FF YOU ARE MINE Part-4 "Wen I lvd U-IV"page-19 - Page 2

hehe now m used to this RES now u guys toohave to bear my laziness,

Kyaa baat hai👏👏👏

"You Are Mine"😳

Wht happend 2 Avi?? Was she our Arpi??


Update sooon😉
Edited by prash_t - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: joliefille

Precap

Hey guys thanx for such nice responce ,

n about the title too so its decided its

"You Are Mine"

 

"A beautiful face, full of innocence , love, kindness" he closed his eyes, and the face emerge more clear in front of his eyes, A young girl around 12 running  in  corridors , garden 

"Avi catch me if you can!"

A soft sweet smile run on his lips , but in a flick of second that smile vanished , muscles turn stern as the sweet voice turn in harsh n full of disgust tone

"Avdhesh you don't deserve me! I hate you! Don't you dare to touch me , or show me your dirty face ever in life, !"

His clutches tighten n the wine glass he was holding got crushed n a drop of salty water rolled down from those eyes on ground with few drops of blood.

 

Aouch, you hurt me  Neha 😆,

Don 't go, tell us more, what has happened ? 😕  do they know each other as children?

 please Neha do not languish us too long, have mercy on us 😆


Aye , tu m'as fait mal Neha lol,😆

Ne pars pas,  que s'est il pass? 😕, se connaissaient t-ils tant enfants?

 s'il te plait ne nous fait pas trop longtemps languir , ai piti de nous 😆

Hye jo
nice pre dear 😛 .

Now i guess the sweet voice was of arpi na then why it turn harsh yaar.
Avi dont hurt yourself dear it hurts to us also na
😭

but jo in the pm u had given the heading update but just added the pre...not fair not fair now we want a looonggg update.Edited by Cuty16 - 12 years ago

Unres my Post in Pg 2 😛

Neha !!!!!!!!🤗

The promo seems interesting..👍🏼👍🏼

So the story is beginning with flashbacks..

Loved it..⭐️⭐️

I am eager to read the whole update...

Will be waiting for u to update it..😳

Love ya !!😳

Neha, this precap is awesome. It is very intensive and intriguing. I'm scared what may have split Avita. It seems like they were childhood friends and something split them apart. The tears and blood drops addition was very good, he is both physically and emotionally hurt. 

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Heyyy TJ 🤗

Me first me first 

Precap seems to be Interesting 🤔

Ouch Ouch Avi dear...i know TJ is cruel to hurt you but don't worry when i will Update i will add loads of Romance 🤣

Got job as FF editor * Mom Dad you are baby got a job finally 😎 🤣*

love ya 🤗

Hye jo,
nice pre dear,got late but unresed by post at pg-2.
Will wait for d update.

😳

Originally posted by: Kalitondra

Aouch, you hurt me  Neha 😆,

Don 't go, tell us more, what has happened ? 😕  do they know each other as children?

 please Neha do not languish us too long, have mercy on us 😆


Aye , tu m'as fait mal Neha lol,😆

Ne pars pas,  que s'est il pass? 😕, se connaissaient t-ils tant enfants?

 s'il te plait ne nous fait pas trop longtemps languir , ai piti de nous 😆

hehe how can i think to hurt u di 😳 guess 😉 u will come to know it soon😆