SwaRon OS - Without You - Page 2

Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: amnaM
OMFG! Sweetheart, this was so freaking amazing, i swear! <3
I've never read such a beautiful OS before, i'm serious! :))
It brought tears to my eyes, seeing sharon in such a character, i'm not reading your FF though, but now i think I'll have to read it man! You are a beautiful writer, you have portrayed the emotions so beautifully<3
Hats off jaan! <3

Loads of love!
Do PM me about any further OS and yeah PM me the Link of your FF now!

-amna-

Thanks a lot Amna... 😊

I've PMed you the link.

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Shruti Tah

@sweetapple2995

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww that was sooo sad :( but really well written!

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sana

@_sana.Magic_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Pree u made me cry...😭I mean like I cnt stop myself...u have put in all yr emotions in this OS...plz always PM me I dnt wanna miss even a part of it...y cnt I stop crying???😭😭

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Anamika

@.Anamika.

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Pree this is was your best work so far! Freaking beautiful! I think you should continue with Swayam-Sharon OSes, you have a way with their emotions! This part was my favourite!

I wish just once you could read these letters I write to you every year. I want to see your eyes boring down on each word I write, your fingertips tracing the bumps on the paper, and the smile on your lips when you'll look at me after you finish reading, the warmth of your hug when you'll embrace me never to let go.

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Yumna Ibrahim

@yummoBB

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

😭 oh my swayam... preee yaar its amazing... n really touching... i almost cried... i hope this never happns coz i cant see my shuweet swayam dead... its really lovely,,, loved it.. thnx for this wonderful post 🤗

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Roshni

@Roshni.x

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

Pree!
We already know that you're an awesome writer!
Till now in the Kriyansh FF I had seen the love, fun side of your writing and in that already you're a boss mate! 😉
But this sad/emotional side of your writing is amazing! I mean it's difficult to portray one's feelings through writing and you are one talented writer you know!
And You know you and Rafi should team up more often i mean she has amazing skills of portraying feelings through her VMs and you through your writing!
I loved Rafi's VM and i super-loved this OS 👏

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upeka

@upeka

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

I'm speechless👍🏼
you are a amazing writer👏
this really touched my heart ❤️you explained well, how it feels to lose someone so close to us😭 honestly i loved it😊

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