Jaane Pehchane Se Yeh Ajnabbi

JPSYA FF|Hamesha & Forever|New upd pg 8,9 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
thnks for this update ananya.the story is going superbly.👏cant wait for the next updates of it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
the name of the fanficiton hamesha and forever i love this song from the time it was played in jpsya.rocking name for it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ananya when you updating next?
I love the fanfiction
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi ! Ananya.....thank you dear....you have really made the story quite interesting....you have beautifully picturised the Veesha scenes.......I always like to read FF......I read almost all the FFs.......But I must say that I have never seen anybody to update so beautifully and that also so quickly.......😆.........Eagerly waiting for the next part..........Keep Smiling.......
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Posted: 13 years ago
Friends, thank u soooooooooooooo much for the sweet and fab comments. You made my day!!!!!! Waz busy with christmas shopping n guests so could nt update these days, updating nw!!!! Update coming up....
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Hi readers, thanks a lot for the appreciation and replies. Do press like if you find the work good.....

Nihal, veer and ayesha have a great time talking and meeting everyone in the party. Subhash announces and requests everyone to proceed for the dinner. It was a buffet style dinner with multi-cusine dishes. Veer, Nihal and Ayesha sit on one table.

Ayesha: Mein pehle nihal ke liye kuch laati hoon. Phir hum dono khayenge veer.

Veer: Okay..

Ayesha takes nihal to the counters and serves food for him. VeeSha leave nihal at the table with his plate and get food for themselves.

Veer: Ayesha, paneer bohot achcha hai. Why don't you get some for yourself?

Ayesha: Nahi veer.. Paneer tastes weirdly.

Veer: No.. Its not.. See take a bite...

Veer makes her take a bite from his paneer roll and ayesha finds it does not taste that bad. They realize a flash and turn to find that subhash captured a picture of veesha when veer was feeding ayesha. Subhash and neelu join them in the dinner and they do a lot of masti.

Everyone leaves but veenisha are still in subhash's house.

Ayesha: Shub, maine socha kal mein, veer aur nihal springtree resort jaayenge.

Shub: Great idea boss. Par unlucky me... Main nahi aa paoonga. Kal meri meeting hai delhi mein. Kal poora din gayab rahoonga... Mch..

Ayesha: It's okay yaar.. I can understand. Jab tum wapas aaoge, hum exhibition par jaayenge. Okay.

Shub: Superb idea.

VeeNiSha come back to home. Nihal says he is tired and veesha put him to bed. Veer says he needs to take shower and ayesha sits on the couch reading Vogue magazine. Suddenly, she hears veer shouting her name.....

Veer: Ayesha... Ayeshaaaaaa!!!!!

Ayesha: Kya hua veer.. Kyun chilla rahe ho?

Veer: Ayesha, towel nahi hai bathroom mein!

Ayesha: Ek min. Abhi lekar aayi.

She gives towel to veer and veer comes out, with water dripping from his hair.

Ayesha: Veer, yeh kya.. Sukhaya nahi apne baalon ko. Thand lag jaayega. Baito yahan par..

She started dryin his hair with another towel, while veer's mind starts working on naughty things...

Ayesha: Veer... Kya kar rahe ho? Mujhe gudgudi ho raha hai.

Veer does not reply..

Ayesha: Veer! VEER... Kal taq sardi aajayega.. Aur tum cheekne lagoge. Phir hum resort mein nahi jaayenge. Ab apna haath fold kar ke rakhna.. Mein tumhare baal theek karoongi.

Ayesha notices that veer is feeling uncomfortable.

Ayesha: Kya hua veer?

Veer: Ayesha, woh shampoo... Ya kuch aur hi.. Pata nahi kya tha.. Woh lagaya aur.. The smell is irritating....

Ayesha smells his hair and it is the smell of wild cherry.

Ayesha: Veer! Yeh mera conditioner ka smell hai.. Tum ne isse shampoo samjha?

Veer: kind of. Shampoo jaisa lag rahi thi toh lagaa diya.. Bohot saara. Phir aisa laga ki kuch theda hai aur doosre shampoo use kiya.. But yeh stupid smell nahi jaa rahi hai..

Ayesha: Ayyo.. Tum oad bhi toh sakte the ki woh kaunsa product hai...

Veer: Thak gaya tha ayesha..

He makes a sleepy face..

Ayesha: Neend aa rahi hai?

Veer: Bohot..

Ayesha: Chalo.. Pehle kapde pehen lo aur so jao..

Veer: Mera night dress lao na please.

Veer changes into his pyzamas and sleeps with his head on auesha's shoulder and ayesha embracing him into a warm and a secure hug.
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Posted: 13 years ago
One more part coming up in a few minszzz stay tuned :D
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Nihal wakes up and makes his way to veer ayesha's room. He opens the door and finds both of them in deep sleep. He sits on veer's tummy and wakes him up.

Nihal: Good molning chachu..

Veer: Good morning beta (While stretching his body)

Nihal: Chachu, aap mere saath bahar chalo na please?

He talks in whispers and they go out. Veer brushes ayesha's havir lovingly and leaves with nihal.

Veer: Kya baat hai nihal? Itni subah subah uth gayye?

Nihal: Chachu, aaj hum resort pa jaa rahein hain na, toh maine socha, hum massi ke liye koi surprise plan karein. Massi hum dono ka itna khayal rakhti hai na.. Humara bhi karz banta hai un ko khush rakhna.. Waise toh hum woh kaam kabhie nahi kar paayenge joh maasi humare liye karti hai..

Veer: So toh hai nihal.. Aap ke massi hum dono ke liye world's most tasty biryani banati hai aur hum ne uss ke liye kichdi colour ka biryani banaya. Hum iss baar apni tareeke se kuvh karenge.

Veer and Nihal call to the resort and reserve a room and a small room connecting to the master room. Veer also reserves a whole party hall, and a private swimming pool.

Ayesha wakes up and finds that veer is missing. She wonder how he woke up early in the morning. She makes her way to the main hall and finds the breakfast on the table.

Suddenly, she hears...... *Surprise*

Veer and nihal come out of the kitchen.

Veer: Ayesha, aaj hum ne tumhare liye breakfast banaya. Cheese sandwich, Egg omlette and Yummy parantha. Actually, paranthe easy to make frozen paranthe the.. But heat toh hum ne kiya na!

Both of them make a cute face, making ayeha feel the luckiest person on the earth.

Ayesha: (thinks to herself) Pyaar jataane ke liye 10-15 dishes aur dhed saara dikaawa ki zaroori nahi hoti.. Chote chote cheezon mein hamesha bohot saara pyaar milta hai.

Nihal: Kya hua massi? Kahan kho gayi ho? Aap ko pasand nahi aaya surprise?

Ayesha: Bilkul nahi nihal.. Mein bohot khush hoon. Yeh mera favourite surprise hai. Chalo lets attack the breakfast..

VeeNiSha feed eachother taking turns and have fun time.

Veer: Okay... Listen... Hum ek gante mein yahan se niklenge resort ke liye. Ayesha, maine nihal ka bag pack kar liya.. Hum apne bags pack karte hain.. Chalo..

Ayesha: Arey wah.. Kya baat hai.. Aaj aap dono ne koi zidd nahi kiya.. Subah se dekh rahi hoon.. Bohot badle badle lag rahein ho..

Veer: Aaj bohot pyaar aa raha hai hum donon ko tujh par. Issiliye.

Ayesha: Really?

Veer/Nihal: Really...

Ayesha: I love you both..

Veer/Nihal: We love you toooooo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ananya this update is superb very cute.shubh is a great friend.veesha scene is very sweet.veer would be looking very cute behaving like baby in the last scene
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part again.the breakfast scene of veenisha is cute.it would look cute if cvs showed it.veer and nihal's surprises for ayesha are great.the resort scenes will rock.veenisha bonding very cute.veer and nihal making face cutely make a very cute scene.ananya superb writing👏