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Posted: 12 years ago
This looks interesting but where is Arnav? I want to see him soon ๐Ÿ˜›

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Posted: 12 years ago
A very interesting start darling!!
Yeh Shyam to har jagah ek hi kaam karta hai...gadhha!!
Really want Arnav to make a hero types entry and sort out this ass of a man, aka Shyam!!
I look forward to reading how the story will unfold!!
Thanks for the PM hun...๐Ÿ˜Š
 
Zeba
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Posted: 12 years ago
its amazing!!
plz pm me when you update thanks! tht 2 timing dummy. i hate this Shyam
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing start
this is really different...khushi and shyam face off? i can't wait for that
where is arnav
and please pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part.very beautifully written.
loved how u wrote her dilemma
Raunika
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Posted: 12 years ago
was listening to this number and your FF came to my mind .. thought id share ... its very apt on Khushi and Shyam ...

Last Christmas, I gave you my heart
But the very next day you gave it away

this year to save me from tears
ill give it to someone special ...

Once bitten and twice shy
I keep my distance but you still catch my eye
Tell me baby do you recognise me?
Well it's been a year, it doesn't surprise me

I wrapped it up and sent it
With a note saying "I Love You" I meant it
Now I know what a fool I've been
But if you kissed me now I know you'd fool me again

A crowded room, friends with tired eyes
I'm hiding from you and your soul of ice
My God I thought you were someone to rely on
Me? I guess I was a shoulder to cry on
A face on a lover with a fire in his heart
A man undercover but you tore me apart
Oooh Oooh
Now I've found a real love you'll never fool me again

A face on a lover with a fire in his heart
A man undercover but you tore me apart
Next yearI'll give it to someone, 
I'll give it to someone special
special
someone
someone
I'll give it to someone,
I'll give it to someone special
who'll give me something in return
I'll give it to someone
hold my heart and watch it burn
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone special
I've got you here to stay
I can love you for a day
I thought you were someone special
gave you my heart
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone
last christmas I gave you my heart
you gave it away
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone 

Edited by JalebiBai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: JalebiBai

was listening to this number and your FF came to my mind .. thought id share ... its very apt!!!


Last Christmas, I gave you my heart
But the very next day you gave it away

this year to save me from tears
ill give it to someone special ...

Once bitten and twice shy
I keep my distance but you still catch my eye
Tell me baby do you recognise me?
Well it's been a year, it doesn't surprise me

I wrapped it up and sent it
With a note saying "I Love You" I meant it
Now I know what a fool I've been
But if you kissed me now I know you'd fool me again

A crowded room, friends with tired eyes
I'm hiding from you and your soul of ice
My God I thought you were someone to rely on
Me? I guess I was a shoulder to cry on
A face on a lover with a fire in his heart
A man undercover but you tore me apart
Oooh Oooh
Now I've found a real love you'll never fool me again

A face on a lover with a fire in his heart
A man undercover but you tore me apart
Next yearI'll give it to someone, 
I'll give it to someone special
special
someone
someone
I'll give it to someone,
I'll give it to someone special
who'll give me something in return
I'll give it to someone
hold my heart and watch it burn
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone special
I've got you here to stay
I can love you for a day
I thought you were someone special
gave you my heart
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone
last christmas I gave you my heart
you gave it away
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone 


Awesome!
Thanks for sharing๐Ÿค—
Well I was thinking to introduce a song in the next chapter!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
well then i read your mind and wrote this bit for you then ๐Ÿ˜‰... i was listening to this song in the morning and i had this feeling of deja vu.. and i realised, it was apt on ur FF.. well, i must applaud your style of story telling, it was so relate able !!
would love to know which song you will pick !!๐Ÿ˜โ˜บ๏ธ

Originally posted by: murphy369


Awesome!
Thanks for sharing๐Ÿค—
Well I was thinking to introduce a song in the next chapter!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by JalebiBai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Edit!
Edited by -Murphy369- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update!โค๏ธ
continue soon