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JPSYA FF|Hamesha & Forever|New upd pg 8,9 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
You are so good and very fast updating. Keep it up. Write more and i love the precap a lot.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnku so much for d comments wasz n veeshaluv
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Posted: 13 years ago
though i have  read the initial part of the post only, i can say that this is a good fan fiction. usually i don't like to read fan fiction and try to avoid to read the fan fiction.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u. I never wrote ff's before. This is my 1st full fledged ff :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for updates
The story is too interesting
VeeSha and Nihal scenes are very good
Precap is great very interested to read it

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot for the comment taketen. Great that you like d ff. Keep reading n commenting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi guys, i just thought of namin this FF. So, named it after one of the most memorable songs on JPSYA. Hamesha and Forever, jab taq saanson ka saath hai.. Hope you like the adding up of our favourite memory...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ananya , ur FF is too good . please keep updating whenever u get time.I am always waiting for ur next storyline.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot for the comment. I will update tonight again!

Cheers,
Ananya!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ayesha: Veer, yeh dori baando na..

Veer: Ek minute. Abhi aaya..

Ayesha: Kya ek minute! Jaldi aao na!

Veer: Ayesha mera tie theek nahi ho raha hai! Ek minute wait karo na..

Ayesha: Mein baandloongi.. Pehle mera dori theek karo!

Veer comes and ties it while ayesha sets his tie proper.

Veer: Yaad hai, tum ne mere liye ek tie laya tha.. Aur jab nihal ne bola tha ki tum mere ko tie baando, tumhara chehra ek dum lal laal ho gaya tha. Tum kitni sharma gayyi! Oyye hoyye! Mera toh jaan hi nikal gayya tha!

Ayesha: Veer! Tab toh hum ne propose taq nahi kiya and tell me, mujhe kya khushi khushi tum par tie bandna chahiye tha?

Veer: Haan! You should be happy you know! After all, it's just me! Sharmaane ki kya zaroorat hai?

Ayesha: (imitating) O.. After all its just me.. Sharmane ki kya zaroorat hai?

Veer: Mera nakal utaar rahi ho?

Ayesha: Chodo aur batao.. Main kaise lag rahi hoon?

Ayesha will be wearing a maroon saree with silver work in the edges, with a matching chain and cute ear rings. The saree is gifted by veer on their engagement day.

Veer: Hmm.. Sab kuch theek hai, par kuch kami hai!

Ayesha: Kya?

Veer: Ek minute..

He comes back with a box in his hands and opens it infront og her. It is a beautiful diamond and ruby set with matching chandleir ear rings and a solitire diamond ring.

Ayesha: Veer! Yeh mere liye?

Veer: Nahi padosi ke liye hai..

Ayesha pouts and says,"Veer"...

Veer: Aur kis ke liye laata mein. Sirf tum hi ho !!

Ayesha: Veer par yeh kitna expensive hoga na!

Veer: I dont care. Mein jab tumhare liye aur nihal ke liye shopping karta hoon na, mein paise nahi ginta. Engagement ke shopping ke liye gayya tha, pasand aaya aur maine khareed liya..

Ayesha: Thank you and i love you!

Veer: I love you two!

Ayesha: I love you 1 crore....

Veer: I love you infinite number!

Ayesha: Very funny! Ab chalo nihal ko dekhte hain.

Veer: Pehle mera return gift dedo.

Ayesha understands and coochicoo (Turn your imaginations... WILD)

To be continued...