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kishore kumar

@kishore1490

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Posted: 12 years ago

"KUPPAI"

Annaki valakampola vela mudunjadhum bus standku vandhen.. Ambathurku oru white board bus kooda illa ellame deluxa irundhuchu.. en kooda vandha raviku thambaram bus vandhadhum avan kelambitan. Romba neram varadhanala pakathula irundha kadaila tea kudika ponapa andha tea kadaiku pinnadi eppavum kuppameda irukum inniku andha kuppaingaluku naduvula tent potu irundhuchu avangellam bsnl wire padhikira velaiku vandhirukanganu tea kuduchukitu irundhavaru avaroda friend kita sollikitu irundharu.. Ambalanga velaya muduchitu oru kaila beedium, innoru kaila seatu kattum vachikitu vilayadikitu irundhanga., pombalainga irutagurathuku munnadi samakirathukaga mummurama samachikitu irundhanga, Anga moonu pasanga pinja bala thookipotu serupu kooda podama andha edathula vilayaditu irundhanga .. Andha kupa metuku rendu theru thallidhan city centre iruku tightana t shirtum jeans pantum potukitu apanoda kaasa selavupanna andha city centre ku vegama bikela poitu irundhanunga koodave oru ponnayum pinnadi okaravachiku edho thamil madhiriye iruka oru mozhila pesita poranga. Kadavul irukurarunu soldranga apa andha 3 pasangaluku mattum yaen indha valkai... Kaasu kandham madhiri kaasu irukuravantayedhan thirumbavum pogudhu.. Ipadi yosichitu irukumbodhe 62 bus vandhuchu t kaasa kuduthutu jannal seata pudika oda aram bichutan.. Nama yellam indha madhiri yen nadakudhunu yosipom ana adhukula nammoda vela vandhurum idha marandhitu nama velaya paka poiruvom.. Innum nammala padhiper yosikave arambikilla... Vaalga janayagam(pananayagam)...

-KISHORE KUMAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

"THYAGAM"

Andru malai makkal vegamaga parkla irundhu veliyeritu irukanga, mannoda vasana kaathoda kalandhu park fulla adikudhu, innum 15 nimishathla mala vara madhiri iruku.. pinnadi irundha benchla oru vayadhanavar avaroda kuttiperan soldra kadhaiya ketukitae thinathandhiya poratikitu irundharu, oru kadhal jodi thangaloda edhirgalatha pathi pesikite nadandhu ponanga, School pasanga oonjalilum, saruku marathilayum aeri vilayadikitu irundhanga, coll pasanga cinemavayum cricketayum pathi pesikitae shuttle corkum, volley ballum vilayadranga.. Ivanga ellam romba sandhoshama avanga valkaiya valdra madhiri thonudhu aenendral na apa sandhoshama illa.. Ennoda peru amarnath militaryla soldiera iruken.. ippo 15 nal leavuku thiruvanmiyurla iruka ennoda annan veetuku vandhiruken... Pona masam ennoda friendu terroristkooda nadandha sandaila thannoda edadhu kala elandhutan.. chennaiku trainla nanum avanum vandhu irangunapodhu anga railway stationla orutharkooda avana thookitu poga help pannala.. Ivlow nala nama yarukaga uyirakuduthu poradunomnu enga rendu perukum thonuchu.. Oru military karanuku thevayanadhu retire ana piragu pensiono ., reservationo illa ovvorutharum edhipakiradhu indha makkal nammaloda thyagatha angeegarikanumnudhan .. Ana avangaluku minjvadhellam alatchiyamum avamanamumdhan.. Innaki kalaila tvla world cup win pannavangala makkal epadi sandhoshama varaverthanganu pathen endha vidhathula oru military karan cricket vilayadravanayum, cinema starayum vida koranju poitom.. Nanga engaluku sela vaika sollala ...

Na engaluku neenga silai vaika sollala.. Ana mathavanguluku kudukindra adhe angigaratha engalukum kuduka sollidhan kekurom.. Indiala ethana peruku nama natoda military headoda peyar therium.. World cup win pannavangaluku ovvorutharukum oru kodi tharangalam, trainla endha ooruku ponalum ilavasamam anal avunga yarume trainlalam pogavematanga... ana ennoda friend natukaga thannoda kalaye koduthirukan ana avanuku india kodukarudhu avamanam, alatchiyam, pensiondra perula masam masam 5000.. Nanga mattum anga naatukaga poradalana ivangellam match pakamudiya cinima pakamudiyuma.. Endha arasiyalvadhiyo illa cinema starso thannoda payana militaryku anupurangala.. Usurakudukuruvan ellam ealayum middle classumdhan. Indha suyanalavadhingalukagava nama poradanum nenakimbodhu oru military karanaga en kannilum thaneer thenga thodangiyadhu.. En kannil irundhu kaneer kile viluvadharkum malai kotta arambithadhum saryaga irundhadhu.. Indha unmaigal ella militarykarargalukum therium, therindhum avargal thangaludaya petrorayum ,manaiviyayum, kulandhayayum pirindhu naatukaaga uyirai thyagam seigyromendral adharku karanam nam pirandha naatuku thyagam seivadhum, petra thayku sevai seiya vendiyadhum ovvoru kudimaganin kadamayagum...malai melum adhigamanadhal kaichal vandhu vida koodadhu ena ninaithu arugil irundha kadayil malaikaga odhungi nindren, Enendral nalaiku nan marubadium military campuku sellavendum...

-KISHORE KUMAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

"THAVIPPU"

Andha kudumbam mudhal murayaga chennaiku potti padukayudan vandhu irangiyadhu.. Kanavanuku chennaiku transfer seiya pattuladhu.. Manaiviku ini andha mamiyar nathanar thollaigal illai., thanadhu kudumbathai eppadium oru nalla nilamaiku kondu vandhu vidalam endra magilchiyil vadagai veetukararidam advance panathai kuduthu vitu veetin kadhavai thirandhanar ulle oru hall oru kitchen mattum irundhadhu kandu manaiviyin mugam mariyadhu adhai kandakanavan chennail750 rubaiku indha veedu kidaipadhe adhistam endru avalidam koorivitu porutkalai ovvondraga ulle eduthu sendran.. Avargaluku irandu on kulandhaigal periyavan 5vadhu padikiran chinnavan indha varudam dhan mudhal vagupu.. Adutha nal avargal iruvarayum angulla oru arasu palliyil serthu vitanar.. Dhinamum kalayil andha thaidhan iruvarayum pallikoodathuku sendru vittuvitu maalai sendru alaithu varuval irandu nal kalindhadhu andru sanikilamai palli padhineram mattumdhan iyangum. mudhalil chinnavanai kootikitu piragu periyavan classuku pogalamendru ninaithu mudhal vagupuku sendral angu padam mudiyadhadhal teacheridam avanai vida vendam endru sollivitu periyavanai koopida sendral.. Periyavanai kootikondu mudhal vagupuku vandha poludhu avaluku periya idy kathirundhadhu...

Avaludaya chinna payanai kanavillai.. Andha vagupil motham 50 per adhanal andha teacherayum kurai solla mudiyadhu.. Avan kaanavillai endru therindhadhum avaludaya edhirgalame mudangiyadhupol unardhal avan palliyai vitu thandi iruka mataan endru ninaithu palli muluvadhum thedinal avan engumillai.. Palliyai vittu veetuku dhan pogi irupan endru ninaithu kondu angirundhu periya payanudan veedu varaikum roadil matravargal parkirargal endru kooda ninaikamal aludhu gonde odinal. Than kanavan kettal enna badhil solvadhu adhai vida andha 6 vayasu payan enga aludhukondu irukirano alladhu yaravadhu kadathikondu poi vithu viduvargalo kondru viduvargalo ena ninaithu aludhugonde veetai adaindhal aanal avan angum illai.. Oorillulla anaivarum unaku irandum on kulandhai ini un valkai patri bayapadadhe endrargal aanal thaan chennail vandhu thannudaya valkayave thulaithu vitaen endru ninaithu konde marubadium palliku odinal, avan kidaithu vittal kudumbathudan palanyil mottai adithu kolvadhagavum vendinal., yaravadhu thannudaya maganai kooti kondu varu vargala ena enni anaithu kadavulayum vendinal. Palliyin arugil varumbodhu avaluku thannudaya valkaye thirumba kidaithadhu pol unarndhal...

Thoorathil thannudaya magan oru 30 vayadhu mikka ilainganudan nadandhu varuvadhupol thondriyadhu.. Thannai marandhu arugil vegamaga odinal adhu avaludaya magandhan avanai iruki katipidithukondal ini oru boludhum unnai vidamaten endru kadharinal andha ilaingan avaluku iraivanukum melaga thondrinan.. Avanuku aludhu konde than iru kaiyayum koopi nandri sonnal.. Andha ilaingan thaan andha siruvanai bus standil parthathagavum avan vali theriyamal aludhu kondru nindran, avanudaya palli peyar kooda avanuku solla theriya villai adhanal avanai andha palliku arugilulla kaval nilayathil kondu vitu vidalam endru kooti vandhadhaga sonnan.. Avanuku velaiku neramanadhal andha siruvanin kannathai killi vitu angirundhu sendran.. Avaluku andha ilainganin peyar kooda theriyavillai avalai porutha varayil avan iraivan... Andrilirundhu aval andha siruvanin pocketil endrum oru kagidhathil veetin mugavaryum palli peyaraum eludhi vaithal anal adhan piragu avanai aval oru nalum vitu piriyavillai. Vendiyapadiye koviluku sendru kudumbathudan mudi kanikai koduthal. Thannudaya valnalil andha nal marubadium varakoodadhu endru ninaithal indru irubadhu varudam kalithum andha nalai ninaikum boludhu avaludaya kannil neer thengugiradhu... "SILA NERATHULA KADAVUL IRUKURARUNU KOODA THONUDHULA"

-KISHORE KUMAR

Edited by kishore1490 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

" SHARE-AUTO"

Andha bus standla oru ponnum payanum thaniya okkandhu pesikitu irundhanga pakathu seatla irundhavaru idhungellam enga thera pogudhu endru avargalai parthu sollivitu ennai parthar nan badhiluku avarai parthu chinnadhaga oru siripu sirithuvittu ennoda cell phonil patu ketka arambithen.. 6 masathuku munnadi nanum kadhal jodigala parthu ipadithan pesinaen ana ipa andha karuthula na konjam marubaduraen... Na ambattur estatela iruka remis info ltd la junior techniciana 6 masathuku munnadi sendhen. Moolakadaila irundhu ambatturku ore busdhan adhuvum 10 manikudhan so dailyum share autoladha poven.. Dailyum na ore share autola poranala andha share auto driver enaku romba palakamaitaru na varalana 5nimisham yanakaga wait panni pathutu povaru.. Andha share autola enna madhiriye dailyum 3 stop thalli oru ponnum eruva ava na irangura stopku rendu stop munnadi irangiduva.. Mudhal oru masam ipadiye ponadhu.. aduthu oru varam ava andha share autola varala. Adutha varam vandhapa ava veedu rendu theru thalli maripona nala share autova pudika mudiyalanu driverkita solli andha driveroda phone no. Irundha thara sonna avarkita phone illa enkita phone irupadhu avaruku therium adhanala ennoda no ra Kuduka sonnaru nanum koduthaen ana avaloda no. Enkita sollave illa nanum ketkala.. Oru varam kalichu share autola varumbodhu oru phone vandhuchu auto enga vandhukitu iruku sirnu keta? Innum 10 nimishathula unga stopku vandhirumnu sollitu vachitaen ana andha ponnodaperu enaku theriyala adhanala autonu potu no.ra save pannikitaen.

Annaki autola erna udane thanks nu sirichikitae sonna nanum badhiluku sirichaen. Avaloda pera ketkalamnu manasukulla thonuchu aana autola narayaper irundhanga, oruvela pera keta ava enna thappa nenachiruvanu nenachu silenta irundhutaen.. Ava paka onnum peralagi madhirilam illa.aana nama roadla nadandhu pombodhu sila ponna pathutu thirumbumbodhu innoru murai andha ponna thirumbi pakanumnu namakellam thonumla andha madhiri alaga irundha. Aduthanal andha nambarla irundhu where is the autonu ketu msg vandhuchu nanum badhiluku unga stopku innum 5minutesla vandhurumnu anupunaen aduthu thanks nu oru msg vandhuchu na adhuku edhuvum reply pannala.. autola ernaparam enna pathu sirichitu phonela balance illa adhan msg pannaenu sonna.. Ungakita msg booster irundha dailyum enaku enga auto varudhunu oru msg anupa mudiyumanu keta nanum anupurennu sonnen adhuku thanksnu sollitu head seta maati paatu ketka arambichita.. Annaki autova vitu yarangana udane ennoda no.ruku msg booster poten.. Unmaya na coll padichu muduchaparam msg booster poduradha niruthitaen, ava ketkum bodhu msg booster enkita illanu solli irukalam aana yen poi sonnenu inniku varaikum enaku theriyala.. Marunala irundhu dailyum kalaila msg anupa arambichaen ava kita irundhu thanksnu ore oru replydhan varum.. Dailyum autola eruna udane enna pathu sirichitu headseta maati paatu ketka arambichiruva.. Ipadiye oru masam poiduchu ana avaloda peru enaku theriyave illa.. Varathuku rendu nal leave potukitu irundha na andha masathula oru nal kooda leave podala..

Aparam oru nal autola pogitrikum bodhu ava customer careku phone panni avaloda pera solli edho complaint panna apadhan na avaloda peraya therinjukitan.. Ipadiye innoru masamum poiduchu thideernu oru vaaram fulla ava varave illa ana na dailyum auto engirukunu msg mattum amuchaen adutha varam mudhal nal avaluku phone pannen eduthuva sorry sir enga thatha sethutaru adhanaladhan reply panna mudiyala nu sonna enaku enna soldradhu ne theriyala ok sorrynu sollitu cut pannitan adhukapuram na msg pannala rendu varam kaluchu where is the autonu msg vandhuchu adhilirundhu marubadium msg panna arambichitaen.. dheepavaliku oru happy dheepavali forward msg aduchu amuchaen adhuku ava thatha sethutanala innum oru varushathuku engaluku endha pandigayum kidayadhu nu reply panna adhuku na oh ok forgot nu reply pannen.. Aduthu neenga enga vela pakiringa unga veetla ethana perunu ellathayum keta nanum ellathayum sonnen.. Adhukapuram rendu perum forward msg anupa arambichom.. Oru nal nightu good night msg vandhuchu na adhuku r u awake ah nu? msg pannen.. Yes tellnu oru msg vandhuchu.. Na unna kalynam pannikalamnu ninaikiraen adhukaga na unna love pandrenu nenachukadha ne mudiyadhunu sonnalum parava illa nu msg amuchaen adhuku endha replyme varala msg sound ketkum bodhellam adhu ava msgadhan irukumnu nenache adhu ennoda friendsoda forward msga irukum anniku full night wait pannen reply varave illa...

Adutha nal kalaila auto innum pathu nimishathula unnoda stopku vandhirumnu msg pannen but ava kita irundhu endha replyum varala . Avasara patu sollitamonu nenachaen.. Ava stop vandhuchu ulla erna piragu ennai pakkama paatu ketukitae veliya pathutu vandha.. Cha namadhan thappu pannitaenu nenachu nanum veliya pathukitae epadiyavadhu avakita sorry ketkanumnu nenachukitu vandhen.. Ava stop vandhuchu ava enna pakura madhiriye thonuchu nanum avala pathaen ava onnume sollala aana ava kannu enna keela yaranga sonna madhiriye thonuchu. Ava yaranguna apuramum enna oru vati thirumbi morachu patha. Udane nanum irangitaen. Ava enna thirumbi ennoda mugatha patha na edhuvum pesama ninnukitu irundhen ava enna pathu-indha madhiri vishayatha msglalam anupa koodadhu ambalaya nerla vandhu sollanum, Enaku un mela andha madhiri endha ennamum illa.. enaku ipa paati mattumdhan irukanga unnoda appavayum ammavayum vandhu enga paatikita pesa sollunu sollitu nadandhu poita.. Enaku avaluku okva illayanu puriyala mudhal muraya ava pera kathi kuptaen ava thirumbi enna parthu siricha avlowdhan... ippa enga appa amma kita pesi sammadhika vaikadhan na ennoda ooruku busla pogitu iruken...

-KISHORE KUMAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

"perudhavi"

Annaki ennoda phonuku rajasekar sir veetla irundhu call vandhuchu rajasekaroda son rajasekar irandhutaru sonnaru enaku enna soldradhune theriyama phona vachutu pakathula irundha jannal valiya roada paathukitae asaiyama ninnen.. Chennaila ipa oru 5 varushama interiors and decoratorsnu pala kadaingala paaka mudiyadhu... Adhu veedungala alangarikira velai. Sumar pathu irubadhu varushathuku munnadi ellarum thangaloda veeta alangarika marathalaye pannanga aana ippa oru elu varushama pvc engindra oru vidhamana plasticadhan use pandranga .. Marathula senja poochinga karayanu pala prachanainga iruku aana plasticla andha prachanai illa velayum marathai vida kammidhan.. Enga appavum oru carpenterdhan, enga amma enaku oru vayasu irukumbodhe irandhutanga... 6vadhu varaikum enga oorla irundha government schoola paduchan apa enga appavuku avaroda velaiku oru helper thevapatuchu veli alungala velaiku vachu avanuku thollil solli kuduthu avanuku masam masam panam kudukanum adhuku enaku velaiya kathukodutha varumanamavadhu varumnu nenachu enna schoola irundhu niruthitaru.. Apaila irundhu dailyum enga appakuda velaiku poiduven.. Carpenter velaingradhu kothanar madhiriyo painter madhiriyo naal kooli illa , oru veedu fulla velai senju muduchadhan panam kidaikum.. Moonu varushathulla enga appa enaku ella velayum kathu kodutharu.. Enga appa romba kudiparu adhanala kai nadukam eduka arambichiruchu adhukumela avarala velai seyya mudiyala.. 2 varushathula avarum irandhataru.. Makkal marathuku badhila pvc poda arambichutanga...

Idhukumelayum marathaye nambikitu irundha vaala mudiyadhunu pvc plasticla seyyavum kathukiten.. Enga oorla motham naale perudhan indha interiors decorators velai seyyuranga avanga naalu perayum thavira thaniyavo veli oorla irundho yaarum indha oorla vandhu tholil seyya mudiyadhu.. Andha naalu perla maheshungaravaru paduchitu indha tholiluku vandhirukaaru.. Avarkitadhan na velaiku sendhen avar customera pudipaaru na avanga veetuku poi velai senju kuduthutu varuven... Oru square feet senja enaku 25rubai.. Idhuve thaniya na senja enaku oru square feetuku 60rubai varaikum kidaikum.. Oru nal vela senjukitu irukumbodhu cutting machinela ennoda edadhu katta virala mel padhi cut agiduchu.. Oru maasam endha velayum seyya mudiyala. Andha oru maasathula mahesh enaku badhila vera oruthara velaiku eduthutaaru avarayum thappu solla mudiyadhu customerku sonna timela velaya mudichutharalana tholilla perukettu poidum.. Adhukapuram 2maasam enaku velaiye illama pakathu oorla chinna chinna velai senjen.. apa oru nal railway stationla na erkanave oruthar veetla velai senjen avar utkandhirundhaaru.. Avaroda ponnukaga chrompetla oru flat vaangi irukaradha sonnaru angayum decoration work nedhan pannanumnu sollitu maheshoda no.ketaru na ipa mahesh kita work pannala pakathu oorla chinna chinna velailam senjukitu irukenu sonnen.. Avar sattunu apa neeye thaniya pannikodunu ketaru..Ennoda valkaila maraka mudiyadha naal adhu.. Enaku therinja ethanayo perukita velaiketaen aana yarume enna nambi velai kodukala...

Kandipa pannitharen sirnu sollitu avaroda phone no.ra vangikiten.. Dailyum enga oorla irundhu chrompetuku poitu vandha velaikagadhunu oru varam fulla andha flatlaye thangi oru varthulaye ella velayum ennoda veetuke seiyara madhiri nenachu senju muduchaen.. Oru square feetuku mathavanga 170rubai vanguvaanga aana na avarukaga 160rubaiku othukiten yenna indha tholila customerkita nallaperu vangaradhu romba mukkiyam illati avanga mathavanga kita nammala sibarisu panna maatanga.. Andha flatsla motham 16 veedu.. Enaku munnadi chrompetla iruka oruthar andha flatla oru veetuku velai senjirukara aana avar senja velaila suthamilla finishingum sari illa.. Adhanala andha flats iruka matha veeta vangunavungalum enake order kuduthanga.. Inimel en vaalkai indha ooruladhanu mudivu panni ennoda veetayum chrompetuke maathitaen.. Ennoda velai nalla irundhanala andha flatsa kattikittu irundha builders aduthu naanga katraflatskum ennaye velai seyya sonnanga.. Ipa chrompetla bustandku oppositela rajasekaran interior and decoratorsnu oru kadai vachiruken.. Rajasekaran ennoda perum illa ennoda appavoda perumilla adhu enna nambi chrompetla mudhal mudhala velai koduthare avaroda perudhan.. Avardhan kadaiya open pannanumnu avarta sonnapa na pannadhu chinna udhavidhan ne nalla velai senjanaladhan unna nambi velai koduthenu sonnaru.. Avaruku adhu periya udhaviyave theriyala aanal na inniku indha kadaila mudhalaliya irukarathuku avardhan mukkiyamana karanam... Avaruku kadaisi mariyadhai seyya vendiyadhu ennoda kadamai...

-kishore kumar

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" ninaivugal"

Chennail migavum kootamana theru adhu.. Anaithu vidhamana electronics porutgalum andha theruvil ulla kadaigalil kidaikum angulla mukkaalvaasi kadaigalai nadathubuvargal hindi karanunga, anga pesa therinjadhan nalla porula vaanga mudium, pesama irundha andha kadai karanunga nambala yaamathi yeppam vitudu vaanunga.. Andha kurugalana theruvula rendu pakkamum bika vera niruthivachirupanga.. Poravanga varavangala idikama poga mudiyadhu.. Anga chinna pasanga bikela utkandhu poravangaluku thangaloda kadaiya publicity panni sila papergala kuduthutu irupanga... Andru maalai sumaar 7.30mani irukum andha kurugalaana theruvula rendu paer oruvaroda kaiya innoruvar pidithukondu pesikitae nadandhu ponanga.. Edhiril vandhavar oru periya dappavai thoalla thookitu vandhar.. Edhirla pesikitae vandha andha rendu paerula mudhalla nadandhu vandhavar mela andha dappava thookitu vandhavar andha dappavalaye vegama idichitar.. Yow arivilla olunga nadandhu poyaanu andha dappakaran kathunan.. Yow ne olunga paathu nadanthu poyaanu andha iruvarum sollivitu thirumbamal nadandhanar..andha dappakaran avargala sila ketta varthaigalil thitti vittu thirumbinan.. Adhai parthukondirundhavar yow avanga kan parvai illadhavangaya avangala poi thituranu sonnanga.. Udane andha dappakaran avargal iruvarayum thirumbi parthaan oruvar innoruvar kaiyai pidithukondu oruvar pin oruvaraga medhuvaga nadandhu sendranar... sorry bossnu kathi sonnan aana avanga rendu perukum ketkala pesikitae nadandhu ponanga...

Avanga rendu perukum porandhadhula irundhe kan parvai kidayadhu..vellorela irundha parvai illadhavar kaapagathuladhan rendu perum valandhanga angaye 12th varaikum paduchanga.. Avanga rendu perum pesa arambicha indha ulagathaye oru alasu alasiduvanga.. Avanga rendu perukum vera vera taste vera vera thinking aana avanga rendu perukum ulla otrumai paravai illadhadhum, illayaraja paatumdhan... Avanga rendu pera porutha varaikum illayaraja oru heroku nigaranavar avaroda paatungaladhan eppavum ketpanga andha paata pathi rendu perum vivaadhipanga.. avangaluku vera vera taste irundhalum oruthar enna solla varanganu innoruvar porumaya ketpanga adhanala avangalukulla eppavum sanda vandhadhilla.. 12thku apparam tamil nadu open universityla naatupura padalgala pathi paduchanga.. Ipa oru thaniyar schoola teachera irukanga.. Dailyum nadandhe schoolku povanga.. School vitta piragu pakathula iruka parkla utkandhu pesuvanga.. Avanga rendu perukum indha ulagathilaye romba pudichadhu andha park benchla utkandhu pesuradhudhan... Avanga rendu perukum vivaram therinjadhula irundhu pesikitaedhan irukanga aana innamum avangaluku bore adikala pesikitaedhan irukanga.. Avanga rendu perum oru nalkooda thangalaku yen kadavul parvai illama padachanu nenachadhumilla adha pathi pesunadhumilla... Avanga rendu perukum thalaa 5000rubai sambalam adhula 4000ratha avanga paducha andha kaapagathuku amuchiruvanga... Meedhi irukura 6000 panathuladhan avanga andha oru maasam sapuduradhu matha ella selavum..

Avanga rendu perukum thani ulagam avargal matravargalai patri kavalai paduvadhillai.. Matravargal thangalai paarthu paridhabapadavum virumbavilla.. Matravargalai poladhan thaangalumendru vaalndhu vandhanar.. Andru chennail bandh yaaro edhir katchi thalaivara arrest pannitangalam roade veruchodi irundhuchu sila kadaigal mattum thirandhirandhadhu.. Eppoludhum nandhan un pinnal nadandhu varuven indru ne en pinnal nadandhu va endru sollivitu avan mun sendru nadandhan avanudaya kaiyai pidithu kondu ivanum pinthodarndhan.. Andha kurugalana theruvil nadandhu kondirukum bodhu thideerendu edho kadaigalai adithu udaipadhu pondru avargaluku thondriyadhu edhirkatchiyinar thiraka patta sila kadaigalai adithu udaithu kondirundhanar.. Adhanal ivargal veru padhayil sellalamendru pakkathu sandhil kaiyai iruka pidithukondu vegamaga odinar.. Appoladhu angu thirandhu kidandha padhala sakadayil mun sendravan vilundhuvitan avanadhu kaiyai pidithukondu irundhavan avanadhu kaiyai iruka pidithu kondaan.. Kaapathunga kaapathunganu kathinaan aanal yarum vara villai.. En kaiyai pidithu kondu mele va va endru kathinaan aanal ulle irundhavanidamirundhu endha badhilum varavillai.. Arai manineram kalithu angu police vandhadhu.. Andha arai mani neramum avan avanudaya kaiyai vidavillai kaapathunga kaapathunga ena kathikitae irundhan.. Police vandhu avanai thookinar aanal avan irandhu vittan.. Avanuku vivaram therindhu aluvadhu adhudhan mudhal murai...

Rendu nal kalithu andha parkuku avan sendran.. Angu avargal eppoladhu utkarum benchil utkarndhan.. Thannudaya vaalnalil thanaku paarvai illaye endru avan mudhal murayaga kadhari aludhan.. Paarvai irundhirundhal avanai eppadium kaapatri irukalam endru ninaithaan.. Eppavum nandhan mudhalil selven andru avanai mudhalil anupi iruka koodadhu endru ninaithan.. Eppolodhum moondru manineram andha parkil amarndhirupargal aanal avargaluku adhu irandu nimidampola thondrum.. Aanal indru irandu nimidamkooda avanal angu utkaramudiyavillai.. Avanudaya petchum sirippu sathamum adikadi avanudaya ninaivuku vandhukonde irundhadhu.. Avanudan pesiyavatrai ninaithukonde andha benchil amarndhirundhan.. Mani 7adithadhu elundhu nadaka thodanginaan... Avan dhinamum andha parkuku selvadhai mattum niruthavillai.. Dhinamum andha parkil moondru manineram utkarndhirupan,.. Avanudan irundha andha poludhugalai ninaithukonde avan valndhaan... -kishore kumar.

Edited by atina - 12 years ago

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eljay

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Posted: 12 years ago

Interesting story, Kumar! You have a good style of writing. Keep it up.

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av

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Posted: 12 years ago

Kishore... your story is nice but you dont have to use this kind of large font...which some readers might take it as a rude way of presenting stuff...

Please use the same thread for all your short stories...DO NOT oPEN a new thread for every story...

I am moving all your stories to one thread...I also changed the font to 4...

Hope you dont mind...

Keep up the good work. Your stories are really nice...👏

Edited by atina - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

"Kanavu"

Indha naatula iruka Ovvoru middle class makkaloda kuranjabacha kanavu aasai ellame eppadiyachu oru sondha veedu vanganumnudhan... velaikedachu thannoda sondha oora vitutu velai kedacha oorla vadagaiku irukuravanga padra kashtam konjananjamilla. Sevathula oru aany adikaradhula irundhu thanni pudika motor podura varaikum ellathukum house ownerta ketudhan seiyanum.. House owner eppa sonnalum veedu galipanitu poganum.. Ennoda appa indha ooruku 20 varushathuku munnadi vandharu avar dunlopla accountanta vela patharu.. indha irubadhu varushathula naanga ombodhu veedu maritom.. Enga appavum epadiyavadhu oru sondha veedu vanganumnu romba kashtapataru..andha timela Avadila ara-ground 50000 rubai adha eppadiyavadhu vanganumnu pala edathula panam ketu parthar engayum kedaikala, avar thaniyar companyla velai pathanala avaruku endha banklayum loan kedaikala, adhanala enaku avar romba kastapatu government velai vangithandhar. Elu varushathuku munnadi avar irandhutar.. Appa irandhu 2varashathula enga ammavum irandhutanga.. Ipa avadila ara-ground 3latchathuku mela irukum.. Ennoda friend moolama oru nalla edam irukunu kelvi paten andha edathula irundhu 10nimisha tholaivulaye bustand irundhuchu,thannium nalla irundhuchu epadiyachu indha edatha vanganumnu mudivu pannunen.. Nanum en friendum idathukararta pesi kadaisila rende-mukkal latchathuku andha nilathai ok pannunom.. Ennoda savings, Appavoda savings, ammovoda nagainu ellathayum vachu idatha vangitaen aana adhula veedu katta enkita suthama panamilla...

Ipodhaiku Chinnadha oru hall oru bedroom oru kitchen bathroom kattanumnu nenachakooda koranjadhu 2arai latchamachu venum. Bankla loan ketadhuku ondra latchathuku mela tharamudiyadhunu sollitanga.. Ennoda manaiviyoda nagayellam vachakooda 50000 rubaiku mela kidaika vaipilla.. Personal loan oru 25000 rubaiku vangikellam meedhi panathuku engayavadhu vattikudhan vanganum.. Ennoda friend Indha madhiri kadan vangi veedu katunan kadaisila kadana katta mudiyama vangana veetaye vithu kadana ellam adachan, adha ninaikumbodhu kadan vangi veedu katidalama illana oru 5varusham kalichu kattalamanu nenachaen aana 5 varushathula sengal cement vilai ellame eridum apaveedu katnalum kadan vangidhan katanum adha ipave senja masam masam vadagai panamavadhu minjumnu nenachu sondha karanga friendunga kita kadan vangikalam apavum pathalana kadaisiya kandhu vattiku panam vangikalamnu mudivu panninen.. Mudhalil bankla loan ketu vandha kaasula asthivaram potu arambichom.. Veedu katta arambicha konjanaluku piragudhan na nenachadha vida mela 50000 extra selavagum.. Bank loanla kedacha amountla pillar potu sidela suvar elupi keela padhi veedu katti muduchom. Manaiviyoda nagaiya vachadhula kedachadha vachu mela thalam pottachu.. Nalla tilesa podanumna vilai adhigamagumnu sonnanga veedu kata poradhu oru vaati nalladhe potuduvomnu mudivu panni veetuku thevayana ellathayum naane paathu paathu vangunen.. Personal loan, friends sondha karangakita vanguna panathula mukkavaasi veeta katti muduchutaen..

Innum 50000 irundhadhan veedu fulla katti mudikamudium. Kandhuvattiku panam vanguradha thavara enaku veravali illai.. Enga oorla irundhavarta vattiku kaasu vangi veetoda kadhavuku jannaluku thevayana maram vangunom, veetuku sea blue colourla paint aduchom.. Ivlow kashtapatu veedu katitan aana adhuku graha pravesham panna mudiyalanu nenachu kitu irukumbodhudhan vadaga veetukararta enga appa kuduthirundha 5000rubai advance panatha kekalamnu mudivu panni ketan avarum periya manasoda veedu kali pandrathuku munnadiye kudutharu.Nalaiku ennoda sondha veetuku grahapravesam.. Inniku nightudhan na vadagai veetla thoongura kadaisi night aana thoonguvananu theriyala.. Enga appakanda kanava nalaiku na nenavakaporen.. Ore chinna sondha veedu katnadhuku ivvalavu scene podanumanu mathavanga yosikalam aana oru sondha veetoda madhipu vaadaga veetla irukavangalukum, irundhavangalukumdhan therium...

-kishore kumar

Edited by kishore1490 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

this kanavu story is a inspiration from the story i read in my school book... i changed some parts of story with my experience.. Edited by kishore1490 - 12 years ago

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