FF Abhiya: In ur Arms Forever Chap15-Pg-120 - Page 3

Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: heena_mehta

shrish koshish to kar ek bar...maje aayenge mujhe teri watt lagane me😆

Tujhe aayenge maze mujhe thodi na ayenge hahah😆

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Nidhsara
You are a good writer as well...👏
Enjoyed the OS dear...

Continue soon

Thnx nidha.I'll continue 4 sure😊

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Guys part 2 updated😊

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heena mehta

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Posted: 12 years ago

shrish i totally dead...gosh man...u r just outstanding...tel me tune abhay wala bloodvita to nai pe liya...kya likha hai yaar😊😉

i was actually feeling bad...pia's pain was unbearable...u av written so damn perfectly..dat i m running out of words just wanna say hats off to u...

n ofcourse a bear hug to u🤗 for updating it so quickly...love u...

plsss ab abhay ko wapas le aa...i want a happy ending n kahin tune ff likhne ka soch liya tab bhi abhay ko wapas le aaya phele😊😊

luv

heena

Edited by heena_mehta - 12 years ago

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey both the updates were just fab no words to admire ur writing skills👏

abhay died oh no😭😭

i can actually feel pia's pain while reading see this is the power of ur writing so never underestimate urself

so what will happen next will abhay come back just like maithali did as pia i mean will it be a role reversal

thanks for the pm and update soon can't wait to read the next part

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devilish_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow both of the parts were fab... all drama with a pinch of laughter!!!!...loved it

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

The second part was really heart touching Shrish... Abhay is gonna come back na? I mean he can't die 😭

The description of fight scenes and emotional scenes were Fab... do write more...love u ... 🤗

Edited by princess_xeelan - 12 years ago

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637071

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsome shrish!!! its so painful...bring abhay back...

update soon .u only hv 24 hrs.😆

aur dont think much...bas apna os update karti ja...ff khud hi ban jaega😆😆

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517072

Posted: 12 years ago

Isse pehle tumhari suspense k bojh k tale faske mera ant aa jaay,mujhe bachalooo!!! plllzz jaldi update karo!!!! 🤣 Edited by ANTARA-2244 - 12 years ago

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annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome blssom..i hope abhay comes back soon and maybe he wil; come back as a human this time

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