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Posted: 12 years ago
 @bhavna dii... SO SORRY... I EDITED MY POST...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great job.AWESOME.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
πŸ‘U jst got a picture of our duo's frndship.CongratsπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ
Edited by reshmaramesh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: PARO..16

Second poem-Missing Report

After being not able to that SMILE everywhere..
I went to Police Station and filed my Report there..

'Officer,Officer!' I called out,
Officer came out asking "Wats dis Noise all about?"

I requested him Sir,I want to file a missing Report..
I Have tried to find it wd all afforts..

He asked me What exactly is Missing?a Thing or a person??
I said its a Smile,that lost without any Reason..

At first he thought i am Mad as i was jumping like a tribe,
Then putting his thought apart,he asked me to describe..

I said that smile is pure,gentle and comes directly frm his Heart,
and noone can describe it even the Scholer of Art..

The smile used to come when he did Naughty deeds,
That smile used to come when he Shyed..

After loosing that Smile in thin Air..
He is Incomplete which is not fair..

I said it is Daya Sir's Cute Smile and started Day Dreaming there..
He said 'Ahem,Ahem! Do u know it must have lost where?

I said i dont know Sir and Started Crying there,
He Called his Officers and odered them to find that Smile Everywhere...

I said Sir please find it at any Cost or rather,
Many Hearts around the World will Surely Shatter..!!

He said that he will find Where the Smile has lost,
And give it back to Daya sir at any cost..

Still Waiting for the Day wen he would find that thing,
Smiles on Many faces that thing will Rurely bring..!!

Edited by Naomi. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Candy...

At Firstly ...


your Poems are...


So that...




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Posted: 12 years ago
@paro:hey Friendship poem superb...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Heart touching❀️
Reallly i luved it
@Naomi:thanks for ur PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
@paro:shall i keep this line in my IF dashboard
"That friendship that taught us the meaning of a friend,
But now it looks like going out of the hand.."
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow candy.. U r a gr8 poet yar... Hw beautifully u hv written both d poems... I m speachles..
I M SURE, IF DAYA SIR READS UR POEM, HE'LL DEFINITELY GIVE A VERY SWEET SMILE... 😊
Gr8 job sweedyy... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Keep it up dear.. πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Candy dear
u done A
 
 
 
 
 
 
its relly true that DAYA sirs smile is missing
 
true discription of smile
 
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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
 
 
Posted: 12 years ago



Candy ur both poems are too good

Keep it up dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all 
for ur own thread

well done ur poems are awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
just loved them 
keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ