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Falling in love - Chapter 3 on pg2

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for the comments, everyone!

I won't be continuing the story though (reason: writer's block, etc) so I'm deleting it because I don't really see a reason for it to continue being here.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Kirruuuuuu!!

(Wait, can i call you "Kirru". It's cuute ;) ;P)

Yea, so continuing with my comment... the story is so WOW! I mean yea, dun think em flattering you..but it actually is. Like, a fresh story with a fresh fresh way/style of writing.

autumn..hmmm..It was different for each one of them. Be it Isha, Ira or Arun. But the best one i personally liked was of Ira. Kinda good. ;D Even i like autumn, better than those pale and boring winters.😕


LOL, anyway. Pleashhh continue asap!


Thanks for the PM.


-Radzy

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Originally posted by: PinkSugars

Kirruuuuuu!!

(Wait, can i call you "Kirru". It's cuute ;) ;P)

Yea, so continuing with my comment... the story is so WOW! I mean yea, dun think em flattering you..but it actually is. Like, a fresh story with a fresh fresh way/style of writing.

autumn..hmmm..It was different for each one of them. Be it Isha, Ira or Arun. But the best one i personally liked was of Ira. Kinda good. ;D Even i like autumn, better than those pale and boring winters.😕


LOL, anyway. Pleashhh continue asap!


Thanks for the PM.


-Radzy

 
Kirru is succcch a cute name! 😃
Thanks Radzy for your feedback. It is very flattering indeed! And very encouraging. I am writing the second chapter right now. Will post soon.
Thank you!!!!
 
 
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REssdddd


Will edit later..Em in a hurry!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Kiran.... I just came across your story, and I'm so glad I did.... 
You write so beautifully girl, hat's off to you....

About the story, the first part was so nice, the different faces of autumn to different people... Loved it totally

The second part actually broke my heart...
Isha was dead??? 
I can totally understand why Ira is denying the truth...
I hope she comes around it soon, I know it's going to hurt her a lot, but it still is the truth...

Loved the other characters too... Arun and Sahil.... 
Arun is the hero right?? and I loved Sahil for the concern he has for Ira, and the love he still has for Isha....

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story, and sharing it with us....
Plzz pm me when you update the next part

with luv
~jiya~

P.S. Can I also call you Kiru?? It's such a cute name!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Kiran.... I just came across your story, and I'm so glad I did.... 

You write so beautifully girl, hat's off to you....

About the story, the first part was so nice, the different faces of autumn to different people... Loved it totally

The second part actually broke my heart...
Isha was dead??? 
I can totally understand why Ira is denying the truth...
I hope she comes around it soon, I know it's going to hurt her a lot, but it still is the truth...

Loved the other characters too... Arun and Sahil.... 
Arun is the hero right?? and I loved Sahil for the concern he has for Ira, and the love he still has for Isha....

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story, and sharing it with us....
Plzz pm me when you update the next part

with luv
~jiya~

P.S. Can I also call you Kiru?? It's such a cute name!!😳

 
Thanks Jiya 😃😃😃 I'm so flattered that you liked it so much! Arun is the 'hero' 😉 and lol.. yes, you can call me Kiru. Thanks again for the lovely comment!
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Ah, I was struggling with posting the image.. ended up posting twice ðŸ˜³
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