!! My Creative Corner !!(new poem @ pg 6) - Page 4

Edited by dayakhtar - 12 years ago

hey DADA...😊Edited by dayakhtar - 12 years ago

Hey DA..
posts Reserved??
Why???
Is there a party??

@DA..
What Can I say..
I am totally Speachless..
Ur feedbacks are bigger then any of my Creation..
thanku..

And By the Way,
I am pure VEGETARIAN..
Cant eat the KFC treat given by u.. 😭

m sorry... DADAn CANDY DEAR...i failed 2 fulfil ur xpectations...

Hey Guys!!!

After long..I m back with my new poem..😃
Its my first attempt with Hindi😳

this poem is dedicated to my School friends n Also some IFians who left/didnt get time to come @ IF..
just wanna say.."I miss you guys"!!!!

Again a Big thank to Dada for supporting me..🤗
N thanks to Vis di for opening this thread again🤗

Hope you guys like itt!!!!Edited by ..Candy.. - 10 years ago

Wo lamhe..

.Aaj yaad aayi kuch lamho ki..
Toh socha tumse baat karu..
Kuch baat sunu main tumhari bhi..
kuch tumse apni baat kahu.


Yaado ke gehre samandar me se,
Ye lamha achanak mil gaya..
Jeekar fir in lamho ko..
Murjhaya chehra mera khil gaya.


Ye yaade hai unn lamho ki,
Jin lamho me hum sath rahe..
The Din kuch kehne kuch sunne ke..
Sath dosti ke pyare ehsas rahe.


Milte the hum roz tab,
Bin mile ek din bhi bhari padhta tha..
Kabhi na khatm hone wali baate thi..
Masti ka sansar sath hota tha..


Har pal hum ladhte jhagadte the,
Par dur kabhi na hote the..
Fikar na thi iss duniya ki.
Bas dost k gusse se dar jaya karte the.

Kho gaye ab sab duniya me apni,
Bichad gaye ab sare yar..
Hasrat ek hi hai Dil me ab..
Laut aye wo pal bas ek baar



Kash hume mil jaye dobara,
Wahi dost,wahi tension free sham..
Likh denge har pal apna..
Iss dosti aur apne yaaro ke naam..



Aaj yaad aayi kuch lamho ki,
Toh socha tmse baat kru.
.Kuch baat sunu main tumhari bhi..
Kuch tumse apni baat kahu❤️Edited by ..Candy.. - 10 years ago