Through the Facade- ArHi FF Completed - Page 33

Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ss
Really liked it
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome FF. What a story and fabulous imagination. Love does conquer the world. Enjoyed reading it..
Posted: 9 years ago
This SS will surely qualify for "How IPK must have been" you started from the weak and collapsing building fiasco.
Your kushi is much stronger, she is firm and decisive, when her parents told about her biological mother and Arnav's dad, she thought beyond herself and she tried to find Arnav behind the mask, and decisive about her attempt.
Oh I love this way of finding about shaym and was in glee when everybody punched him. Shaym being shaym once again wanted to have kushi so he blurted about thier connected past. Arnav being arnav tried to find a quick solution.
That conversation between Arnav and Kushi is open and warming.
It all started and ended naa restarted in sheesh mahal.
Nice take on IPK.
Posted: 9 years ago
loved the start of story

part 1
arnav and khushi in same scenario
but the twist u add by relating their past was marvellous
this link looks more sensible
khushi mom and atnavs dad in relationship
and now khushi dont hate arnav
due to past revealation
very well written
Posted: 9 years ago
Just read first part amazing
Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful SS,
Loved each part of it,
Very beautifully written.
Posted: 8 years ago
read it all in a go and U have done a really good job

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