New FF: Kismat Konnection:Ch.10 posted in Pg.25

Posted: 12 years ago
My Jaan
 
The flames climbed up the trees like it was a step ladder they grew and grew winding and wrapping their way around the forest. Tightening its grip, hot, sweaty. The unbearable heat grew upon the trees. There was no escape route. Suffering in pain. The forest shrieked silently green shrubbery burned to crisp. Khushi Kumari Gupta was stuck in this forest.
 
 

- Payal Di, that night. Was a nightmare for me. - I said.

- Khushi forget about that past. That was 6 years ago. - She said calming.

- 6 years ago is not a long time. It haunts me. I cant forget it. - I said lost.

- Khushi if you cant forget that night. You will never move on. - She answered.

- Payal please. If you were in my place you would understand. - I said angrily.

- Khushi calm down. You already have responsibilities. Go pick up Meethi. - she said.

Meethi my jaan. Meethi means everything for me. 6 years ago I thought I had no place to live. But after Meethi she was the world to me. The only reason I'm living is because of Meethi. 6 years ago I had lost everything. But Meethi gave me everything. She's only 5 years old. My sister, friend, girlfriend, mom, dad and daughter. She's very understanding. She can understand me.

At Meethi School:

5 minutes more and than Meethi will be out of school. This was my everyday time. I wake up early in the morning. Make breakfast and shower. Than it's Meethi time. I wake her up, feed her, shower her and do her hair. And she's off to school. Than I come to pick her up.

There I saw Meethi. Her pretty hazel eyes. Her black hair in a ponytail. And her backpack in her back. Meethi always stayed happy. She was never sad. She cant bare to see anyone sad. That's my little girl.

- Ma. I love you - she said hugging me tightly.

- I love you too Meethi. Come on lets go home - I said picking her up.

- Ma. Can we go eat out today. I have good news to tell you. - she told me happy.

- Good news? What good news Meethi? - I said thinking.

- It's something Ma. I'll tell you home - she said smiling.

At Home:

- Come on Meethi. You have to eat. - I said.

- Ma. I don't want saabzi and roti - she said whining.

- Meethi come on. I gave you pizza yesterday. - I said mad.

- No.No.No. I want PIZZA!!!! - she said angrily.

- Meethi don't show me this attitude. Or no chocolate for you. - I said in a tough voice.

- Chocolate! Okay ma. Only 1 roti for me. - she said happily.

- Naughty girl. Chocolate your agree with anything. - I said smiling.

- Ma. Can I have chocolate now. - she said quietly.

- Meethi! Finish you roti than. - I said feeding her.

- This will take forever. Give me a big piece. - she said demanding.

- Your going to choke after Meethi. Please listen to me. - I said.

- Okay Ma. Payal didi? - she said.

- She went shopping. - I told her.

- Shopping without me. But she always takes me. - She said.

- I thought you had good news to tell me. - I told her.

- Yes I do. Tomorrow is Parents Day. Can you tell papa to come back home. Please?? - she said sweetly.

To be continued...
Edited by sanjanaprincess - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Index:

For a Pm Please hit the like button. It would be easy for me to Pm you. Just hit the like button please.

Chapter 1 - Pg.1

Chapter 2 - Pg.2

Chapter 3 - Pg.3

Chapter 4 - Pg.5

Chapter 5 - Pg.9

Chapter 6 - Pg. 12

Chapter 7 - Pg.16

Edited by sanjanaprincess - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Sanjana,
Great start. I wonder who Meethi's Papa is..?
Looking forward to the next part, so update soon hun!!
๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by FebruaryFlower - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by FebruaryFlower


Hey Sanjana,
Great start. I wonder who Meethi's Papa is..?
Looking forward to the next part, so update soon hun!!
๐Ÿ˜Š

Hi. Thank you so much for this lovely feedback. Your find out Meethi Papa in the next chapter. No I think in the third chapter. I will update soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š

                                                P.S: Love your username =)
Edited by sanjanaprincess - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by sanjanaprincess - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
hii sanjana! 
That's an amazing start, I have a feeling Meethi's dad might be Shyaam๐Ÿ˜” 
but I'll hope for the best(Arnav!) hehe๐Ÿ˜›
Please continue soon & add me to your PM list! 

Priyanka <3
Edited by Prix3 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Sanjana, that was a cool beginning, I reall hope Meethi's dad is NOT Shyam but Arnav ( LOL, who woudln't๐Ÿ˜‰)

Anyways, update soon =)
Posted: 12 years ago
This is really intriging. Do continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Prix3


hii sanjana! 
That's an amazing start, I have a feeling Meethi's dad might be Shyaam๐Ÿ˜” 
but I'll hope for the best(Arnav!) hehe๐Ÿ˜›
Please continue soon & add me to your PM list! 

Priyanka <3

Hi Priyanka!

Thank you for liking it. To find out Meethi dad you will have to wait a while. I will continue soon ans sure I'll pm you.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by ..anisha..


Hey Sanjana, that was a cool beginning, I reall hope Meethi's dad is NOT Shyam but Arnav ( LOL, who woudln't๐Ÿ˜‰)

Anyways, update soon =)

Hi Anisha! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thanks for liking my beginning. Hehe. You have to keep reading to find out. I will update soon.

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