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niksidfan

@niksidfan

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

aww...all the ffs are sooo sweet...and one or two are sooo romantic☺️...i just love all of u for writing dese ffs...u all are just amazing...kya creativity hain tum logo main...😊🤗gr8...continue...plsss...sorry for the late reply..actually i was somewhat busy...

thnks to lucky,neetu and storytellerssbn...and neetu plss..dont reduce ur level of romanticism in ur ffs...abhi itni to banti hi hain hain...kya farak padta hain...yaha sab chalta hain😊..we all enjoy it

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

@storytellerSSBN

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: lucky.m

One more scene

phone conversation between dakshna

Daksh and naina are busy in respective offices.Daksh calls naina

Naina; Hello

Daksh; Hello,naina, mein

Naina(smiles), mein kaun?

Daksh; tumhara pati

Naina; pati? he he..lagat hain aapko kuch galat fhemi huyi hai, meri abhi tak shaadi nahi huyi

Daksh; woh bhi ho jayega aur bahut jaldi mrs daksh patwardhan ban javogi..thoda intezaar karo

Naina,; mein tho ussi pal ka intezaar mein apna jeevan bitha rahi hoon

Daksh; bas bas, inti filmi honi ki koi zaroorat nahi..kya kare ho?

luv this line

Naina; office mein koi kya karega? kaam kar raha hoon.kyu tum kuch aur kar rahe ho kya?😃

Daksh; haan,tum mujhe kaam ya kuch aur karne do tab na.Itna disturb kar rahi ho..itna ki kya batavu mera haal kya hain

Naina; acha, lagta hein hamari bahut yaad aa rahi he

Daksh; nahi, bilkul nahi

Naina;(angry) kya?? tho phone kyu kiya?

Daksh;Jaan, yaad unhe kiya jaata hain, jinhe bhool jate hain aur tum tho hamesha meri saath ho,😃

I think Naina had said this line or similar line tiayi and Daksh was present there, but love this line also so sweet.

Naina; aur wah, kaunsi film ka line hai. achi hai😃

Daksh; Film ki nahi meri hai, mere khud ka,

bas naina, bahut mazaq hogya, ab meri baat dyan se suno..aaj shyam ko hum bahar chalte hain, tho apna kaam jaldi khatam karo

Naina; lekin kaha?

Daksh; surprise hain aur tum mana nahi karsakti, mein tumhe ghar se pick up karta hoon

Naina; gahr se, lekin kya kahenge gahr walo se

Daksh; woh sab tum mujhpe choddho..acha ab mam ki izzazat ho tho kaam karne ki koshsis karu 😃

Naina;smiles; miss u daksh

Daksh; miss u too and love u..bye

Naina; bye

Baatein khatam hone ke baad, dono ek cute se smile dete hai, hamare liye

😃

It was so fun to read this, you have some gr8 lines, that suit our dakshna. I seriously can't stop smiling after I read these FFs, I luv them all. Can't wait 2 find out what the surprise is.

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

@storytellerSSBN

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

@ lucky, why didn't Naina say I luv u back to Daksh.

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

@storytellerSSBN

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

D: Main ne tumhareliye aur ek tofa layi hain

N: Do do tofe, waah, mein to bohot lucky hoon, yeh kehkar to tumne mera dil jeetliya. mujhe jaldi dekao.

or a romantic reply,

tumhe mere liye itne tofe lane ki koi zaroorat hai, mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhe kitna pyar karte ho. Mere liye tumhara pyar aur saath hi kaafi hain, mujhe tofe nahi chahiye

Funny reply:

Do tofe, matlab tumne aisa kuch kiya hai jisse tumhe bata hai ki main tumse naraz hojaungi

D: Nahi, maine aisa kuch nahi kiya jisse tum naraz hojao.

N: To pir tum mujhse kuch (aisa waisa) chahte ho, tumhari gift ki keemat chukane ke liye. tofe dene se mein tumpe zyada pyar nahi jatane wali, meri taraf se kuch aisa waisa umid mat karna, aisa kuch nahi honewala, mujhe tofe nahi chahiye, samjhe.

D: mein tumse kuch aise vaise umid nahi kar raha hoon

yeh kaisi logic hain, jise pyar karte hai, usse tofa denese hum aadmiyon pe shaq kiya jaata hain, mein ladkiyon ki/is soch ko kabhi samajne nahi wala or samajna bhi nahi chahta. Acha aaj ki baat me tumhare liye koi gift nahi lekar aunga par agar tumne yeh tofa nahi liya toh main tumse naraz hojaunga. Maine kya gift laye usse do dekho to zara, mujhe pata hain ki tum mera yeh tofa bohot pasand ayega aur tum ye samaj jaungi ki maine yeh gift k yun tumhare liya..

N: tik hain, tum itna kehrehe ho, toh me tofa dekh kar hi te karti hoon ki mein tumhari kabul karti hoon ki nahi. Jaldi dekhao.

D: Pehle aapni aankhein band karo

N: Zaroori hain kya?

D: Haa. Zyada romantic lagta hain.

N: my hero (sarcastic)

D:Tum kya ek bar, sirf ek baar behes kiya bina meri baat nahi maan sakti kya. maine kaha na aankhein bandh karo, toh bas apni aankhein bandh karo, jaldi

N: tik hain, tik hain, KP banne ki aur gussa hone ki koi zarrorat nahi hain. aankhein band kar rahi hoon.

Naina closes her eyes.

D: Haat aage karo

N: Loh (naina passes her hand and daksh gives her the bangles from kajrat)

D: ab aankhein kol sakti ho.

N: aankhein kolne ki permission ke liye, shukriya

naina opens her eyes and sees the bangles.

N: yeh to wahi bangles hain.

D: haa, jise tum karjat me pasand karke liye te, aur jab tumhari gari se accident huyi ti, woh tootgeye te. isi liye maine dobara tumhare liya karida ta.

Naina looks at daksh lovingly, with astonishment, realising how lucky she is to have daksh.

N: Tumne sahi kahata, mujhe bangles bohot pasand hain, par ye bangles mujhe aur bhi zyada ache lagenge agar tum apni haathon se mujhe pehnaoge toh. pehnao na.

D: Main, par mujhe chudiya pehna na nahi aata aur agar maine tum hurt kiya toh meh khud ko maaf nahi kar paunga/khud se jee nahi paunga.

N: Mujhe iski koi fikhar nahi hain kyun aur tumhe bhi iski bare mein nahi fikar karna chaahiye kyunki mujhe pata hai tum mujhe kabhi hurt hi nahi kar sakte, mujhe khudse zyada tumpe barosa hain.

D: tum sach mein aisa feel karti ho mere bare mein.

H: Haa, aab yeh bangles mujhe pehnao,

Naina holds out the bangles and her hand.

Daksh gently takes a hold of her hands and put the bangles on her one by one softly, to prolong the moment, each time looking into her eyes lovingly and she is too looking back into his eyes lovingly. until he puts the last bangle on her.

N: bolo, mujhpe bangles kaise lagrahe hain

D: mujhe to tumpe sab kuch acha lagta hain, tumhari pehenese yeh bangles aur khoobsurat bangaye, naa ki yeh bangles tumko aur khoobsurat banayi hain.

N: Mujhe to andaaza hi nahi ta, ki tum itni pyari pyari baatein karna jaante ho aur tum kitna romantic ho sakte ho.

D: Tumko dekh kar hi, main khud pe khud romantic banja ta hoon aur meri muh se yeh pyari pyari baatein bas nikal hi jaate hain

Naina smiles

N: Main hoon hi itni khoobsurat, ki saare ladkon pe meri jadoo chal jata hai, main yeh bata de ti hoon ki yeh pehli baar nahi hai joh kisi ladka ne mujhe yeh kaha hai.

D: Aur kisne kaha

main, tumse bohot pyar karti ho, daksh

D: Mujhse zyada nahi ... mera matlab ta, main tumse zyada pyar karta hoon, khud se nahi

N: Main jaanti hoon, tum kya kehna chahrehte.

and she hugs him and he hugs her back.

N: Mujhse kabhi dur nahi jaana, hamesha mera saath rehna agar tum mujhse duur geye toh mujhe bata nahi meh kya karungi. Mujhse vaada karo.

D: Main vaada karta hoon, tumse dur jaakar maine jeene ki koshish ki, par mein nahi jee paya tumhare bina. pir kabhi dur jaane ki koshish bhi nahi karunga. Hamesha tumhara saath raahunga, saat janmo tak mein tumhari peecha nahi chodunga.

N: aur kya, itni asani se mujhse chutkara nahi milega. saat kya, mein hazar janmo ke liye main tumse pyar karti rahungi. Main mar bi jaoona to bhoot bhanke tum ko haunt karungi.

D: khabardar jo tumne mere bina marne ki socha bhi

N: Tik hai, main aisa nahi sochungi. Meri pyar tumhare liye kabhi kam nahi hoga, sirf barti rahegi, har ek pal.

D: main bhi aisa feel karta hoon. mere bas me chalta toh mein ek pal ke liye mujhse dur nahi hone de ta

I have to finish later

Edited by storytellerSSBN - 12 years ago

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

@Lucky... too good yaar... was really fun reading ur dakshna's lines 😊...

@ storyteller... awesome... so sweet moments...i was actually imagining the whole scene while reading... 😃

Edited by DakshnaFan - 12 years ago

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Neethu

@ntsindia

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Oh... i was searching for this last day. You renamed it! anyways, Story teller's suggestion is good. This is more appropriate name I think.
Lucky, Storyteller, new ones are too good.
niksidfan, thanks!
I decided to stop watching SSBN until Dakshna unite. Till then, I will be happy with this FF. Friends, pls pls do continue ur FFs. I enjoy it. I am a little bit busy now. I will also try to write again.

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Neethu

@ntsindia

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Dakshna in picnic with Sushanth and Lekha
Assume, Daksh has not admitted to them that he is in love with Naina.

At a rocky seashore:
http://wikitravel.org/upload/shared/c/c9/Beypore_Stone_Pier.jpg

Sushanth and Daksh are in talks. As usual Sushanth is teasing Daksh. Daksh shows the annoyance but he smiles without showing Sushanth (intenally he is appreciating his teasing). In between the talks his eyes search for Naina and found Lekha and his Naina are standing on a rock.
Daksh warns them: Dono apna khayal rakhna... zyada aage mat jaavo... pathar slippy hogi (means rocks may be slippy)... lekha and Naina loook at Daksh and shake their head.
Daksh returns to their talk. After sometimes, Lekha comes with two ice-creams and daksh asks "Naina kaham hai?"
To make Daksh tension,
Lekha: voh... abhi tak yeha nahi ayi? jab mein ice-cream khareedne ke liye gayi to voh pathr mei khadi thi. .. kaham gayi?
Daksh gets concerned and runs near the rock and calls loudly... Naina?!!! He checks hear and there and not found Naina. Naina who was near ice-creamwala, hears his voice and runs to Daksh and finds Sushanth and Lekha.
Naina: Kya huva.. Daksh kaham hain?
Lekha shows a tension face and does not answer.
Naina gets concerned and runs to the seashore and starts to call Daksh. hearing her voice Daksh feels better and runs towards the voice heard. Seeing her Daksh grabs her and tells: meri jaan gayi... kaham dhi?
Naina: Oh... tum muje tension kar diya... mei ice-creamwale ke paas thi na?
They hug for a while... by then, Sushanth and Lekha start to laugh. Dakshna realise it was their trick...
Sushanth: Kya huva bhaayi... ? abhi bhi manta nahi tum usse pyar karte ho...?
Daksh and Naina look at each other.
Daksh: nahi... mein use pyar nahi kartha... (then looks at Naina and pulls her by grabing her shoulder and looks at Sushanth and Lekha with a proud smile) ... mei use bohot... bohot pyar kartha hooo...
naina smiles with shy...
Sushanth: Oh... acha?!!! hey bhagwan! kya kya keh diya tha.. us ladki se pyar...?!!! nevr ever.. mein use nfrat kartha hoo... ha ha ha...
Naina looks at Daksh with anger (acha aisa keh diya tha??!!!)
Daksh with tension with smile... Naina with angry walks away... Daksh tries to convince her...

Naina walks in front and Daksh goes behind her.
Daksh: Sorry Naina... us din muje pata nahi tha na... isliye...
Naina with a mischevious teasing smile.
Stops and turns towards Daksh with bold face.
Daksh holds his ears...: sorry...
Naina laughs at him and tells: tumhe ulloo banana kitna aasan hain.. Daksh in worried defeated face...
Naina: muje pata hain na tum pahle muje bilkul pasand nahi kartha tha..
Then comes closer to hm and says with sharp voice: aur muje yeh bhi pata hai ab tum muje kitna pyar karta hai.. (and hugs Daksh) I love you, Daksh!!!

Daksh with smile hugs her back...

Edited by ntsindia - 12 years ago

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

@storytellerSSBN

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Absolutely cute and funny, FF and the picture really set the scene, good idea, it was nyc to c sushant and lekha, miss them

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

@neetu

The pic U added made your FF even more interesting. cute one😛

This current track has spoiled my mind .I am finding hard to think dakshna sweet moments, but Now I have made up my mind will come up with some cute FF

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Neethu

@ntsindia

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@neetu

The pic U added made your FF even more interesting. cute one😛

This current track has spoiled my mind .I am finding hard to think dakshna sweet moments, but Now I have made up my mind will come up with some cute FF

It sounds you are too disappointed today! I am at the very bottom level of my patience and I stopped watching this bloody serial [it is turned to the typical pathethic, tragic one]. I hate such fantacy ones without having the smell of real life. I don't have any hope in this CVs that they will come on ground any more. Now I feel I am wrong that I expected this as a light hearted cute show. It lost its harmony...

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