FF: kaise aaey karaar-Pg.145/updt 31July

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Edited by AAKMH2 - 9 years ago

its me mahi , wid another ff. ok dont kill me, i know 'luv btwn us i*m*possible' and 'lets fall in love' r still continue,bt pka promise will update dm 1st.
NOTE: many readers r angry wid me bcoz dy ddnt get PM. kindly understand, i m using cell so cant PM separately. if u want PM add me in your buddy list.

CHAPTER:1
SCENE:1

i awake bcoz of shining rays of sun falling on my face through glass window. i curld in blanket, pick da alarm clock 2 check da time. its only 9. wait, oh god i m late. i quickly took a shower. 2day i have 2 do alot of thng, aftrall he is coming back. aftr 2 long days. dnt laugh, it seems 2 days only bt 4 me dy r 2 decades.
all thngs hv done. hs fav. food, flowers, arrangement of hs study, prem's homework. hey where he is ? i rushd 2 hs room, he was jumping on bed, playing wid hs gun man,whch arjun gifted hm, may be bcoz he was ASI officer. it took hour 2 cnvnce hm sleep. hw dificult 2 handle ds cutest younger boy.
i was staring da moon, still waiting 4 him. he is late like always. i heard turng of handle, i turnd and ya he is here ,in front of me. i wantd 2 run hm,gv hm a hug. bt he smild and went 2 fresh up. i wantd 2 stuf all da food in hs mouth ,dat i made only 4 hm wid great love. bt he took only few bites,ok i m glad atleast few.
i was staring hm like a fool, and aftr a tiresm travel,he was still sitng on bed wid hs laptop. i just wantd 2 kill da man who inventd it. i coughd and he lukd at me. he stared me full 2 and half minute,gud atleast my dis new white night gown worked. he askd again workng'u took ur medicine?' yes, i know he cared about me. maybe hs style is dffrnt. i sit beside hm,restd my head on hs back. he askd'prem sogya' yes,i slipd my hands on hs chest. 'did u miss me ?' umm is da only answer, he gave. i kisd hs back, he off da laptop' rat hogai he, tum bhi thak gaeen ho gi,so jao. he lay dwn about 2 off da lamp. i leaned on hm'hw much u misd me? he only stard my lips, whch were only inches apart 4rm hm. i wisper i miss u alot. i kisd hm and he joind me instantly. i was enjoyng hs warm lips ,hs fngers runing on my back. bt soon my head start spining. i hv 2 broke da kiss. my eyes bcm heavy and i fall on hs shoulder. . . .like always.
dats 4 nw, if u like and want me 2 cntinue press da like butn and coment.
wid love
mahi

Chapter -1  - Scene 1 'Page 1 -  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261

Chapter-1 ' Scene 2 ' Page 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=3

Chapter-1 ' Scene 3 ' Page 5 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=5

Chapter-2  - Scene 1 ' Page 7 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=7

Translated version in English by Varshini ' Page 9 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=9

Chapter-2  - Scene 2 ' Page 10 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=10

Chapter-3  - Scene 1 ' Page 12 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=12

Chapter-3  - Scene 1 contd. ' Page 13 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=13

Chapter-3  - Scene 2 ' Page 22 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=22

Chapter-3  - Scene 3 ' Page 27 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=27

Chapter-4  - Scene 1 ' Page 31 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=31

PROMO - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=34

Chapter-4  - Scene 2 ' Page 35 & 36 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=35 &

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=36

Chapter-5  - Scene 1 ' Page 40 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=40

Chapter-5  - Scene 1 ' contd. ' page 42 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=42

Story in brief in English by Ayushi ' Page 45 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=45

PROMO ' Page 46 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=46

Chapter-5  - Scene 2 ' Page 50 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=50

PROMO - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=53

Chapter-5  - Scene 3 ' Page 58 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=58

Chapter-5  - Scene 3 ' Jungle Sequence - Page 61 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=61

Jungle sequence ' contd ' page 65 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=65

Chaper-6 ' Scene 1 ' Page 69 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=69

Chaper-6 ' Scene 2 ' Page 74 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=74

Chaper-6 ' Scene 3 ' Page 81 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=81

Promo - Page 85 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=85

 

Chaper-7 - Page 88 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47652153

 

Chapter - 7 - full version - SR - Page 95 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=95

 

Chapter-8 - scene 1 - Page 101 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47989507

 

 

Chapter-8 - scene 2 - Page 104 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=104

A short update of the past and present story till now - PAge 108 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=108

 Chapter-9 - Page 110 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=110

Chapter-10 scene 2 - Page 118 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1697261?pn=118

Edited by Arjuhisis - 9 years ago

Oh mahi really kaise na aaye pyaar when u write so beautiful ffs they are all mindblowing and this is also good pls do continue.

nice update plz cont soon

Your new FF is good. Please include me in yr list.

new ff...great...
arohi ko kuch hua h kya?? n prem their child awww so sweet...
update next part soon..

okay here i m with index...
Edited by ..anshita.. - 12 years ago

hahaah great so arjuhi s maarried...
hm gd bt plz replace d name prem wth raj if u cd !!

M thnkng..kya likhu cmnt.? Hats off 2 u mahi...ek sath 3 3 ff,nt a small thng. Bt khabardar agar tu pehle wale ff ko vul gayi to...i luv dm a lot. Wao mera arjun yahan officer ban gaya,bache v ho gaye...sounds serious. Lukng 4ward 2 it. Keep ur gud wrk.

loved it mahi! please continue...and yea you are already there in our buddy list so please pm ...:)