise kar sakate hein.

Muskan:Fredy aaj kal Forensic lab se jyada Entertainment spot ho gaya hein.yaha kuch bhi karo kisiko kuch bhi farak nahi padega.

Dr.Salnkhe:Are yar Fredy yaha kuch bhi chalata hein..Firting,Fighting,arguments..Romance ajase dance shuru hoga.,bus

Daya: Salunkhe sahib ye aap kya kehe rahe hein? Muze yaha dance practice karane se aitraaz hein.

Dr.Saklnkhe:Kyo yar Daya..Kyo aitraaz hein forensic lab mein dance practice karane ke liye.

Abhijeet:Sir yaha dead bodies hoti hein.

Dr.Salunkhe:Abhijeet tumhe kabse Deadbodies ki parava hone lagi,Hamare pass sirf 2 hi jagah hein eak CID bureau jo etana chhota hein waha kahade rehene ko bhi jagah nahi aur ye forensic lab yaha bahot sari jagah hein yaha hi tum sab practice karo.Chalo mein Tumhe dance ke step mein sikhaunga chalo dance ke liye apani apani position lo.

(All Officers took the dance postion and Dr.Salunkhe start CD palayer .All officers started dancing except ACP sir)

ACP sahib aap bhi shuru ho jao.

ACP:nahi nahi Salunkhe Muze Dance karana nahi aata.

Dr.Salunkhe:Nahi boss meine dekho tha Jina Esi Ka Naam Hein mein aap dance kar rahe the aap bhi wha participant ho.

ACP: Kya yaar ye Soney wale kya kya karvayenge hum sabase.

(All are practicing dance many days.Dr.Salunkhe trained all CID officers ver well.ACP,Daya and Abhijeet are the main dancer)

One Day

Dr.Salunkhe:Chalo aaj apani final paractce hein to aaj mze sab individual dance karake dikhayege.

All officers one by one came and danced.Specially Daya danced fabulously. But Abhijeet was hesitated.

Daya:Boss tum dance kyo nahi kar rahe ho?

Abhijeet: Nahi yar..mein nahi kar sakata muze dance nahi aata.

Daya:Ye kya baat huvi Abhijeet.Tum achha dance karte ho,Hame Salunkhe sahib ne kiatana achha trained kiya hein

Abhijeet:Lekin yar..

Daya:Kuch nahi sunuga mein tumhari chalo shuru ho jao.

And Abhijeet started dancing'he took difficult step very well.And last li he took the jump and turned and smiled.

Every body cheers

Edited by jiya1 - 13 years ago

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twinklesmiles

@-Twinkles-

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

SCENE - 3

Daya - Sir, ek purani chabbi mili hai..

ACP - per yeh kaunsi cheez ki chabbi ho sakta hai...??

Abhijeet - Sir isse forensic lab le chalte hai... ultra scanning se shayad kuch pata chale

ACP tells to take the keys to Dr.Salunke..

In the lab

Dr. Salunke after doing ultra scanning over the rusted keys notices a small number engraved over the keys, seeing the number he remebers of something else and he tries to match it with each other ...

Later the CID team is extremely delighted after acknowledging the identity of the keys

ACP (with a big smile over his face) - yaar Salunke, kya tum saach keh rahe ho... aaj tumne hum sabko bahaut kush kiya hai... aaj pure 2 saal baad hume woh wala chabbi mili hai

Daya bursts out off excitement - Sir mujhse yeh kushi bardash nahi ho rahi... main nachana chahata hu ..!!

ACP - sirf tum nahin Daya hum sab bhi nachenge.. hume tho party karna chahi ye

(ACP turns to Abhijeet and says )

per pehle Abhijeet, tum ABCD cabin jao aur is chabbi se kholke dekho...

Abhijeet reaches the most wanted treasure, the CD's of old episodes which the team was been searching for almost a year now,

he say to himself...

ab dekhta hoon... re-runs pe old episodes ko kaise nahin dekhate hain ...

Edited by twinklelovesCID - 13 years ago

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437563

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Posted: 13 years ago

SCENE 4

ACP sir: samjh nai ata ke aisa ho kese sakta hai? Ye gher bhi chaan mara or yahan bhi koi nai hai. Abhijeet kuch to garbar hai.

Abhijeet sir: yahi to sir. sub ke sub ek sath ghaib hogaye? Laikin kese? Or kahan?

Daya Sir(approaching them): sir ye daikhiye, ye invitation mila hai. Koi diwali special party hai, IF me. Lagta hai sub yahen milain ge.

Team arrives at the party, enjoy meal and then join CIDians on the dance floor[:D/]

and just then abhijeet sir felt that someone is keeping an eye on him, he initially acts as if he is ignoring this but then he suddenly turns around to catch red handed all those who are 😍 😍 😍Edited by dr.fahmi - 13 years ago

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twinklesmiles

@-Twinkles-

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

SCENE - 5

Everyone are called for the next episode's promo shooting.. everyone are ready with their own dialogues...camera starts...

VOICE OVER - thaqikaat may, mujrim ke kilaf CID team ko mili hai ek surag ...

ACP Sir's dialogue - achchi tarah see sabooth doondo sarur kuch na kuch milega yehi se,

Daya's dialogue - Sir, yeh dekhiye... akhir mili he gaya...

Abhijeet 's dialogue - ab dekte hai ki woh CID se kaise bachega

Screen freezes at Abhijeet Sir's expression...

and the next scene of the promo, just flashes ... but no dialogues by anyone...

only voiceover is heard

VoiceOver - CID main ho raha jashn... per kisliye ..?? janne ke liye dekhiye ... CID es shukrvaar raat 10 baje...

and the ads followed by Promo saying thumps up presents CID...etc.. has been recorded

Promo shooting is finished - director says pack up - everyone leaves .. as usually, the rest of cast and crew are disussing the episode to be telecast

Adi Sir say to himself - hmmm... mujhe Daya se zyada lines bolwaya aur screen bhi mujh per he freeze kiya gaya.. shayad mere baari hai , anaywale episode ki bech main se gayab ho jane ki... Edited by twinklelovesCID - 13 years ago

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somu_05

@somu_05

Senior Member

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Posted: 13 years ago

Daya : Sir.... Main soch raha tha... Hum teeno mein se sabse zyada log kise chahte honge..?

ACP : hmm Kaafi Gambhir Case Hai...

Abhijeet : Kyun Na Competition kare... Salunkhe Saab ko Bolte hai Judge Karne ko..!

Salunkhe Ponders over some points and Concludes That Abhijeet Is the Winner..!!

Daya : 😲 Yeh kaise possible hai .... mujhe Laga main sabka Favourite tha....

ACP : Kya yaar Salunkhe... Yeh dosti Nibhayi..?

Abhijeet : Mann kar raha hai is pal ko Capture kar loon Camera mein.....

Freddy : Abhijit Sir.. Main aapka Camera Men... fir main Bhi Favourite 😃

Muskaan : I wish jaldi koi dhang ka Case Mile... nahi toh CID ka bhavishya mujhe saaf saaf dikh raha hai...(Stares at the whole team)

After Everyone Leaves... Abhijit looks behind and thinks...

Abhijit (thinking) : Chahte toh sab log hum teeno ko ek sath hai..par koi nahii.. in logo ko abhi yeh hi lagne do ki main sabka favourite..!! Baad mein Kabhi yeh Secret Kholoonga...! 😛

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459494

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Posted: 13 years ago

SCENE No. 7

Abhijeet:Tumhe kya lagta hai,Daya?

Daya:Khooni ne chaku se joote ko cheer diya,matlab marnewala ne is joote me zarur kuch na kuch chhupaya hai,ya shayad chhupaya tha,jise khooni apne saath le gaya.

ACP:Khooni ne chaaku yaheen chhod dia,matlab woh hadbadahat me yahan se gaya hai,shayad usne kisi k aane ki aawaz sun li hogi,varna woh yeh chaaku khulleaam rakhkhega kyun?...Iska matlab...woh jo bhi cheez hai,abhi bhi is hi joote me hai.Is body ko aur joote ko forensic lab le jao.

ACP:Yeh kya karva rahe ho tum in sab se,Salunkhe?

Daya:Sir mere ghutne dukh rahe hai,aur kitni der tak humein yoon statue ki tarah rehna hoga?

Freddy thinks:Balle balle..shava shava....Aise lag raha hai jise main SONY pe aanewale,Punjab-based serial ka promotion kar raha hoon.

Muskaan thinks:Meri position sabse achchi hai,no dard-ward.

Abhijeet eyes fall on the shoe kept in the glass box.

Abhijeet thinks:Areh?Yeh kya hai?

Abhijeet smiles at the murderer,who is shell shocked to see him.

Abhijeet:Kya hua?Aise chaunk kyun rahe ho?Tumhe kya laga ki yeh sharafat ka naqab pehenke ghoomoge toh CID ki nazron se bachke nikal jaoge?Itna aasan nahi hai CID ko bewaqoof banana...

The man tries to run,but Daya comes in from the other door and..... SLAP!!!!

Edited by aparakshitij - 13 years ago

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

IF-Addictz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Scene # 8

Daya: Sir, yeh kuch baal mila hain!
ACP: (Observing those carefully) Hmm...Lagta hain ladki ka baal hain, par itni choti kyun hain?!!
Freddy: Sir, meri wife kehti hain, koi bhi ladki ka baal choti ho toh use hair therapy lena chahiye. Sir, mujhe pata hain kaha hair therapy karwaya jatihain. Biwi ne pataya (he laughs out of pride)
Abhijeet: (being angry) Tum jakar aapna baal lamba karne ka therapy lekar aao jao!
Freddy: Arre Sir, main....
ACP: Freddy....wife ko bhul jao..
Freddy: Sir, kya! Main mar jayunga uss....
ACP: (Stops him) Chup!
Abhi: Sir, baal curly lagta hain. Aur dekhke aisa lagta hain ke yeh curly karwaya gaya hain..
Daya: Boss. Arre waah! Tum to curl expert hogaye ho! Sunsilk co-creation me tumhara bhi creation hona chahiye...
Abhijeet gets blushed and tries to say something. But Freddy interrupts..
Freddy: Sir, main zara woh baal dekhu...
ACP: Waise! Tumhe kaise pata chala yeh curly hain? Hume to nehi laga..!!
Abhi: Woh! Sir main...
Daya: Sir, yeh to bahhot simple baat hain.
ACP: Matlab!
Daya: Sir wo jo! Salunkhe saab ki yaha ek curly baal wali ladki kaam karti hain...Aur Abhi ko uski...
Freddy: (interrupts and gets shocked) Kya! Sir mujhe aap log bata nehi koi nayi ladki aaya hain lab me...
Daya: Freddy, tum na tumhari dimag thoda shake karlo..
Freddy: (Shaking his head) O! Dr. Tarika!!
ACP: Bahut hua! Forensic lab chalte hain. Woh baalka DNA kara te hain aur (Looking at Abhi with a slightly angry look) zarurat pare to curl test bhi karayenge!!

In forensic lab,

Salunkhe: Aao ACP. Baalo ki rahasya samadhan hogaya. Bahut surprising aur mazedar baat hain Abhijeet!
ACP: (Singing) Bol Dr. bol!
Salunkhe: Arre Daya-Abhijeet, tum dono khare kyun ho? Tumhari boss garahain, tum nacho. Muskaan acchi tarha se nach na!
(Daya-Abhi starts dancing)😆
Muskan: Sir, main to woh baat sunne ki baad hi tair karungi nachna yah nehi!
Salunkhe: (Laughing) Yeah baal haito curly or ladki ka, par nakli wali! Yeh wig hain!
Abhijeet: (Being straight) Hain! Kya?
Daya: Matlab, gaya mehnat pani me. Itni dhundne ki baad mila tha! Aur aab pata bhi nehi chalega khuni kaun hain! Shayed yeh khuni tha!!!
Muskan: Salunkhe saab aapne toh meri naach ne ka rasta bandh kar diya...
ACP: Chalo sab yaha se! Salunkhe ne maje ki baat nehi kiya, hamari hi mazak uraya!!
(Everyone turns back and about to leave)

Tarika: Sir, ek minute. Inn balo ki beach do, dusri type ka baal bhi mila. Main iska test kiya aur yeh asli hain. Yeh kaam asakte hain khooni dhundne me.
Abhijeet: (Turning with a charmed smile) Dekha Dr. Sahab, Tarika jee ne kya kamal kar dii. Aap to great ho Tarika jee!
Salunkhe: Abhijeet! Tum na...(ACP stops him)
ACP: Accha hain! Aab humari tairkikat ki faal milega!

Edited by TanniSDaya - 13 years ago

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