My First FF- In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein-Pt25 @ Pg140 - Page 2

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by fazeel


oh saru complete frist ff wow
wisay seju when u posting ur ff yaar😛


you wont believe it but i typed half of it last night and i just have a few more lines to write so i will write them and then edit and then post so maybe by tomorrow it should be up 😆
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sejal719




you wont believe it but i typed half of it last night and i just have a few more lines to write so i will write them and then edit and then post so maybe by tomorrow it should be up 😆
wow seju i am waiting lol
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by fazeel


wow seju i am waiting lol


😆 will update asap :) lol
Posted: 12 years ago
oye... ull spamming here???
Posted: 12 years ago
Part 29

Akshara n Naitik are so happy thinking abt their baby... both r not able to sleep... Both turns to each other... and look into each others eyes...

Naitik: kya hua?? neend nahi aa rahi hai kya??

Akshara: hmm... khushi bhi hai dar bhi hai...

Naitik: akshara... is baar sab kuch acha hi hoga...  (he pats her hair)

Akshara: jab hamare ghar wale ko pata chale toh woh log bahut khush hojayegaa naa...

Naitik: haa subah hote hi hum unhe phone karte hai...

Akshara: naitik.. hamara toh abhi tak raat hai... lekin vaha subah ho chuke honge... hum abhi baat karte hai naa...

Naitik dails singhania's number... He gives the good news to all... All r very happy... and all r sad too as akshara is not der with them... Naitik talking to G3...

Naitik: maa... ab kithna din.. bas ek hafta... hum india aane wale hai...

G3: acha... bahut acha kiya tum ne... lekin beta... bahu ka do mahina chal raha hai... tum doctor se poochlena ki akshara uthni lambi safar kar sakti yaa nahi.. kyu ku pehla teen mahine bahut khyal rakhna hai...

Naitik: haa ma... mein zaroor doctor poochloonga...

G3: ek aur baat beta... bahu ko vaha khya; rakhne keliye koyi bhi nahi hai... mein aajau kya?

Naitik: maa... hum hi vaha aanewale hai na... ithne mein aap kyu pareshan ho rahi hai... hum doctor se suggestions leke ek or do hafte vaha aajeyenge... aur tab tak akshara ka khyal mein rakhoonga...

G3: munna... tu ofc bhi jaana hai naa..

Naitik: maa.. yaha is project ka kaam almost khatam ho chuke hai... mein ghar par hi rehta hu...

G3: theek hai beta... bahu se koyi bhi kaam nahi karwana... tum akela sambhalna mushkil toh hai... lekin tujhe hi sambhalna hoga beta... bahu ko aaram karni chahiye...

Naitik: maa mein aapki bahi se kuch bhi kaam nahi karne doonga... mein hi sab dekhta hu... aap chinta mat kariye...

Both keeps the phone...

Naitik: dekha... sab aapki khyal rakhne ka keh rahe hai... mere taraf koyi dekhta bhi nahi... 😛

Akshara: naitik... aap bhi naa... bache ki tarah sabka attention maangta rehta hai... vaise bhi aapka khyal rakhne keliye mein hu naa...😳

Naitik: haa... pehle apne aap ka khyal rakhiye... ab chaliye sojayiye...

Akshara: naitik... mujhe neend hi nahi aa rahe hai..

Naitik: lekin akshara aap samay se sona zaroori hai.. mein aapko sulata hu...

Akshara: kaise??😕

Naitik: pehle aap letiye...

He makes her to lay down on bed... he slowly soothes on her head...

Naitik: mein aapki maa ki tarah lohri toh nahi gaa sakta hu... lekin aapko sulane keliye ek kahani sunata hu... (he starts saying the story in a very low voice, so that akshara slowly gets into sleep)

Akshara slowly gets into sleep.. aftr some time naitik makes sure that akshara is slept and then he also sleeps... Its 6 in the morning... Both r in deep sleep... suddenly naitik remembers and wakes up...

Naitik: aaj se mein alert rehna chahiye... akshara ko kuch bhi kaam karne nahi doonga...

He goes into kitchen... makes some tea, keeps it in the flask and comes to their room... akshara is still sleeping... so he sits by her side and keeps looking at her... after some time akshara wakes up...

Naitik: good morning... 😃

Akshara: good morning... 😕.. aap ithni subah uth gaye??😲

Naitik: haa... mein papa banne wala hu... todi responsible hona chahiye naa... isiliye subah uthkar aapkeliye chai banaya... 😊

Akshara: naitik... uthni kya zaroorath thi... mein uthne ke mein banata hu na...

Naitik: nai nai... aap kuch nai karna hai... yeh meri order hai... aaj se naa sab kaam mein hi dekhloonga...

Akshara: khana bhi aap hi banate hai??😲

Naitik: haa... mein banaloonga... sab kuch mein hi karloonga... aap bas aaram karni hai...

Akshara: kyu mujhe aap ithni saza de rahe hai??

Naitik: saza???😕 kya saza??😲

Akshara: mujhe aapke haath banaya hua khana khani hai na... yeh toh saza hi hai na... 😛

Naitik: akshara... 😡 meri khana uthna bhi bura nahi hota hai... aap ek baar picnic mein khayi thi na... tab keh rahi thi ki acha hai...

Akshara: haa baba... mein mazak kar rahi thi... aap acha khana banate hai... ab naraz mat hoyiye... mujhe naa abhi bahut bhook lagi hai...

Naitik: mein abhi naashta banata hu... batayiye aap kya khayenge??

Akshara: mujhe naa kuch khatta... kuch theeka... acha chodiyee.. aapko jo acha aata hai... woh banayiye... mujhe toh bhook lagi hai...

Naitik: theek hai... aap thoda fresh hojayiye... tab tak mein kuch banaloonga...

Naitik comes down and quickly browses in the internet about some curries and takes the recipe... he quickly starts making roti's on one side and cooking aalu curry on the other side... he add tamarind and mirchi to the curry to make katha and theeka as akshara asked... akshara comes down aftr an hour... Naitik is also almost done with his cooking.. Naitik makes akshara to sit in a chair... n then feeds her with the roti n curry he prepared...

Akshara: woww yummyy... naitik yeh bahut acha hai... thoda katha aur thoda theeka... yeh toh meri man pasand khana ban gaya...

Naitik: haa... ab is halath me na aap aise hi aapka jo man kare woh khana khana chahiye... isliye aapko jo bhi khane ka man kar raha hai, mujhe batiyiye aur mein banaunga... (naitik also eats while feeding akshara)

Akshara: yeh sab banate rahe toh aap kab ofc jayoge??

Naitik: askhara... aapko pata hai na.. yaha ka kaam almost khatam ho chuke hai... sirf baaki jewellery delivery toh karni hai... iskeliye mein ofc jaana zaroori nahi hai... mein yaha se woh kaam dekh sakta hu...

Akshara: acha... ab aap bhi fresh hokar aajayiye... tab tak mein ghar ka saaf safayi ka kaam dekhleta hu...

Naitik: kya??? aap karenge?? nai nai... mein aapko khana hi nahi banaya diya.. kya mein aapko ghar ka kaam karne doonga??? nai nai.. bilkul nai... sara kaam mein hi karta hu... aap dekhte rahiye... aur bas aaram kariye...

Akshara: kya?? aap ghar ka kaam bhi karlenge??😲 aap se nahi hoga naitik...

Naitik: kyu nahi hoga??? pehli baar toh zaroor hai lekin mein ache se karne ki khoshish karoonga...

Akshara: lekin naitik, mein karoongi naa... kyu aap... (Naitik stops and lifts akshara to take her to their room... he is climbing the steps...)

Naitik: akshara aap kuch mat kahiye... aap bas aaram kariye... ek hi hafte ko baat hai... uske baad hum india chale jayenge... aur vaha aapka khyal rakhne keliye sab log hai... tab tak mujhe aapka khyal rakhne ka mouka dedijiye...

He makes akshara to sleep for some more time... he takes very care of her so that she will be happy and then he doesn't allow her to do a single work... 2 days goes on like this... their jewellery comes frm india and naitik delivers them to the client... n then he decided to go back india as soon as possible... so both visits doctor to take her suggestion as akshara will be traveling for 8 to 10 hours...

To their shock doctor suggests akshara not to have any long journey as she has to be very more careful during the first three months.. so the doctor says them to wait till akshara completes 3 months... naksh r disappointed with this as there is still 40 days more to complete three months... Naitik informs this to G3... all the remaining family members are also disappointed with this...

Naitik and akshara comes home...

Naitik: hum yaha aur ek mahina rukhna hai... acha hai na.. mein aapke paas hi rehne ka mouka mil gaya... 😃

Akshara: kya mouka naitik... mujhe bore ho raha hai... mujhe kaam bhi nahi karne dete hai... kamre me aaram kar karke tag gayi hu...

Naitik: akshara... humara bacha keliye aap aaram karni chahiye ...

Akshara: hmm..

Naitik: aap todi dher aaram karlijiye... mein ghar ka kaam khatam karke aajata hu...

Akshara: kya naitik... jab dekho kaam kaam kaam... 😡.. kamre mein akeli reh rehkar mein tag chuki hu... aapko mere liye thoda vakth bhi nahi hai...

Naitik: akshara... kaam bhi zaroori hai na... do minute aajaunga...

Akshara: 😆😆

Naitik: kyu has rahi hai??😕

Akshara: yeh dialogue kahi suni... 😉






Edited by saru.g - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sejal719




you wont believe it but i typed half of it last night and i just have a few more lines to write so i will write them and then edit and then post so maybe by tomorrow it should be up 😆
this time u are going to update the part within one week...😛superb...👏
Posted: 12 years ago
di u have completed ur first thread superb...🥳congrats di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!all parts in ur first thread are amazing...😃waiting for the first part of ur new thread...😍and i am very much sure this thread also going to be rocking like ur first thread...😛because u are tfantastic...🤗plzz update the part soon...😊 love u a lot u are too gud...😃 Edited by shweta31 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
My heartly congrats 4 d 2nd thread saru di this is 4 u di 🤗 u gave us a wonderful ff.now eagerly w8ing 4 d cricket match.i think ur nxt part will b on page-8.
Posted: 12 years ago
edited my comment on page 1



and i hope you come online soon so we can talk ;p hehehe

Posted: 12 years ago
hai saru🤗
congratulations for ur second threat🥳i am very happy for u write ur next part soon tc 
LVU,
Rachana
Edited by Rachana_naksh_ - 12 years ago

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