I have always loved most of it but if I get to do it my way... I'd re-write two scenes...
The First Hunt and The Almost-War with the Volturi.
The first hunt was a bit unbelievable! She is a new born... she couldn't have stopped just coz Edward asked her too and all she did was push him away. A bit of fight... Edward trying to keep her, etc... that wud have been my kinda thing!
And the finale... I'd have LOVED LOVED LOVED a lethal war with the Volturi and not that easy win... It was a bit disappointing that after introducing a dozen new chracters there was no bloodshed!😉 Some action...😍