tHNX A LOT.jST WAIT KI KYA HUA?😊Originally posted by: shivanirajputhey both the updates were just fab no words to admire ur writing skills👏
abhay died oh no😭😭i can actually feel pia's pain while reading see this is the power of ur writing so never underestimate urselfso what will happen next will abhay come back just like maithali did as pia i mean will it be a role reversalthanks for the pm and update soon can't wait to read the next part
tHNX TANZIE.u HAVE 2 WAIT 2 KNOW WHT WILL HAPPEN?😊Originally posted by: princess_xeelanThe second part was really heart touching Shrish... Abhay is gonna come back na? I mean he can't die 😭
The description of fight scenes and emotional scenes were Fab... do write more...love u ... 🤗
Thnx. haha ur near anu😆Originally posted by: --Anurag--Srish fabulous update.,..d way u described d fight scenes plus abhaya romantic moments were awsum...😳and i am sure abhay will surely cum back may be as punarjanam...😆
chap 3
Present
Pia:Agn God is in pain I guess 2 c me unhappy...
Thn a wind blew flying her hairs away.As if wind was here 2 whisper something in her ears.Something very important but wht?
Haseena:Pia b ready v have 2 leave 4 Dehradun.
Pia:Ya mom but is it important 2 go there.Tht place reminds me of Abhay.It hurts
Haseena:But v have 2 go bacha.Come on I m wid u na.Nothing will happen.U have 2 face this.
Pia:Hmm
Pia staring at moon talking 2 her Abhay
It's been 18 years Abhay & I m still waiting 4 u.I dont know wht Dehradun has stored 4 me but I have 2 face it.Misha specially invited me.Ya now Dobriyal know abt us & they accepted us.Tht night was so troublesome.The news of vampire vs warewolf was spread lke fire.Although v were able 2 convince tht its jst a rumour.But hiding frm my family was impossible finally v gave up.And now agn I m going 2 same Dehradun which gave me everything & thn snatched away everything evn my soul & i.e. 'U'
Khanna's House(Dehradun)
Khanna's house was decorated wid flowers,lights.It was luking lke palace.Being one of the richest ppl in town they had organised a lavish party .Mrs.Radhika Khanna was shouting on her servants. She wnted a perfect & well organized party after all her only son was coming frm London after completing his studies. He will finally live wid thm & will celebrate his 18th birthday wid thm 'Abhi Khanna'.
'Tashi' shouted Mrs Khanna come v have 2 receive ur bro frm airport. 'Yes Mom' replied Tashi.Tashi was a wild chick wid & her bindass attitude was her attribute.
Tashi got ready came downstair:Mom jaldi chalo I really wnt 2 meet bro.
Mrs.Khanna: Wait abi time hai.Remember Abhi ko pta nahi chahlna chahiye abt his surprise b'day party
Tashi:Yes mom.I will keep tht a secret.Tomorrow on his 18th b'day v'll surprise him
Mr Vikram khanna:Oh ladies chalo.V have 2 pick our man
Tashi:Dad I m already ready. Ask ur wife.She will take time 2 get ready
Mr.Khanna: I m tolerating her for 19 years haha
Mrs khanna: Ya ya udda lo mera mazaak whn my son will come thn I'll c u both.
Grandma: Abhi chalo my bacha must b waiting 4 us.Kyun mere ladle ko dhoop mai bithana chahti ho.
Whole family: yes ma'am
They parted 4 airport.
Airport(Dehradun)
Raichands family finally arrived in Dehradun after 18 long years.Haseena & Pia were staring at everything wid mist eyes. On other hand Abhi flight also landed.He was coming frm other side & Pia frm other.Both were walking 2wards each other.Both were busy on their phone.
Abhi:Ya mom I m here in airport.Where r u guys?
Mrs khanna: Son v r jst on our way.
Abhi: Mom wht was the need 2 receive me.I could have come myself.
Mrs Khanna: Come on Abhi u r coming 2 dehradun 4 1st time
Abhi : Ya ,ya I know
On other hand Pia was talking 2 mish
Pia: Mish now don't eat my head.C I m here
Misha: Hey shuld I come 2 receive u
Pia: No need.Mom-dad r wid me.I'll reach home safely.
Misha: Oh I forget 2 tell u tht 2morrow v have 2 go 2 Khanna's party.Their son will celebrate his 18 th birthday & Khanna shifted Dehradun 2 years ago but their son had 2 complete his study & now he'll stay wid thm so they called us & evn Raichands
Pia: I don't wnt 2 come.Mom-Dad will come.U know I hate parties
Misha:Plz Pia move ahead in life.U have 2 come + their daughter tashi is my gud buddy.Plzzz plzz
Pia: Ok
Thn suddenly both of thm collide.Without luking at each other they said sorry.But after walking few steps they both felt an urge 2 luk at each other.After 18 years Pia's dead heart started beating.She felt the same toch.She luk behind 2 c him but he was moving & he too was feeling the same restlessness he too turned his back but she was luking somewhere else.Both tried so hard 2 c each other but all in vain
Misha: Pia Pia kho gayi phir se
Pia: oh sorry mish.Will talk 2 u later.
Abhi:Ohh hoo Mom.I missed u so much.Arey sexy bhi aayi hai(pointing his grand maa)
Grand ma: chup rey badmaash
Abhi: No seriously I haven't seen any woman as hot as u.
Tashi: shut bro
Abhi: evn motto is here
Tashi: U r jerk
Abhi: Thnx 4 the complimet.Waise r there hot chicks in dehradun
Tashi: U mean dumb
Abhi: No I mean hot
Tashi: Oh ur hot chicks r always dumb.Ur ex Gf was too much
Abhi: I know but she was a time pass.I hope here I'll find someone way 2 hot
Tashi: Whtever
Abhi(to himself): Girls Beaware Abhi is here.Abhi means fun.Chalo now I'll make dis boaring Dehradun rocking
CWB(He is compulsory in my FF.I m his fan LOL😆):Aag aur patange ko toh milna hi tha.Patange nai aakhir bula hi liya aag ko.AB 18 years ka intezaar kya rang layega.Kaisi hogi PKYEK
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