All story bits are in purple π........ I just clicked on edit to write whoa what a long post!!! i wrote back to both you...... Bahar & pooja in the same post .......π... I will change it to two nowπ... hope it doesn't get confusingππ
@ Bahar
I just saw your posts & though if I quote you' it's
gonna be a crazy long what where huh post again...... don't wanna scare people with the length of out posts π this
one might be confusing coz I'm reading yours and then replying on a new post!!.... Here goes .... hope it works!!
Do you think people are getting scared of our craziness?? π
And yeah definitely a scene of the piercing gang swimming π .....hope it's not to dangerous for them what with the knife's stuck in no.1 nose
& bars in no. 2 face'....I think the lady would be safe!! π
Don't evil people go evil because of love storys π... there heart gets broken & they go crazy ... well that's what I've learn't from the serial world π€£
The vampire being the grey parallel lead sounds good... ππΌ'
hope he turns good in the end...maybe because of his lady friend βΊοΈ.... double
chick flick ending π
I like the soul idea!!.... A romance of a Soul & Ninja... never heard of that before π....I approveπ
Haha my knowledge about Indian dramas is a little limited
too.... I watch quite a few but not on a regular basis.... I'm sure they all have the same storyline
though π.....Bollywood sounds better' I like DDLJ'
'.Loving your story so far...... will add like a next part idea type to it when I have more time!! (am preparing for tomorrow)... got a birthday party to go to at 6π... then meeting friends for my third birthday party at half 7 π... i can't even remember how long it's been since my birthdayπ.. & going bowling at 1 with familyπ & at 3 o' clock am going to another town to pick up a cake for the 6 o clock birthday partyπ still trying to figure out how am going to do it all π.. p.s. I only just realised I', really bad at wrapping presents!! π
Your questions in the story so far..... Let's see if I can add
idea's there whilst i have timeπ'
Neha lost her body because she sacrificed it (like Nivi does
π) for happiness.... because Freddy Kruger with his magical spell casting powers
(I like that Freddy idea!!) tricked her when she was sleeping into thinking that
if she wanted to find eternal happiness (or a good night sleep π) then she
would have to give something to him. Neha not realising it was her soul that
Freddy wanted said 'ok'' ............then when Neha found out, she tried to stop him....in all
the confusion Freddy said the spell wrong (like one or two words wrong) &
instead of the soul going.... the body went instead and the soul (Neha) got lots
of powers including the ability to cross worlds, but she doesn't know about
them yet like you said π
The bounty hunters name errm ....... holy hunter's π (can't think of
better at the moment will try after my brain has recharged π)
I like the name 'hoops' π or 'Metal Face Metalica' π or 'Pin man' π for
the leader of the gang!! I'm not sure about what his magical powers could beπ'
but he should be able to kill people using his face as a weapon π€£
Keep the name 'Wolverine' for the bar face dude........ that names
hilarious on him!! π
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