JPSYA FF|Hamesha & Forever|New upd pg 8,9 - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the appreciation friends. Here you go with the next part:

Nihal: Massi hum ghar jaa rahe hain?

Ayesha: haan nihal. Kitne saalon ke baad jaa rahein hain na.

Nihal: haan massi. Hum bohot masti karenge. Aur buddy se bhi milengey.

Veer: Buddy kaun hai?

Ayesha: subhash ko nihal buddy bulata hai.

Veer: o..

Ayesha: veer, ab yeh file chodo aur apna packing karo.

Veer: Mch... Kya ayesha.. Tum kar lena meri packing bhi. Its your responsibility you know.

Nihal: shuru ho gayye aap dono? Oh no. Ab mein sone jaa raha hoon. Good night.

Ayesha/Veer: Good night nihal.

Ayesha: aur haan.. Nihal.. Suno.. Ab room mein jaa kar TV on mat karna. Directly apne bed par jaa ke so jao. Kyunki kal mein subah 5 baje uthaoongi. 7'o clock flight hai na humara.

Nihal: ok massi.

Ayesha: Veer, tum bhi kaldi so jao..

Veer: (Naughtily) Mrs. Veer Vardhan Singh, maine ek naya resolution bana diya hai. Woh yeh hai ki mein aaj se kam soonga aur mere biwi ko bhi jaga ke rakhoonga. You know what i mean right (In a sneaky and romanic voice.)

He goes closer to ayesha but ayesha pushes him lightly!

Ayesha: veer.. (blushing)

Veer: kya..

Ayesha: tum bhi na..

Veer: mein bhi kya..

Ayesha: kuch nahi..

Veer: aise kaise kuch nahi. Tum kuch bolne waali thi na.. Mein bhi kya?

Ayesha: bohot naughty ho. Aur din par din aur bhi naughty hotey jaa rahe ho.

Veer: O.. Agar mein naught hoon, toh kal raat kaun naughty ho raha tha?

Ayesha: shut up veer..

She runs to the washroom to get her and veer's stuff for packing.

MORNING:

Veesha sleeping together with veer's arms wrapped protectively around ayesha. Alarm rings.. Triiiingggg

Veer: hmmm... Mch..

He hides his face by snuggling into ayesha's neck.

Ayesha: veer, kya kar rahe ho?

Veer: ayesha, please alarm ko band karo na.

Ayesha stops the alarm. She tries to get up but veer's hold is very strong on her.

Ayesha: veer, chodo na. Mujhe ready hona hai aur breakfast bhi banana hai.

Veer: please ayesha yahin ruko na thodi der ke liye.

Ayesha: veer, flight miss hojayega.

Veer: theek hai. Tum jaa sakti ho.. Ek sharat par.

Ayesha: kya?

He points towards his cheeks. Ayesha understands and kisses him, ruffles his hair and leaves the room. She fetches the news paper, milk and all the basic chores and comes back to the room to take shower but finds that, veer is missing in the room. She hears sounds from the washroom and understands that veer is inside.

Ayesha: Veer, aur kitna der lagega?

Veer: Darwaza khula hai.

Ayesha: kya?

Veer opens the door and ayesha gets shocked at the scene. Nihal is already up. Nihal is playing with bubbles in the tub and veer and nihal are throwing bubbles at each other.

Ayesha: yeh sab kya hai? Yeh bathroom ka kya haal bana rakha hai aap ne? Nihal(angry now) jaldi chalo. Tub mein masti kaafi kar liya hai tum nr. Ab bahar aao aur kapde pehenlo. Abhi.

Nihal comes out before he gets more scoldings. Ayesha gives a cold stare to veer and dries nihal's hair.

Veer: woh, ayesha, mein jaaon nahane?

Ayesha: thanks. For getting back to your own self. Ek nihal kaafi nahi tha? Tum bhi shuru ho gayye ho? Aisa lag raha hai ki mein ek ke baje do do bachchon ko sambhal rahi hoon.

Veer: achcha..

Ayesha: veer, ab behas mat karo. Jaldi jao.

Ayesha dresses up nihal and asks him to eat the breakfast which she left on the table. Meanwhile, veer comes out and ayesha rushes in. She dresses in a beautiful baby pink saree. She finds veer trying to dry his hair.

Ayesha: Lao towel mujhe do.

Veer: Gussa chala gaya?

Ayesha: Mein kissi se gussa nahi thi. Mein chid gayyi thi.

Veer: tum iss saree mein bohot khoobsoorat lag rahe ho.

Ayesha: tum bhi. She takes kajal from her eyes and places it behind veer's ear.
Posted: 13 years ago
veer and aisha's scene is very sweet i am watching jpsya after veesha mariage it feels like it, veer is very cute as naughty husband i luvd it
Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the comment. Will continue soon.
Posted: 13 years ago
AIRPORT:

Nihal: Chachu........ Aur kitna wait karna hai?

Veer: Bas aur paanch minute beta. Announcement hoga dekh na.

Nihal: okay :s

Ayesha: Veer, bohot pyaas lagi hai. Mein apne liye cold drink lene jaa rahi hoon. Tumhr aur nihal kuch chahiye?

Nihal: (Getting excited and before veer replies) massi massi massi... Mujhe 7up chahiye...

Ayesha: Aur tumhe veer?

Veer: Poora can peene ka mood nahi hai. I will just take a sip from yours.

Ayesha: Ok. Will be back.

Veer: Ayesha, tum yahin baito. Mein lekar aata hoon.

Ayesha: Nahi. Mein leke aaongi na.

She leaves to the wending maching and inserts the amount and presses her choice. She will be busy collectin the stuff while veer keeps staring at her movements lovingly. Suddenly he realizes that, the person standing behind ayesha in the queue is staring at her with repulsive intentions. He gets angry, asks nihal to sit there only and goes to ayesha. She gets surprised to see his angry face. He wraps an arm around her shoulders protectively and takes her to the seat, leaving ayesha confused.

Nihal grabs his drink and veesha sit down.

Ayesha: Veer, kya hua tha?

Veer: Kya nahi hua? Woh tumhare peeche joh kada hai kaisa dekh raha tha tumhe? Arghh.

It takes a couple of minutes for ayesha to understand.

Ayesha: Par mujhe koi tension nahi. Kyunki tum ho na mujhe bachane ke liye. Mera super man.

Veer: Super man? (he giggles. Now his is relatively relieved)

Nihal: Aap super man ke baare mein baat kar rahe hain?

Veer: (naughtily) haan beta aap ki massi baat kar rahi thi.

Nihal: Massi, mujhe bhi super man bohot passand hai.

Massi: achcha! Mujhe laga tom and jerry tumhara favorite hai.

Nihal: Haan. Woh toh all time favourite hai.

They continue their banter and veer keeps staring at his two angels with love. He feels contended.

To be continued...
Posted: 13 years ago
I am loving the story
Superb scenes of VeeSha and Nihal
Veer, Aysha Nihal characters are exactly JPSYA
Keep Contining
Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much for d comment. Will continue soon.
Posted: 13 years ago
SHIMLA:

Finally they land in shimla, collect their baggage and make their way to the exit. Ayesha finds subhash far away, searching for her and nihal. She gets a plan immediately and will tell to nihal. Nihal says okay and veer smiles at her silly plan.

Ayesha seperates from nihal and veer and moves forward, with nihal and veer following her as if they don't know her. She moves towards subhash and pats his shoulders.

Ayesha: Hi handsome (Changing her voice so that he can not recognize her)

Subhash: Sorry! Aap.. Kaun? (Getting nervous)

Ayesha: Kya? Tum itne jaldi kaise bhool gayye? Uss din hum miley the na uss disco mein. Aur kitna dance kiya hum ne?

Subhash: Dekhiye, madam, aap mujhe shayad galat pehchan rahe ho. Mein woh nahi jis ke baare mein aap baat kar rahe hai. Infact maine aap se kabhie mila bhi nahi.

Now ayesha entangles her arm with his.

Ayesha: yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Chalo na, mere ghar chalte hai.

Now, subhash really gets tensed.

Subhash: (pleading) Dekhiye, please, mein aap ko nahi jaanta.

Then he murmurs to himself. Yeh ayesha abhi taq aayi kyun nahi? Uff..

Ayesha: Kya hua sweetu, tum kissi ke intzaar kar rahe ho kya?

Subhash: haan.. Woh main.. Hello, mein aap ko kyun bataoon? Mein aap ko jaanta taq nahi.

Now ayesha half hugs him.. Ayesha: aise mat kaho na..

Subhash gets really tortured now and makes helpless faces. Seeing this, ayesha will not be able to control her laughter and laughs so much that subhash does not understand.

Nihal and veer enter into the scene.

Subhash: Nihal.. Tum.. Ayesha! Tum ne..

Ayesha: Pattu.. Dar gayya kya?

Subhash: Ayesha, yeh kaisa shararat hai?

Nihal: Buddy, tum bohot funny lag rahe the!

Subhash: Good. Surgery ke baad photo bhejne ke liye kaha par tum ne bheja nahi. Issiliye pehchan nahi paya. Warna kab ka..

Ayesha: Whatever. Veer, yeh subhash hai.

Veer: hey subhash.

Subhash: Hey veer! Bohot suna hai tumhare baare mein. Ayesha jab bhi baat karti hai na, uss ke poore conversation mein sirf do naam hi sunayi dete hai. Veer nihal - Nihal veer. Specially tumhara naam.
Veer aisa hai. Veer waisa hai.. Good. Finally we met!

Ayesha: Ab ghar chalna hai ya phir yahi baatein karna hai?

Subhash: Chal na chimpanzee! Kis ne roka tumhe?

Ayesha: You are such a donkey!

They go to the parking lot and ayesha finds a car. It was her car, her favourite one. She got it as a gift from her jeeju. She was a big fan of bike racing and driving on the hills of shimla. But she sold the car when she was in dire need of money.

Ayesha: Shub; yeh gaadi.. Yeh tum ne..

Subhash: Haan ayesha. Yeh gaadi maine khareeda hai. Aur yeh tumhare liye hi hai. It's your wedding gift you know.

Ayesha has tears in her eyes.

Ayesha: shub itna mehnga gift. Nahi nahi. Mein iske paise tumhe de doongi. Please.

Subhash: no way. Tum bhool gayyi kya idiot. Humara rule!

Ayesha wipes her tears and hugs him. He gives her the key, asking her to drive. She nods her head. Veer and ayesha sit in the front, while nihal and shub sit in the back seat.

Ayesha: when did you buy this?

Shub: Well, mein ek conference par delhi gayya aur wahan cars ki exhibition thi. I thing approx 6 or 7 months ago. Dekha ki tumhari hai aur pata hai how much you love this car. Khareed liya.

Ayesha: Pata hai veer, yeh gaadi jeeju ne mujhe gift kiyatha. Yeh meri SABSE favourite cheez hai.

Shub: Haan haan.. Aur pata hai veer yeh kitni ziddi thi; Kissi ko apna gaadi touch bhi nahi karne deti thi.

Ayesha: Dekh na. Aaj se koi iss ko drive nahi karega. Sirf mein karoongi.

Shub: veer bhi nahi?

Ayesha: nahi! Veer ko special permission hai. Mein ya veer, ek hi baat to hai.

Nihal/Shub: Ooooooooooo!

Posted: 13 years ago
super two new parts by u its very interesting veer will get litle jealuous by shubhash, veer is the best husband he protected aisha from that man's bad intention in airport he is 👏⭐️😍
Posted: 13 years ago
ananya your story is getting interesting.the character of shubh bring the face of sid to my eyes like veer does because sid's first character in a serial name was shubh.ayesha calls him shubh.its double treat of sid for me its really superb to read.i think veer will be jealous of shubh and ayesha friendship but veesha always come closer when they become jealous than going far.i love veesha scenes and all scenes of them with nihal is really like real jpsya.keep continuing
Posted: 13 years ago
I hope Subhash will not make problems for VeeSha
Please continue soon your fanfiction is really interesting

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