My Stories/OS/VMs - Page 2

Very Very nice story...👏

 superb and awesome...
connected a PLOT from THREE aspects... really amazing
buddy... kub wo time aayeyga... jub i will write like U and all
others...

Finally read this. Indeed a very good story Debasree ... and as your thread name suggests ... it's totally dedicated to Abhijeet ... really loved the way you portrayed the character of Abhijeet !! Excellent !!! He was in full form ... sacrificing,caring,supercop ... and above all I loved the leadership side of Abhijeet you brought out !! In total ... I really liked it ... the ending was very nice !!! Great going Deba !!

hey, will read the story soon...😊

Read it...it was a very refreshing change. ACP was injured - that was a bit sad. Maybe you could have sent him off somewhere else...but never mind. You had to make Abhijeet the 'boss' so it was fine.

Thanx a lot Everyone...I'm so happy that all of u read it 😃
Specially thanx to Deepika...🤗
Thanx Sunny for ur early preview...I like it very much...next time if i write i remember that...😃
Thanx Visrom, Bhavna, Rashida, Gadhadada, roopalgupta, notepad697, loveDaya, & neem...for all of ur  expert comment...😃
Visrom...I change with some colors & fonts...hope it is ok now...next time i keep it in mind...
Edited by debasree04 - 11 years ago

read it... its really efreshing as vis has said,,,, a mixture of 2005 to 2007 cases really!! but a small observation, if u dont mind! i cant recollect any story where acp ever apologised to his officers... anyway, fantastic and different!! well done!😊👏 Kp it up!

Thanx Suhaani for ur comments.😃 good observation...definitely I dnt mind it...frankly speaking...I also not fully like the last part...but I'm not able to change it...

Originally posted by: debasree04

Thanx Suhaani for ur comments.😃 good observation...definitely I dnt mind it...frankly speaking...I also not fully like the last part...but I'm not able to change it...

dont change it yaar!! 😊

excellent story👏👏
i really like ur way to describe the every moment...
gud keep it up👍🏼
hey dear can u provide me the link of ur first story😊