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awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...

That was a wonderful start mady...!!!
they both hate each other...but why...???
looking forward for the story to unfold...!!
plz do update soon dear..!!
loved the update a lot..!! 😛 😳

Lovely start. They shared a beautiful life. In times of celerabations , may it b a funeral or a wedding, parted souls always come back together.
I c alot of potential in the ss. No matter how much hatred maan wants to show, he can't hide from his ownself. Whn geet was floored, despite all the ill feelings towards her, he did carry her in his arms :)
u r good at writing death scenes. If tears is what satisfies u then u have the whole hotel to kill and a near death experience for maaneet should b fun to write.

wow maddy...

welcome back maanddy...

Awesome start
Thanx for the PM

Mehaaa 🤗

great start.!!! many things to reveal . I'd want to read what are their  feelings and how they'd come out of the situation that you have put them in and will this situation change them as humans that they are now!! 

I am more than sure, there was A THIRD PARTY involved who created differences between Maaneet...If you insist on killing someone, I suggest him/her...😉