A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) - Page 2

wow...amazing one👏👏👏👏👏
loved it...waiting for the next one...do make it soon...ek do teen chaar cid ki jai-jaikar...CID CID CID...

@Padmapriya - Very good poem di, we want more.👏👏

hey padmpriya:

This poem is written by considering a situation depicted in one of stories of members wer by daya loses memory n after a day or two regains it. So this is d feelings of abhijeet to daya during those days.
WO YAADE - BY ABHIJEET TO DAYA
Kaise kate wo din kaisi kati wo rate bar bar yaad ati thi tumari miti bate.
Kaise batau daya, tum mere liye kitne priy ho! Tumare liye to meri jaan bhi hazir hai!
Taras raha tha mein tumare muh se ek shabdh sunne-ABHIJEET! Kah nahi sakta tumare shopping le jao BOSS, PAKODE KHILAO in baton ko kitna miss karta tha.
pyaare dost yaad rakhna meri bate,
rah nahi sakta mein bin tumare!

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Wow di, amazing poem. It displays Daya-Abhi's friendship, a very beautiful and emotional poem.

 very very very TOUCHIN... and buddy i m really feel xtra happy that U write one of UR CREATIVE try after considering ONE of my story...
thanx alot... kay tum nay usay itna BETTER samjha...

This content was originally posted by: gadhadada

very very very TOUCHIN... and buddy i m really feel xtra happy that U write one of UR CREATIVE try after considering ONE of my story...
thanx alot... kay tum nay usay itna BETTER samjha...

ah dada dat was ur story it was nice!
Waiting for ur next! N i m going to post one short poem soon n dats funny!

A funny poem(barrish)
Suno IF walon meri ye kahani, mein hun barrish ka pani.

Gumad gumad kar meg baraste, jor jor se ACP barste.

Freddie jor se wife ka pravachan tarate! Tasha gungaroo se moraniya se nache!

Daya abhi ke dosti ko ye sab char chand lagate! Salunke bhi kitne acche mud mein aa jate!!

IF pe yaha barrish ki maja liye, sab case ki hai nav banate! CID ke pyaare movements ko man me samate! General discussion mein hai sab gate! Barish ka ye mausam aya, sab aur kushiyan chhaya!!!!Edited by Padmpriya - 12 years ago

wow👏
What a amazing poem di...i was imagining a rain in front of my eyes...and Freddie jor se wife ka pravachan tarate! Tasha gungaroo se moraniya se nache! 🤣this was amazing...and i loved this line most


IF pe yaha barrish ki maja liye, sab case ki hai nav banate! CID ke pyaare movements ko man me samate! General discussion mein hai sab gate! Barish ka ye mausam aya, sab aur kushiyan chhaya!!!!  and i loved this line most

Edited by roopalgupta - 12 years ago

Hv added two poems dear wo yaade n barish give ur reviews on first one too. N waiting for more comments!