Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53 - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago
Great Intro dear conti soon 
Posted: 12 years ago
wowww mahak nice concept and loved first part do update soon and do add me in pm list 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
AweSome Dear..U so Talented...🤗 ❤️
Posted: 12 years ago
AweSome Dear..U so Talented...🤗 ❤️
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow mahak

A new ss :D

Lovely update

Simply loved it

Cont soon
Posted: 12 years ago
wooow!!!...👏...i luv the idea!
it's very beautiful😳😳!
n d way wrote it...awsm👍🏼!
Posted: 12 years ago

Mahii - wow! really interesting! Want to read moreee! U said updates everyday right? C'mon now...get on with the update... :P

Posted: 12 years ago
super update👏! do pm me whn u update!
Posted: 12 years ago
Hello, Mahak. 

I am certain, the piece I just read does not qualify for a chapter. Hence, assuming, it was the preface, I will let out my two cents to you. 

It has been really long that I read from you, by the way. 

The protagonists deliver a Hindustani feeling, they converse like folks from UP and MP, simply etched. Simplicity always signifies something deep, and definitely dark and the way you punch a story out of such an idea is eventually going to help you grasp the attention of your reader. 

You've made a really nice attempt. 


Thanks for the PM.



Kankshita

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