FF: New Beginnings? Updtd Chap 12 on pg 37 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
i unres my comment on
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi dii🤗
 
Great start 👏
 
Congratulations for your new FF🤗
 
What is arpita's past that she is so discipline type of person?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Prashu😃
 
 
Thanks for the pm dear and this was just amazing...👏⭐️
 
Very well written and from the first chapter itself youhave managed to create an interesting setting for our dear AviTa...not to mention the suspense you have created about Arpi's past 👏👏
 
Can't wait for the update.
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago


Di..Its me Prashu😉


Thanks a tonn Di...


Edited by prash_t - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: joliefille

wowowowowowowow 

just superb yaar ,

u r great Priya was correct i m going to love this one😉 Awww😳😳

huun Arpi's past seems very dark but Avi's entry shaked it up as we can see😆 Hmm Yeah😆
 It vil harm her more

huun first meet me hi eye lock wow , n Avi's frnkness  was great i can smell it he is a darling yaar, how can Arpi shout at him ? 😕 theek se dekha nahi lagta hai😆  He is always a darling ..She is Hitler types😆😆

sorry yaar i can't be res for much better comments as i don't trust my net so don't want to miss the chance to comment i know u deserve better gifts for such superb UD as ur FF's first UD but can't miss the chance to be the first one 😆  Thts choo chweet of you..I can understand😳

about ur writing 👏  urs too...I love ur writing a lot😳😳

u r a star gal ⭐️                  😳😳😳

UD soon m dying to read their first meet after this meet 👍🏼 Vil soon update😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Prashu, this update was top notch. I loved every aspect of it from Apri's professionalism, Manjari's chirpiness, and Avi dazzling entry. I felt like watching some American show or reading some English novel about two people who just don't click but end up together. Wow, Avi was awed by Arpi's beauty, he seems like a chilling/ partying kind of guy, the total opposite of Arpi. Their business meeting will be interesting. I am wondering about Arpi's past, is it another guy or someone else. Please update soon.  Oh this is for your first update plus an infinite amount of hugs and kisses.





Thank u soo much Siddu😳

Yeah he is chilled out guy ...Arpi is exactly opposite of him😉

Abt her past..Ull come 2 knw in coming UDs😉

Awww...Love u siddu🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Sweetheart... oh my my.. Im just loving the FF. So that guy is AST *Pls dnt give Jhatka like Toofaan* Poor Arpi tries to keep herself busy in work.. Feelin Sad for her.. Update soon dear..



Sweetheart🤗

Ull come 2 knw whether he is AST or not😆😆😆

Yeah..My Poor Arpi..She had a really bad past

Vil update very soon😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ozzy88

Superb Prashu !!!!!


just wonderfu !!!!!!!



Thanks a tonn Sumita

Love ya😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: danno

oh meri prashu dear
oh meri dear dear
tune kitne achha likha
dilmera dhakk dhak bole
deewana liye jaye haskole
                                                          really just love it update soon dear😛



Oh Meri Jalebi😳😳😳

Oye hoye..itne dino baad teri shayari padhi

Vil update soon dear😳

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Posted: 12 years ago



Swati Di🤗


Thanks a tonn fr commenting

Love ya😳